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    My Savior- Chapter 16

    Story written on July 29, 2009 by smexysharmen.
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    Complication

     

    Helena: Bit angry today too aren’t we. Fight with Carmen?

     

    Shane: I don’t want to talk about it.

     

    Helena: The nurse will fix your hand up for you. Please I beg you don’t get an infection. Your body is too weak right now. You can’t fend off the common cold.

     

    Shane turned her head away out the window looking at the puffy white clouds thinking about those pictures. Carmen looked so happy. That girl had her hand over Carmen’s. They laughed whole-heartedly. Those light touches of the skin. She didn’t even notice when the nurse was finished bandaging her up. She was getting use to the nauseous feeling. She’d usually feel dizzy, throw up some food and feel better after that. Today she just felt plain bad. Right before she was supposed to leave the nurse took her temperature. The pretty nurse had a grave look on her face.

     

    Nurse: Stay here for one sec, I’m going to get the doctor.

     

    Helena was in her office with Carmen when the nurse hurried in.

     

    Nurse: I’m sorry to interrupt, but Shane’s running a fever.

     

    Helena was next to the nurse in three strides. She took the thermometer from her and looked at the reading. 103.6 degrees.

     

    Helena: Move her to a fully sterilized room. Anyone going in there has to put on the gowns and everything. Put her on some antibiotics while you’re at it. She’s not going home tonight.

     

    Carmen: What’s wrong with her? Why does she need all that?

     

    Helena: Usually patients die from these infections. Shane could easily get anything anywhere and react like that.


    Helena snapped her fingers. The nurse was already running out the door to get everything ready. A group of nurses got Shane strapped down to the hospital bed.

     

    Shane: Let me go! Helena! Let me go!

     

    For someone who was gravely ill she had a very loud voice. They moved her into the sterilized room and put her on the necessary antibiotics. They took some blood to run tests and see if anything else could be done. Helena and Carmen walked behind the plastic veils that separated Shane from them. Carmen looked at the pale and sweating Shane who had been strapped down. She was struggling as best she could. The heart monitor was beeping fast.

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    1. For a detective , I don’t understand Shane, Jaffe is around why not talk to her colleagues? and also to Carmen, after all she is in danger too? Shane can’t protect her she is ill. If she loves Carmen that much she will make Bette and Tina aware of the problem. Hiding things don’t solve them. Just hope Shane will be more open and logical tho. PPVS

    2. Smexy, glad ur mum had a good b’day – can’t go wrong with spicy crab! I Agree with Mariam – Shane needs to share this info with everyone. With what Carmen & Shane have been through they should be able to communicate about these issues – I feel like hunting down Jaffy and stoping the bitch myself to help Shane get better faster so she can get back to her normal self. Just get them to talk to each other and talk to the gang. Bette, Tina, Dana, Bobby and Tidwell need to work together to get Jaffy – may have to use Carmen as bait! Would love to see some action on getting Jaffy and some intimacy between Sharmen and some pillow talk between the two about their future. As always love your work Ms Virgo!!!

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