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My Shane Chapter 6
Suddenly I heard a muffled groan. I saw in thriller movies that these are generally traps set by bad guys. So I slowly entered the room and found a baseball/softball bat. I took it up and followed where the groan was coming from. I was led toward the walk-in closet. As I entered the dark closet I saw something move and before anything else could happen, BAM !!! I hit the moving object hard with all my strength. I finally switched on the light and GASPED!!!
Well fuck the thriller movies….the hidden bad guy that I soo proudly and confidently hit was Ms. Shane McCutcheon.
I suppose this is her "room". It has all her books on my side. A single bed mattress covered with a white plastic trashbag which is red with blood and is getting even redder from the new flow of blood from the new blow that she received in her head. There is a pile of clothes on the other corner. And a pillow I guess that’s what it is! Its basically a bunch of rags wrapped in a plastic bag that held Shane’s head. Shane’s not even looking at me…and she keeps begging….
Shane: "Please don’t hit me..I swear those stuff are not mine….Cherie wanted it…I don’t know why she said I’d pay, Please let me go!"
And hearing that my Heart broke into pieces. Somehow it made sense to me…it seems like Cherie set her up for buying drugs or something around those lines. This is evil and disgusting.
I felt my eyes tearing up. I cannot believe I hurt her….I don’t know what to do! She won’t even face me…SO I just call her name.
Carmen: "Shane?" she jerks up….and turns at me…
Shane: "What are you doing here? Please don’t call the police….Please don’t please……….."
She tried to reach out for me but passed out. I decide that its best to not call the police because that would only Shane into more trouble. I decided that I should rather try to clean up Shane a little bit….I bend down and touch her shoulder and she jerks up….probably because of a bruise..
Carmen: "oh my god….sorry sorry"
I cannot resist my tears seeing Shane like this….I can’t do this…..I run out of the room…and out of the house..
Tbc
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So Carmen goes into someone else’s house, picks up a bat, and hits a person who was already in the house? What the hell, Carmen?! And she just leaves her there? Grr, I’m just pissed about the way Shane is being treated. Why would anyone do that to her? Those Jaffes are bastards. I hope they burn in a fiery car crash. Why doesn’t Shane get out of there? I doubt child services would be okay with the way she’s being treated.