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Never Been Kissed – A Tibette Story – MyStyle ;) ~Chapter 13~
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‘I see. Come in then, and close the door behind you.’
‘Ok..’
*Maybe I should keep the door open….for witnesses. Come on, stop being silly.*
As she made herself comfortable in the seat opposite him, she noted how he watched her every move. He leaned back. His face creased as though he were in deep thought.
‘So…’ he started. ‘Did you get the message I left you?’
‘I did yes. Well, I got it when I came back though..’
‘Yes…I figured that. Also through the lack of footage I saw. Why did you only turn the camera on for the game?’
‘I ugh…I guess I just forgot to turn it back on after we got changed…’
‘Is that right…’ he replied, his cold stare was starting to make Tina even more uneasy.
‘Yea. I….I’m sorry…’
Breaking the gaze, he stood up, hands in his pockets as he turned and looked out of the large windows. Tina watched him, trying to pluck up the courage to tell him.
‘Ugh, Max? There’s something I need to tell you…’
She looked at him….he never flinched…never told her to continue, nor to stop.
*Come on, do it..*
‘On Tuesday…I…I told Bette. I told her the truth…’
A few moments passed, then Max lowered his head. Tina was holding her breath. She needed him to speak. She couldn’t stand the silence.
But still it continued…
Eventually he lifted his head and turned around.
‘You told her? You told her you’re undercover?’
She swallowed the lump in her throat. Her mouth felt like sandpaper.
‘Yes…’
He walked forward. His jaw was clenched and his eye’s narrow.
‘I don’t believe it’ he said ‘I just can’t fucking believe you could do this. Do you realise you’ve just fucked up the whole operation…’
‘No Max….she wont say anything..’
‘Oh come on Tina. Of course she will! All it takes is a slip of the tongue to the wrong person and that’s it. I mean her friend is that Alice woman from the radio. THE RADIO!!’ he shouted.
‘But Max..’
‘NO!’ he shouted again. ‘I should have guessed this would happen! I should have pulled the plug on this a long time ago. You got too close…you and your feelings. I hoped professionalism would capitalise but obviously you are too inexperienced to do that. Do you realise how much fucking time and money has been wasted. Not to mention the loss of my job as well as yours…’
Tina looked at him, both with upset and confusion.
*His job?*
Max sat in his chair, his head in his hands.
‘Max….there’s still time to find a story…’
‘TINA! Give it up. You lost the only story you were ever able to do….just get out….’
‘Max…’
‘OUTTTTT!’ he yelled, pointing to the door.
With that, Tina jumped to her feet and made for the door. Once safely out in the hall the tears began to flow.
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I just woke up on a friday morning at my place… and look what I found ;) I haven’t read it yet… if I do… I’m gonna be so late to work… will read it again when I’m back from work :D Thanks for posting.
Indeed, thank you so much for posting, Kelloggs. Well, I must confess I’m a little too exhausted right now to write a proper comment or at least to be eloquent enough to “pay tribute” to your tremendous talent as it is an ungodly hour for me, but I needed to say that I hope you’re not seriously considering ending this story so soon… Pleeaaase, will you find a way to continue it for a few more chapters ? You know, I think you don’t have to stick to the original story at this point, huh ? ( wink ) LOL !!! Anyway, I’m sure B & T can together come up with a fabulous idea for a great article for Tina to write, can’t they ? Hopefully, I’ll comment on this further tomorrow ( well, in a few hours that is ) when I am in a better state. Thanks again for your amazing creativity and your delightful writing style.
BTW, did I mention I loved this story ? I guess that goes without saying…
Still trying to catch my breath here. Wow, that was amazing, I don’t know how Tina had the energy to go to work. Max, well he’s an asshole. I’m sure between Bette and Tina they will come up with something. I’m glad she told him, cos now its out in the open.
Wow. Max is a dick. Yeah, she is human, she developed feelings. She didn’t blow the story unless his whole intention was to send a person undercover to seduce a teacher. He is acting like she just blew a million dollar FBI mob investigation. I hope Tina can find solace in Bette.. if Max can’t see that finding happiness for someone who used to be as lonely as Tina is worth more than a grunt job than he is messed up.
…I think I came.
Oh and I think the undercover story was pretty much a bullshit operation. Unless you’re a NARC, what kind of dirt are you even going to find in a high school? National Honor Society kids cheating? Nah cheating reports have been done many times.
*smiles widely* Well, that was.. Brilliant. You were right, it was worth the wait. But, here it comes.. The weekly begging- Pleeeeease can you post sooner/longer? 8 pages is nowhere near enough to quench my kelloggs thirst! I am loving the interaction between Bette and Tina. So glad she told her the truth! Now they are happy together, yay! And don’t worry about the occasional mistake, it is a fabulous story. Having said that, should you ever want that proof-reader, I love what I have seen of your writing and I’d be more than willing (applies for future stories too) Thanks for making my friday! You always do. I’ve been ill recently and I feel momentarily uplifted :D Until next week.. ADx
I loved it! Think I got the release I’ve been searching for in the last few days. LOL This was totally HOT!!!
Hot! Max has every right to be upset. The fact remains is that Tina’s objective was too find a story as an undercover reporter. She has cost the newspaper time and money, so unless she can figure out a way to get a great story, she’s already fucked, in more ways than one! :) You made my thursday night perfect! Post soon!
Max is such an ass. There is still time for Tina to find a story he just wanted a scandle.
Max is such an asshole! I bet he has something up his sleave, i doubt that was the last we heard from him…Bette will get problems, right?!They are such a cute couple pls dont let them be punished…
Yeaaaahhhh !!! I SO love this story, and I’m so pleased (such an understatement ;-)) with this new post… Max has good reasons to be angry, if his job is at stake… but he should understand that making a “story” of Bette’s and Tina’s would go nowhere… either Tina would have said nothing… and it would be a frame-up, either she told the truth (which she did) and there is NO story… as for Tina, I think she could perhaps find a good story about the 3 bitches (who are still waiting for the payback…) : why can’t she (and Bette) find something about them, and expose it publicly in the Press (not the campus one, Tina’s paper) : that would be a solution for Tina… and a very good punishment for them… so, what do you think (I was hoping you to use that several posts ago… but I don’t know the movie, so I just follow you where you go…)…. and I second ClarisseStarling…. please, go on for more chapters… you CANNOT finish too soon… (this is not a 90mn movie, you can go as long as you wish… no studios to have you “make money” with it ;-))
Actually there are a number of stories that Tina can write about. One how one teacher was able to start a basketball team and be successful with it. The next how others preceive someone that is different and what happens when they have been outed. Mean girls who will do anything to make themselves look good to others. So many stories out there. I love how you have Bette and Tina making love. To me when two love each other they are making love and not f***ing. Even going at it hard is still making love to the one that you love. I very much enjoy your thought process with Bette and Tina and how they are starting out.
love your story thanks for posting pps
well i did read this at work and came back to leave you a comment… love this… and i know tina did the right thing… she should just turn back and tell max to fuck himself with his fake dick… lol… waiting for the next chapter…pps
awesome!!…umm wot can i say apart from what everyone else has said and what i havent already said to u b4?! Great stuff, roll on next chapter for more steamyness and backstabbings ;)
ROFLMAO @ Lamentamini’s first comment!!!!… Well K, I guess it’s her way to tell you that you’re definitely in the run for that “Cold shower” award next season!!!… About Max, I kind of agree with Smiley… I mean, I still think he’s an ass for wanting that story about Bette, and a scandal at all costs… And I also think that Tina was right all along to put her feelings first, especially since we’re talking life’s happiness here… But Max’s reaction about Tina’s blowing her cover is quite reasonnable, given the mission she was given (not that I’m unhappy she did!). Now, I’m not saying that it justifies her to be sacked, but I think that Tina was perfectly aware of the consequencies of her actions and that she was ready to assume them. So, basically what I’m saying is that even though Tina knew all along what she was doing and should take responsibility for her actions, she was soooo right to act on her instincts and feelings, and we sincerely hope that she, with the support of her beloved, will be able to find the perfect story to make it all better, for Max and the newspaper, for the school, for Kate and the team… But most importantly, for Bette and herself, coz at the end of the day, that’s all we care about really, don’t we…??? Oh, and by the way, is it time for the “L” word yet??? Thanks a lot, K! And aren’t we all happy and excited that you’re having some time off!!!
wow that was so sexy. these two are so hot for one another. our 17 year Tina grew up real quick, huh?!!! he he. I think Tina should write the truth. she met and fell in love with the love of her life while posing as a student. simple right? yeah right. great post. pps
absolutely luv this story, and what a great and very hot chapter, luved it!!!
Smoking action…Max always was a bastard and Jenny needs to get a life…PPS
god, Max is a total ass :/ hope everything works out for the best for Tina… and Bette… if you know what i mean ;) great story, keep up the good work :)
Wow… that was tensed… different kind of tensions throughout the story… hmm… ;) Poor Tina, she should just stay in bed with Bette whole day long. But… let’s just say sometimes life sucks when it comes to reality :( PPS and make everything better… I know Tina will have something to write on to save hers and max’s job… right right?
Damn B&T are hot and sweet. Poor Tina about her job!