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Never Say Never: Chp.10 Thank You
“Carmen, its ok. I know what you’re trying to do. And thank you I love you for doing this.”
“No , Shane. It was suppose to be perfect. I had everything ready.”
”Its ok I swear.” Shane saw that Carmen was about to tear up so
she slid over and put her arm round her and moved the hair out of her
face.
”How about I walk in and act like I never saw anything?” Shane began to suggest ideas.
“Its not the same.” After some time, Shane finally got Carmen to agree.
“Ok walk in. but act like you didn’t see anything in the first place.”
Shane nodded sincerely. She made her way out the door as Carmen began
to scramble around.
”OK come in!” Carmen yelled. Shane opened the door and looked
around for anything different. And there it was a small note by a
candle that caught her eye, among the sea of candles that lay about.
She opened it, and this time it read, “bathroom.” She approached the
door noticing that it was dim just like her bed room had been. She
opened it, finding a ***** Carmen in front of her, dressed in black
lingerie, with an almost see through robe. Carmen lightly took Shane’s
wrist and led her to the middle of the bathroom and began to undress
her. She started with her shirt getting close enough to Shane so that
they could kiss, teasingly pulling away, and making Shane want it more.
She let her girlfriend undress her but it was difficult to do without
having to kiss. She was helpless, and being taken advantage of, she
liked it. When Carmen had her the way she wanted, she finally placed a
soft but long kiss on Shane’s lips and when Shane tried to touch her,
she refused and lightly moved her hands away from her body. She kissed
Shane’s neck while dragging her hands through her hair. She closed her
eyes; she couldn’t believe this was happening and that she was feeling
this good. She began to hear water running, and soft steam that made
its way up to the ceiling. Carmen stepped back and undid her robe,
letting it fall into a pool on the floor. A bubble bath awaited them
and at the bottom of the tub, a bottle of wine and two glasses were
found. Carmen turned her back to Shane and moved her hair out of the
way from her back as to let Shane undo her bra. She moved her hands
slowly, letting the hooks loose and before she made a move to touch
Carmen, she noticed that she was still standing in that position.
Carmen turned her head to make eye contact with Shane, and in a way
have a conversation. She let her eyes fall down to her legs. Shane got
the idea and placed her hands on either side of Carmen’s underwear and
pulled them down. Making her way back up she placed a soft kiss on
Carmen’s lower back causing her to shut her eyes. Shane held her hand
as she made her way to the tub and placed both of her feet in one at a
time as Shane followed. She got Shane to sit down first so she could
straddle her waist. And all the while they did this, they never let
their eyes slip from one another’s not even in a moment. Carmen reached
to the side to grab the wine and poured out two glasses. Shane held out
her glass.
”To us.”
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Great as always but it didn´t really get to me this time. Everything happened so fast, maybe you should try to discribe more and get a few more dialoges in it.
I LOVED THIS UPDATE!! Your fic is really something I’m always looking forward to reading the update. You’re doing a phantastic job with it,it’s pure Sharmen.5 stars !!
grt update
I love this fic, ’tis great! I like your Sharmen in it! Great update!
Yeah i am with Bigprisc…i like your Sharmen too :) Post soon!.
Great! They had some chill time together. Post soon