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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 13 (lucky #13)

    Story written on August 5, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “And just for this moment, as long as you’re mine. I’ve lost all resistance and crossed some border line…”

    When Bette finally found her way home, her head was pounding from the intense cold. She had hoped that by clearing her head for a few hours she would have been able to decide on whether or not to take the part. As of right now that was still up in the air.

    The more Bette thought about it the more confused she became. Could she manage to reenact a part of her life that was so painful? Would it even be possible to work with Tina in a situation like that? Bette had no idea. What she did know was that, as much as she didn’t want to admit it, Tina’s writing was incredible. The way she had written the role of “Adeena” was superb and passing up that role, might mean passing up the chance of a lifetime. Bette made her way to the bed flopping down face first. She didn’t even waste time changing, all she wanted to do was sleep off this headache.

    When she heard her phone ringing she realized sleep might not be an option.

    Bette: Hello?

    Jackie: You sound like *****.

    Bette: Thanks, I feel like *****.

    Jackie: What the ***** were you thinking?

    Bette: Right now? Chicken soup and hot tea.

    Jackie: Don’t be a pain in my ***** Bette. I told you stay away from her. You know she’s trouble.

    Bette shook her head trying to get things into focus.

    Bette: Jackie, what are you talking about?

    Jackie: Tina.

    Bette: Oh, her.

    Jackie: Don’t ” oh, her” me Bette. I know you went to the audition and I know that you got the part!

    Bette: News travels fast around here huh?

    Jackie: That part was Daphne’s.

    Bette: What? Who?

    Jackie: I sent Daphne, one of my new clients on that audition because she would have been perfect.

    Bette: Oh you mean my look a like?

    Jackie: Bette, I just don’t know where your priorities lie anymore.

    Bette: My priorities, Jackie, are intact thank you very much. This play that Tina wrote is incredible and I want the part. I always take the easy parts. The one’s I know will do well and the shows that will run forever, but I want to take a risk. This is my chance and I’m talking it.

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    2. This story, I swear I’m an addict. I find myself checking how many pages there are before I start reading and then dreading clicking on the last one. If this were in novel format, my life would be on hold until the very last page. As it stands I’m just obsessive about checking this site every 20 minutes for updates…lol. As always…..I’m awaiting the next chapter!

    4. Alright flair, you are totally forgiven!! You’ve more than made up for the teasing with this chapter! Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!

    5. I have to win the lottery!!! That way I can pay you to just write this story all day and night!!! I am eating this story alive and I have to agree with Traci921…I hate clicking on the last page because I never want it to end!!! And lately, I have just been leaving this page up at work all day long and refreshing it so that I can read it as soon as it appears. Big thanks to you for all your hard work on this story. I so so so so much love it. Please post soon. I can hardly wait!!!

    6. i’m gonna hafta agree with traci i am completly obsessed!!!! i love it i love it lol post sooon cuz im leavin for italy and im gonna go insane without this story

    9. We as humans can make things so complicated. These two are trying to defy what has been predestined. Ofcourse Tina can sleep easily with just the mere contact with bette. We all yearn for acceptance…that one person that we don’t have to explain who we are to…they just know…they get it. There is a comfort that remains even if there is some tension between the two.

    14. Hey flair Bring it on WHOA! OMG! I Love it it’s getting better I guess I’m just so excited to read WHOA! Oh my come on one more time posted Please Beautiful as Always great written Thanks flair Please continue post SOON.

    16. Aww…poo, you’ve made me late for work! This story is such an emotional roller coaster…I need to seriously pull myself AWAY from your story. Great chapter…more?? No wait, I’ve gotta stop myself from reading your stories.

    20. I am such a sucker for B&T and true love. I’ve asked this before… but how am I going to stand missing my stories while at MICHFest for a week. Great update!!!

    21. I am such a sucker for B&T and true love. I’ve asked this before… but how am I going to stand missing my stories while at MICHFest for a week. Great update!!!

    22. Lemme guess…Now that you’ve got ’em where we want ’em, cuddled in bed together, you’re gonna have Bette breathe all her nasty germs in Tina’s face…Tina’s gonna get sick too…You’ll write them both into the hospital with pneumonia…they’ll suffer numerous setbacks to their health…the doctors will give them no hope of recovery…the final scene will show them in the same hospital room, in separate beds, hands reaching out to one another, all the while expressing their eternal love, admitting they both made mistakes, begging for the other’s forgiveness…And we’ll never get to see them have sex ever again. Is that it? Is that your sick, twisted, sadistic plot, Flair? Well, is it? Pull over. I’m gettin’ out. Sorry, just couldn’t control myself :) Can I get back in the car now?

    23. OMG..i´m so happy now..but i cant trust you cuzz i now this is not going to be so easy..but you gave me hope in this chapter.. Bette can fight fate i hope thing continue good at least more on chappy..lol..have i said youre amazing?you are…lol.. :o)

    24. Ahhhh…I’m as bad as Bette, just a sucker for that sweet blond. Really sweet, tender little exchange. Its good that Tina is taking the initiative and forcing them to interact. That way she can get through Bette’s weak defenses (I think this chapter showed how weak). Your Bette and Tina are so nice and good for one another when they are being kind to the other.

      Can I just ask one favor? It is so cliche and predictable to have them both wake up and hem and haw, and withdraw and build walls when they realize they slept in the same bed.

      Following these love story formulas, they shoud probably wake up and then Bette will be a bitch to Tina, tell her it was a mistake, tell her to get out…blah. You are so creative that it would be so lovely to see the morning’s sunshine bring some other reaction.Also resisting each other cuz they are working together is also so worn out.

      I have no doubt you will handle this well, ( haven’t been disappointed yet(well ok…the end of the first story disappointed me but that was a gutsy move from you. I do have every bit of confidence in you so I hope you don’t mind my humble requests.

      Bring the love baby..and the snark. You do that well through Alex and Alice also!!!

    26. sh*t,I’ve been used to click to the bottom “next post by this autor” and now I can’t. it’s killing me here! luckily I can still come back to the first part, but there’s not many chapters waiting there for me.

    27. Damn, whats up with that. Yo I would love to see Sara walk in early in the morning. Excellent post. That was sweet, thanks b/c i know thoes moments are going to be few and far betewwn.

    29. At first : thanks, Traci921 for confessing your addiction for our marvellous Flair’s drama fresco ! This way I’m feeling better knowing I’m not alone in the so-obsessive-about-checking-the-site-all-the-time-for-updates process… Comforting !
      However, I really think there’s a huge amount of poor addicted readers here. Welcome to Flair’s soooo haunting Dramaland, everybody !

      Don’t feel sorry (… but I bet you aren’t really, hmmm ?) for having teasing with us last time : for me, I LOVED that – even guessing the tease – and you can delightfully tease us this way each time you’d wish. Honest !

      Now about the question you asked in your lovely note – your curtain’s raising, I prefer to say – , OF COURSE you succeed. So stop to be flirtitious with us this way, hunting for loving comments ! (lol) We do love you and your story and you know that so well, charmer !

      Well, well, thank you Jackie for being such a total dead loss in matter of psychology ! You just exactly did what it was needed to force Bette’s decision so I adore you right now. Silly girl, thanks !

      Now, let’s talk about the main course & dessert at your menu : the realization of Bette’s former dream. God, dreams are such a delicious way to let go all our unconfessed wants…
      How cute to see our formerly Margo Channing-esque diva and her playwriter acting so shy, polite and vulnerable, like two blushing schoolgirls ! I especially loved how Bette hated herself for being so out of control, that’s a so realistic reaction – and no doubt we all knew it at least once.
      And how sweet was this partition of glances – including avoiding of glances ! – , scents, embarrassments, palpable nervosity, intoxicating emotions, uncomfortable (but so revealing) silences, smiles, “golden memories” and chills… I enjoyed this tender music a LOT, drama wizard… … and I give you a big wink and amused smile about the way you spoiled us with this funny mirror’s stuff ! That was one calls an apartment with view, hmmm ?
      And an ideal example of acte manqué too – but don’t repeat that to Bette, she would kill me !!

      By the way, what a perfect timing with the “amazing” word in Tina’s mouth here ! (lol) And her rambling medical advice was pretty interested, no ? (lol again !)
      Finally, I must say that, for me, all this scene was so much more erotic than a lot of NC-17 parts I read in this site. One could feel the almost unbearable physical tension here, in addition to the crazy hearts beats…
      Aww, god, how amazingly delicious was this chapter !!! You really spoiled us…

      Now of course, I’m not taken in by so much gentleness from my favorite torturer ! As Bette and Tina said here, it will also be “a long journey”, but I’ll “survive” too ! I’ll be there until the end of the play, waiting for the curtain – and already begging for encores !! No good deed goes unpunished, right ? (*wink*)

      When I said yesterday that each chapter of yours was a new jewel…
      … well, I mean it more than ever, dear author.
      Thousand thanks from your always faithful and passionate reader.

      P.S.: I wonder why but right now, I’d like a chicken soup very very much !

    33. you are the man. you are so not in trouble. i do have faith that youll know how to write this journey that we have all embarked on with you. that was beautiful, awesome, and funny in all the right places. your not asking for begging this tome around. so i wont. ill just ask like a grown up. please another one, thanks.

    34. FINALLY..
      You really put a smile on my face.. i can’t tell u how many times i cought my breath when while reading, once when Bette let Tina leave, i was like NOOOOO, but when she opened the door again asking her to get in i was like YES YES YES, and when Tina was about to leave again when she put Bette in bed, i was begging to read the next line and have Bette ask her to stay, and when she did i had this big goofy grin from ear to ear..fucking LOVE YOU FLAIR..

    36. This chapter was so sweet!!! Bordering on surreal kind of sweet =D
      I’m glad Tina is making the first move, I mean, after all it kind of IS up to her to show Bette… well, whatever she has to show Bette. And she’s been doing an amazing job at it. Go T!
      I just hope when they wake up it will be more like this again, you know, cute-awkward, not resentful-awkward.
      I love the “cute-awkwardness” of this chapter! =P

    39. awww, how sweet was that? I swear I could feel the excitement, the knot in the stomach, the butterflies…. everything myself!! Like I have already said before: your writing skills are awesome! Thanks Flair for the beautiful good night story, coz I just got home from a party and before I am crawling into my bed I had to check if you have posted a new chapter! NOW, i can truely find some much needed sleep! Thanks for the update and I wish you a great weekend! Enjoy life to the fullest and perhaps we (your fans, addicts… whatever you wanna call us) are lucky enough to find more updates over the weekend….;-))

    40. I don’t what is worse, as if you need to be influenced by sox collaborating and giving you ideas on how to heighten the drama…..you two should not talk…..or maybe you should??!! (*evil smile appears across face*)…..I have to admit that I love the drama!!
      Thanks for another great post Flair!!
      Question without notice: Would Tina take up an acting role if it was called for?

    41. Thank you sooo much. God this was a beautiful chap. I love it. Pls don’t disppoint me in the next and have them run away from each other. But let me tell you, you are going to in the right directions.

    47. So you can write loving and tender chapters as well, lol. Just teasing. I like the drama but the lovin is a nice change. I would like to think that this is a step in the right direction but with you who knows, Bette could be kicking Tina out of bed by morning. Love the story Flair please post another.

    49. Hey Flair. Just caught up. wow i am amazed at your talents. Your writing is great. congrats on the FanFic Award. You deserve it. Cant wait for the next chapter. Have you watched QAF?

    50. Now thats more like it! I was beginning to think you were some sort of masochist Flair. but you done good girl. I love that Bette is so vulnerable, but I worry for her. do u write professionally? bec u should be getting paid for your talent!

    51. Oh that was lovely!! I was so scared Alice was going to bring over the soup and they would end up pounding eachother–eww gross :P Love this TiBette 4ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    53. Ahhh I love you flair!!! Happy chapter yay!!!! I’m sure drama is ahead but reading this made my heart all warm. This chapter reminded me of Kissing Jessica Stein in a way but this is definately much much MUCH better. Did I say I love you? lol Ok well can’t wait for more :)

    54. i feel hope. and it feels good. thanx for the break from the tears. a chapter where people don’t cry is a chapter where i smile. love the chicken soup thing by the way, i think i’ll go make some! waiting for the next chapter. (why is it that after reading a chapter of your story i feel like an impatient little kid who can’t wait to go to disneyland?) oh god how i love it.

    56. Flair…quite the “popular” story you have going…I am enjoying it on so many levels…hoping it only one short day until your next post…

    60. Hey Flair, I’m one of those slow readers who goes to bed too late to see their show and so has to tape the episode and watch it the day after lol hope that metaphor wasn’t too crazy. Anyways, I didn’t know if you still read the comments a week after you’ve posted the story but I just wanted to let you know (in case you don’t read them) I am having an ABSOLUTE BALL reading your stuff!!! I just finished chap 10 with the flair for the dramatic comment which had me grinning from ear to ear. I had to tell you: superb!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! I believe the best type of writers are those who can do every type of emotive and heart-string-pulling move in every way and in every character possible. And I reckon you do that. I almost never stop smiling when reading your stories (unless of course they’re hot then i’m blushing! lol) Hats off to you Miss Flair. Anytime you need anything, you got it! I can be your personal assistant, if you wish =) lol Thank you once again.

    61. My mouth dropped open too when B asked T to stay overnight. I didn’t expect it at all….that was actually very nice of you!!!!! Usually you like to tease us so much that we wish something like this will happen and then you take it away. BUt that’s why we are all so addicted to your story. I don’t want to get my hopes up with these two, but you know we all want them back together. And I don’t want to wait too long….ok, I’m rambling too…I’m just a little speachless by your story…after every chapter something unexpected happens and even when I try to figure what it will be, you always seem to surprise me. Kiitos!

    62. I’ve been dying to read this, but everytime I got started something came up and I had to leave. The suspense was just killing me–it’s unusual for these stories to get under my skin the way that your’s has…I meant that in a good way! This chapter was so worth the wait and the outcome was better than I ever expected! Thanks for getting them together like that. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

    63. Hihi.. friends’ conspiracy to put them together. That’s neat. Yeah, they couldn’t stay away from each other, what can you do. They’ll just be thinking of each other while they’re with other people.. as hard as it is, i think they’ll get over it and be happy!

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