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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 44
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Avery waited at the floor of the spiral staircase for her friend to come back down. Glancing from side to side the strawberry blonde could not help but admire the art that graced the walls. Each painting as well placed as the next. Her eyes scanned the bottom of the bright blue canvas in front of her. She squinted and desperately tried to make out the artists signature.
Avery: Well of course “ B. Porter”. What a surprise.
Avery shook her head in amazement. The sound of a door slamming upstairs startled her and she spun to see Bette tearing down the steps.
Bette: We have to go now.
Bette grabbed her friend by the elbow and lead her out the front door. They were half way down the block when Avery managed to get Bette to slow down.
Avery: Bette stop!
Bette’s feet finally grinded to a halt.
Avery: What the hell happened up there?
Bette: Exactly what I planned to happen. I walked in. She screamed, I screamed, she cried, I fought not to cry and then I handed her the note and stormed out.
Avery: Jesus Bette, you need to breath for a minute.
Bette: I am breathing.
Her eyes widened and fixed on a disbelieving Avery.
Bette: What?
Avery: You are going through a really rough time right now and I think it’s best if you maybe take a minute and let it all sink in.
Bette: I am completely in control of my emotions. I don’t need to stop and give myself a hug. What I need is to get the hell away from that apartment.
Bette pointed back to where her old life used to live.
Avery: I’m only trying to help Bette. All I’m saying is that if you don’t slow down and let yourself feel all of this it will hit you when you least expect it.
Bette: What do you want me to do?
Bette’s face flushed and then immediately drained of all of it’s color, Avery knew the emotional downfall was on it’s way.
Bette: Do you want me to fall to the ground and pound the pavement? Should I run into the street and hope a bus hits me? Just because I’m upset doesn’t mean I will crash. That’s not me! That’s not what I do!
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I’m a Tibetter. I have one wish for this story please don’t get them back together.
I forgot Tina gets stuck with Ashley? ha good job, they can both move in with Daphne. If I were Alice I wouldn’t want her either.
Glad to see a chapter from you Flair. : ) Happy New Year!
I’m a Tibetter too plez make it better
yay ur back now fix it longer
yay! ur back!! thanks for the update, hope to read more from u very soon!!! =)
What a great way to start 2007! I can’t wait to see how you’re going to resolve this! Curiously, I looking forward to Tina-Daphne. Bette-Avery? Not so much…Thanks!
Happy New Year! so glad you’re back and the update :)
Good to see you back and this is good!!!!
Just let Ashley get run over by a bus and then no one will have to deal with her.
Happy New Year… well the show has done a lot of damage to our Tibetter heart… so please don’t let FF doing the same too… please? ;)
Hey Flair, Hope you had a wonderful New Year. Mine is just getting better knowing that you are back posting more of this awesome story. I adore it. It is just heartbreaking to see these gals ripped apart. Especially given everyhtnig that they had to overcome to be together at first. I do hope that Alice, Alex and Avery can overturn the evil that Ashley has done. Please continue soon as I will be here waiting. Many thanks for this absorbing tale. Your Loyal Fan.
IM A TIBETTER TOOO!make it all better.and let alice/alex get stuck with the BRAT for good.happy new year! im glad youre back too.
I’m glad you’re back with this story. I’ve missed it. I’m anxious to see how you work this mess out between T/B.
Hey there, now I’m not too sure if I like the fact that your back…with this story anyway, you really like the torture!! I can’t see there being any way whatsoever of their being a Tibette in this….it’s messy any way you look at it, oh, did I mention painful to read. It can’t be all that bad if you excited about S4…it would surely bring your spirits up with your writing as well…..right???