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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 48
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A nervous giggled escaped Avery’s mouth and she stood up and headed toward the shower.
Avery: I’ll be right out ok?
Bette: I’ll be waiting.
Closing the door to the small bathroom Avery rested her head against the door. She really had no idea what was going on between her and Bette. Even worse, she didn’t know where exactly she wanted it to go. For the past few days she had been having these dreams about the brunette and it terrified her more then anything. Leaning into the shower, Avery turned on the water and waited for it to heat up. Dropping her clothes she stepped in and let the water scold her skin. She closed her eyes and tried desperately to make the strange feelings go away. She imagined Rob, her most recent ex boyfriend, and more importantly not Bette Porter, standing behind her in the shower like he used to. She could feel his strong arms pull her backwards into him. She felt the weight of his chin on her shoulder and anticipated the scratch of the stubble that he refused to shave off. Much to her surprise the skin she felt was smooth and smelled sweet. Avery smiled, this after all was a fantasy, it would only be right that he finally got rid of it for her. Avery wrapped her arms around her naked body and let them travel up and down her torso. Goose bumps traced her path and she could feel her own heart pounding. How long had it been since anyone touched her like this? Rob was months and months ago. Avery hadn’t realized how much she needed this. Closing her eyes again she could still feel him behind her. It was when she imagined him pressing his lips against her neck that Avery lost it. The kiss was so sweet and so soft that it made her dizzy. She leaned her head back to rest on his shoulder and allowed him to continue kissing down her neck blazing a trail to her breasts. Slowly she rubbed the sensitive area below her nipple. Without realizing it, she moaned. She was lost in the moment completely and her knees were beginning to wobble under her. Flashes of Rob were spinning in her brain over and over and Avery found herself almost out of breath. She pressed her palm against the wall of the shower to keep herself from falling. She watched as her imagination let Rob move in front of her and lower himself to his knees. She could feel his tongue trace her thigh and gradually move upward. Avery flung her head back and enjoyed the sensation, even if it wasn’t real. She could feel herself coming close to the edge. When Avery opened her eyes to picture Rob’s Blonde hair beneath her, she found that she could no longer veil who she was truly thinking about, and saw the image of Bette’s chocolate eyes staring back at her. Avery snapped her eyes open in disbelief. She couldn’t escape the truth no matter how hard she tried. Feeling the tears well up in her eyes, Avery sunk to the bottom of the shower.
TBC…
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i havent seen a fic with 20 chapters at one time……ever……..and this was amazing……i am thankful for your amazing talent of writing……please, post again as soon as you can……this is the best sooo farrr…..
I had to pause at page three and say how much I hate fucking Avery. …Okay, back to the story. BTW, Wildtouch, Portiaonly has posted chapters in excess of 20 pages many, many times. Just had to mention that ….now, back to this excellent story…
ASHLEY…I meant Ashley, that ungrateful excuse for a teenager. On Avery, the jury is still out at this point. …now, back to the story…
Wow when you bring back a story, you do it with a bang. This was great, hope Bette and Avery and work out the confusion. I think Tina a little off on accusing Bette of being such a horrible person, even in anger. Bette may not b e perfect, but Tina needs to get her facts straight.
Welcome back to the fold, and I hope you didn’t expect any more or any less than the rantings that will follow. But please, please, PLEASE know and trust that I am always honest in my criticisms if for no other reason than I pride myself on taste. And your writing is amazing: It’s organic and nautral and (obviously) dramatic. These characters have lives of their own, and personalities separate from their descriptions, which serendipitously (and I use the term deliberately) match the chracters from the show. I have noticed that when you receive less than favorable, aggressive, or negative intimations on this board, you stop posting. Which, I would venture explains the long (though apparently unimpressive) 20 page post. Please don’t get discouraged by whatever gets said. Remember that poeple get so fired up about this story because YOU are writing it so well. And then take that energy in stride and use it, use it to write these amazing dialogues, use it to deepen these relationships. Now, on a more specific note, I LOVE AVERY. I love the drama between Bette and Tina, the way it fuels both sides of the coin pushing the two further apart (and perhaps eventually back together?). But mostly, I love Avery. I like Tiffany too, that line about the bowling shoes is priceless. The sexual tension in this story makes my temperature rise! Which is probably why I should stop reading it at work…. anyway, if the length of your story isn’t at all a coup then the length of this fickin’ comment certainly is! I love you, and I love this story. Thats right I said it, I love you!!!!!!
wow that wal very long, but worth the wait! Since Tina is being such a bitch, I think Bette and Avery should give it a go. We just have to get rid of derek and tiffany!
thank you, thank you. I was wondering what happened to this story, it is one of my favorites. Cant wait for more.
I usually don’t read posts that are this long…but…this was absolutley brilliant. You are a fantastic writer. Post soon.
i don’t think my tibette heart can take so much drama…tina is with someone else, bette wants to be with someone else, they can’t stand each other and i see no hope for tibette because they both changed so much since the beginning of this story…maybe i should just concentrate on alice and alex, at least they are the same, funny and caring
Great to have you back and what a post. 20 pages just flew by. Wow!
oh, forgot to mention that the writing is brilliant and i hope ashley will tell tina the truth, daphny will tell tina the truth, avery will stay away from bette, and alice and alex will find the way to bring B&T back together, though i don’t see how it’s possible
Wow…it has been a while! Thank you for the long post. It is always nice to be able to stay in a story for so long. Your characters are rich and each one is very unique. Of course we all have our own opinions. I hope you don’t mind but I am going to add mine to the pile. Love Avery, don’t trust Ashley or Daphne…I don’t care if she does love Tina, she started this relationship with deception, urging Tina to cheat, only caring about her own feelings. I guess I don’t ever root for someone who has done the things Daphne has. And, I have tried very hard throughout to like your Tina, but for the life of me, I just don’t. I feel no sympathy her, at at this moment could care less if she is ever happy or not. I know that is harsh, but I think back to everything she has done throughout these stories. Could you ever convince me that Bette and Tina belong together in this story? Maybe, but it would be pretty darn hard at this point. Thanks again for taking so much time and talent to entertain us.
THANK GOD YOUR BACK, you know I was kind of scared to read after what you’d left us with. But I’m kind of bending to the fact that Tibette in this story is just a bit too much together. I love all your characters and you write them all so lovingly. I LOVE long posts, it allows you to get into the story without having to jump around. Sure it takes a long time to read, but it’s like a fine wine to enjoy. Portiaonly knows this and is a master…you my girl are not far behind her…pls post long and soon. PS, I’m glad bette kissed Avery…About Time!!!!
Well, well, weel Flair, You certainly lived up to your name here. What a warped and wicked world you have crafted. And good golly miss Molly, it was brimming over with tension. Tina really socked it to Bette after sorting things out with Alice, Alex, Ashley and Daphne. Bette is in heat after Avery and perhaps these two do need to follw their mutual attraction to see where it leads. I still have hope for Bette and Tina as they truly belong together. I think that the dust needs to settle of their past and they have to experience other relationships to realize what they had together. The level of hurt that they are both feeling only shows how deep their love is. With the encouragement and help of Alice, Alex and now Ashley, they can rebuild their own lives, appreciate what they need to change and then demonstrate it to one another. Least we forget that Daphne set out to destory Tina and Bette’s relationship. Once Tina learns the truth, can this pairing survive? As for Avery, she is really attracted to Bette but is this just following their close quarters or a real questioning of her sexuality. I do think that she is confused but not at a place yet to decide if it is Bette or women in general that she wants. I hope that consumating this desire between Bette and Avery will help both of them sort themselves out and follow thier dreams. Wonderful writing so am now waiting of the next installment. Please don’t make it so long. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Thanks for this wonderful wonderful chapter, still have hope for my Tibette heart to be mended. PPS
please post again soon..
I’m a Tibetter when the relationship works, but your Bette and Tina make for a singularly toxic match. Avery strikes me as far more than a flash in the pan. I really hope she and Bette get a chance to make a go of it. This is an engrossing, wonderfully dramatic story. I can’t wait until your next post.
hey there- thanks for the 20 pages, i loved each and every one of them. interesting that i like both Avery and Tiffany and am not pulling for Tina at all which is very unlike me. if you bring B&T back together, it will be with a very changed Tina i’d guess. thanks again and looing forward to reading more soon.
Come on Bette and Avery!
Great chapter! I have to say, Tina’s the b!tch here. How could she cheat on Bette (at least mentally) and then accuse Bette of everything? Each time, it’s Bette who did the sacrifice, what did she do? Is this the result of taking a fan as lover? Bette deserves better. Please make Tina feel VERY sorry and win Bette back in a VERY hard way in the end. :P
thank god youre back,ths a million for the long post lovin it.i thought ashley was going to confess up to everything,and tibette needs stop bEING PIGHEAD AND LEAST BE CIVIAL.p.p.s.
I’m so glad your story has returned!!! ….and 20 pages!!! I had missed it….please post soon!!
Blown the fuck away. For seriously that was astounding. I was literally on the edge of my seat. SideNote: I really want to shoot Tina.
man i was reading your old chapters this weekend..i was missing a lot your story..you for sure is my favourite writer..your story is simple great..ok now about the chapter and by the way..great surprise see 20 pages..anyways..i really dont trust people that change to good overnight..especially Ashley..that girl is sooo bad news..i hope Tina find out what she and Daphne did..even when Tina dont deserve Bette..but the truth must come..i dont like Avery too..i think Bette could try with Tiffany..and make Tina suffer and suffer..so she realize how terrible person she is..ok..when is the next chapter???? thanks :-)
Big long chapters tend to scare me so I sort of skipped around and also looked over the comments. Bette was a major jackass to Jimmy. I didn’t read anything about Ashley but it doesn’t matter because I still want to rip out her ovaries and shove them up her ass. I may come back to this another time.
First of all”IT’S BEEN A WHILE”!Welcome back stranger, and 2nd you sure did make it up with 20pages THANK YOU! Wow where to start Bette’s playing hard to get and Tina has lost her mind.Thanx 4 posting 20pages!PPS!LA8ER!!!
ahhh bette thank god…she just upped the ante
your stories are the best! please post again soon!
Although I am a Tibetter, I am so addicted into this story. No matter where the storyline is going, I will read it and love it. And, Flair, PLEASE PLEASE keep it on. Now, I need a rest cause I spent 40 mins reading it and couldn’t stop. I am a slow-reader, I know :)