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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 50
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Tina: They sabotaged me. It was Ashley’s idea for Daphne to come on to me.
Alice: Holy shit.
Alex: Those bitches.
Tina nodded. She was never a big fan of the “pity party” but this time she felt she deserved one.
Tina: I don’t know what to do.
Alex: There is nothing you can do, but be grateful.
Alice: Grateful?
Alex: Yes. Be grateful that you found out about them as quickly as you did and that they are out of your life.
Tina put her head onto the table.
Alice: He’s right. This charade could have continued for God only knows how long.
Tina: I don’t want to be grateful, I want to die!
Alex reached across the table and smacked the back of Tina’s head.
Tina: Ouch! What the hell…
Alex: Don’t ever say that. It is your right to be a drama queen, I know, I have it down to an art, but it is never ok to say that you want to die!
Tina rubbed the back of her head.
Tina: Ok fine.
Alice: The boy is right again.
Alex beamed.
Alex: Of course I am.
Alice: You shouldn’t wish yourself dead. You should wish them dead.
Alex leaned into Alice and gave her a smack to the head too.
Alice: Hey!
Alex: You shouldn’t wish other people dead either.
Alice: When did you become so righteous?
Alex: Just this second.
Tina rolled her eyes.
Tina: How convenient.
Alex raised his hand again, this time both women put their arms up to block him.
Alex: I was just stretching.
Tina: Oh.
Alice: Sorry.
They dropped their guard.
Alex: You know I don’t believe in violence.
Alice: Bull shit! You just smacked us.
Alex: Those were love taps.
Tina: Sure they were.
Tina cocked her head and pointed toward the door.
Tina: Hey Alex, isn’t that the guy you had that terrible date with?
Alex spun in his seat.
Alex: Oh my god, it is.
Alice gasped.
Alice: And isn’t the guy he’s with the guy who stood you up a few months back.
Alex squinted his eyes.
Alex: You have to be kidding me!
He stood up from his seat.
Alex: I’m going to kill them. No, I’m going to rip them into a million small pieces and feed them to some poor hungry animal at the zoo. Or a pigeon…I’ll feed them to a pigeon. You just wait and see what they look like when I am done with them.
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Ok, this was great. As usual, Tina is walking around with blinders. Sure Ashley and Daph. plotted, but Tina had to be a willing participant to succumb to Daph. advances. Why did you have to bring Helena back (drama, drama, drama). Can wait to see what you have planned!
jks it keeps getting better babe,with alot of drama always around.it takes two to tangle,and yes what ash/daph did wasnt right but tina has to find a way to fixed things and get bette to listen for once in her life.why did ya bring helena back!OH MAN! p.p.s.
Terrific post! Thanks!
Each post just heightens the drama. I’m glad Ash came clean and told Tina everything about her and Daphne’s plan. I agree that Tina was a willing participant, but I don’t think she would have done so easily without a nudge from Daphne. I like Bette with Ashley, but I would love to see her back with Tina. And bringing Helena back just means the drama will continue to flow. PPS.
well what can i say? amazing as always..again i have to say..i dunno why but i dont like Avery..lol.. that is something about her i just dont bite.. she seems to sweet to annoying if you know what i mean..she is not the kind of person i see with Bette even when Bette seems happy so far with her..she insnt the right one..about Tina.. great.. she deserve the suffer and she found out sooner than i thought about the 2 snakes and was great..hate that Daphine too.. i hope now she get some time to think about all the shit she did and realise what Bette is and means to her.. will not be easy for her..anyways..Bette and Helena..now that must be something else to see.. i like Helena and since Peggy have a crazy mind she may want to see Bette and Helena dating..lol.. Alex and Alice as always the funny part.. and about the play..Bette should not take part with that and dont invest her money in Tina´s… do i have to beg to you post again soon? yes? humm you like the beging part huh? ok ok..please please post again soon.. thanks ;-)
I hope Tina won’t go back to Daphne again and just try to win Bette back. Avery is fine, but I have to say I found this Avery-Bette part’s a bit… boring. I guess after all, I’m a TiBetter. :P
i just love this fic…..i mean you are an amazingly talented writer….now why cant ilene take this fic and make a show out of it……i love this thing between bette and avery…….even though i am an avid tibetter……lol…….pps……
What Fun!!!!!!!!!!
WOW!!!! I can not wait to see what happens next!!!! Thanks Great Post!!!
It amazed me that Bette didn’t once stop and think about Tina when she was w/Avery…which of course speaks volumes for her feelings. I do feel bad for Tina though, because her and Bette had been thru so much together…but I’m also thinking that smart, rich, successful, sexy Bette Porter isn’t going to stay untouched forever where you’re concerned……tks for the great post
Well, I thought the Bette/Avery sex scene was smoking hot. So far they seem beautifully matched, and I hope they get a decent honeymoon period before Tina (inevitably I suppose) enters the picture.
I love this story and I think u r an remarkably talented writer. I just finished reading all the posts of this fic and the previous one and thought WOW. Now I hope n request u will post soon and will not let all the time I invested in reading ur stories dissipate by u not continuing and me not finding out wat finally happensïŠ:) PPSP.S. Ur Alice is the funniest and coolest so far:)
Hey Flair, Sweet to have you back again. Finally the truth is out there and just as Bette and Avery are cementing their relationship. I did hoipe that Bette would find a niggle of regard as she committed to Avery but looks like they are just perfect together. Mind you, it will be interesting to see how the company reacts to this news. This may be something that Avery isn’t ready for and I’m not sure how sympathetic Bette will be. Loved the whole Alex as “Cher” situation. Brilliant & hysterical. Now, methinks, Alice is schemeing to get the gals back together. I do like Acvery but love Tina with Bette. So i can’t wait to see what life has in store for them all. BnT forever puh-lease! Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
i luv your writing and i am so excited when i see you have posted, but i just don’t see the chemistry between bette and avery, i usually love bette in a sex scene with anyone, but i just don’t get the two of them together, expecially not with the all consuming fireworks when they touch. can’t wait to see whats next!!!!!!!!!!!
This is GREAT! I can’t wait to see next post.
Bette and Avery is hot and sexy, love it. Poor Tina, funny about Alice and Alex. Shit Helena is here and drama coming. Anyway post soon please, thanks! Glad to catch up with you story and love it!
Flair, where are you dear? I’m dying here waiting for you to continue wt this story. You got me so glued on and I’m desperate for more. Please please please post again soon…
Me, too. I always come back a couple of days to check if there is a new post. This story is so dramatic and attactive. flair, if you have a little bit free time on your hands, PLEASE continue your fantastic story.