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No More Crying chapter 7
Sunday-2:00 P.M
“I dont know, I barely met her a few days ago. I mean, I knew she liked me, but not that much Yeah, but dont these things take time? …Why else do you think she asked me to clean her house? Ha, shes not like yours …You should see it, its beautiful. Carmen heard Shane walk in. I gotta go, shes here Thanks, bye.”
Carmen hung up and went over to Shane. She greeted her with a kiss. “What do think?”
“You did a kick ass job. Ive never seen my house this clean.” Shane walked around the house with Carmen following her. “Thanks.” Shane went back to her living room and sat down on her couch. She immediately got back up and walked over to her dresser. “And you organized my CD collection. Thats awesome.”
Shane turned around and gave Carmen a hug. Carmen out her head on Shanes neck and said, “You’re awesome.”
Sunday-8:30 P.M.
Dana was walking around the house looking for
“What?!”
Dana sighed, “Oh God, Alice. That’s why theres a shampoo and a thing called a shower head.”
“I know, but they werent working so I decided to just dunk my head in the water.”
“Your’e wasting water by doing that
“Nuh uh, the deal was 24 hours.”
“Huh? Oh, I wanted to know if you had any plans for Wednesday.”
“Why?”
“Well, I realized we never really went out like on a date and, uh, I wanted to ask you out.”
“Really? Well, then I guess I have plans now.”
Monday-7:00 A.M.
There was a constant knocking at the door.
“Sorry Al, is Dane home?”
“No, she’s out training. Why?”
Shit. Fuck. “Okay, can you tell her to come by my house later?”
“Sure.”
“Thanks, Al. Laters.”
Five Hours Later
Shane opened the door and let Dana in. “Okay Shane, what was urgent that it caused you to be awake at seven in the morning?”
“Dana, dont be mad, but I… uh, lost the ring.”
“You what?!”
“Lost the ring.”
“What the… How did…” Dana took a breath to keep calm. “Fuck.”
“It was here when I left. I had it hidden underneath a pile of clothes.”
“What the hell did you do yesterday?”
“Well, I woke up, took a shower, left to meet
Dana crossed her arms. “Anything else?”
“Uh, I asked Carmen to…”
“What?”
“Shit.” TBC Posted By:Solid
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(13 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
Nice…poor Carm, now she has high hopes…Oh, oh…poor Shane actually…Cheers
there is going to be a mad rush trying to find this ring please post soon can’t wait to see if they find it in time great post