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Not The End, Chapter 24
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Chapter Twenty-Four
I watch Kelly’s body force back from the punch and she grabs her face in shock.
Our eyes still locked together, I watch as she pulls herself together and her eyes fill with rage.
My fist is throbbing from the contact to her jaw.
I feel no control over my body again and I plunge towards her and my fist comes back in contact with her face but this time her nose.
Her body steps back again and her hands cover her face quickly as she bends over.
Suddenly in that second she throws herself towards me with her fist in the air..
I hear a slap.
With my hands covering my face as a guard and my eyes closed, I find it strange that I feel nothing.
When I open my eyes I see Bette with Kelly’s fist in her hand gripping it tightly.
“Lay a finger on my wife and I swear, I’ll break your hand.”
“Bette..”
“Do you understand me?” She says looking at Kelly.
Kelly nods and locks her eyes back to me again as she angrily pulls her fist out of Bette’s hand.
“Are you ok, T?”
“You’re asking her if she’s ok? When i’m the one that got punched in the face?”
“Shut it, Kelly.” Bette’s voice raises.
I shake my fist still feeling the stinging effect. “Yeah.”
“Crazy bitch.” I hear Kelly mumble to herself while stepping to the side a little.
“What happened?” Bette asks me with concern.
“She deserved it.” I state the truth.
“I’m guessing you seen my little tape..”
My body freezes and fills with more anger.
“Fuck this. I’m not doing this.” I move pass Bette when I suddenly feel a heart throbbing pain to the face and my body gets thrown across the room and I slam against the wall banging my head against its hard surface as I slide down.
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Bette’s POV
My body quickly reacts but it’s too late as I watch Tina’s body sliding down the wall.
I grab tightly hold of Kelly and back her towards the wall with all my power, placing my arm across her throat.
I then feel two hands grab my waist and I’m getting pulled away.
I hear James’ voice loudly saying my name. “Bette!”
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Ok, listen dont get upset with me just wait.. *covering my face with my hands* Its all part of my story :P
Thanks you
Okay, we be waiting on the next post. PPS
Ya know what – it’s the end for me ! I’m done with you !
with me and my story? :/
Seriously?! I was actually hoping this chapter marked a turning point for them – away from paranoid, vindictive Tina and back toward some kind of equitable, healing, healthier partnership. But Tina just sees what she wants to see. Bette needs to move on. And I need to go read some happy ending stories.
i’m sorry, this will turn around very happily, i’m getting to it, every story needs to have its ups and downs to readers, its what kind of makes you want more i guess, but this story will turn into a happy ending, i have a wonderful idea for it. So I am sorry to all the readers that have decided to read my story, i am sorry if i upset you in any way, its not what i am trying to do, I don’t want to turn you guys from me, i just started writing and i know i’m probably not doing the greatest job but its just a want to write a little bit more with this story, Im a tibette and every story I ever make will always have a happy ending for the two, i just like having drama and sometimes suspense but again to all you guys reading this comment, I am really sorry, If i lose you as readers its my fault and I am truly sorry.
Look at it this way: you’ve obviously got readers very invested in the story. :) That’s a sign of good story-telling.
thanks, i just will feel bad if i lose some readers because of my writing, but thanks!
Ok, benefit of doubt here, and I know you will fix this. I always want Bette to react faster telling kelly to leave her alone and knock her to the floor for good measure. And James should not have stopped Bette from whipping her behind. Bette should have let Tina go after kelly and finish the job. Tina needs to listen to Bette for the explanation of what happened and not draw the wrong conclusions. Can hardly sait to see how you take care of this very bad situation. Thanks for posting.
heart breaking，but i will follow this story to the end，keep writing！
thanks so much, means a lot to me!
Great storyline. Can’t wait to read another post. Please…..post the next chapter soon. THANK YOU for the entertaining storyline.
Your story is great. Not every story can be drama free. That would be boring. Keep writing the story the wAy you want it to go.
Phew when I saw “done” I thought it was the end of the story. I can take some drama just don’t ditch the story the way it seems others have done with theirs. Where have all the stories gone?
I will.say this first..never worry about losing readers, this is your creativity and vision for this story..your real true readers will follow the story no matter how it turns out…..
Now about the story………SIGH!
thanks so much tibettenation1, it really means a lot to get feedback like that from readers!
OK 4 more pages and still no joy !! :(
Can’t believe that Bette would have acted like this !! :(
I’ll perhaps give you one more chance – perhaps :(
Thanks! Keep posting and don’t worry about the haters! PPS
thanks so much, that does mean a lot to me :)
I love your writing and this story, but as with most of the stories on this site, it’s posted before it’s finished. That can be so frustrating to get so caught up in the suspense and suddenly there is no more. I know you will post a wonderful ending because you’re talented……please post soon!
thanks so very very much, i just want you readers to continue reading, thanks!
victoriaa_fanxo – first I want to say don’t be discouraged because it’s not your writing that is upsetting it’s our emotional attachment to these characters. You are doing a great job with the story and though I am done with Tina I’m not done reading. I almost wish that Bette would leave her and that would be a happy ending for me … just kidding. I know that will break too many TiBette hearts but really Tina needs to get her shit together and stop running away. She had such a great opportunity to stand by HER WOMAN and send Kelly to hell and instead she fell back into the same trap. Kelly has the upper hand and Bette is caught between two bitches neither of which cares about Bette. They are treating her like property and I hate that she is so damned insecure and weak. Tina isn’t in love with Bette and that’s obvious in her actions. Her words are meaningless – one minute she’s saying I love you and having sex with Bette and the next it’s I want to hurt you, and the next is I trust you but I need proof – what the hell? Kelly is toying with them and they are giving her the power to do it. Please give Bette some balls in the next chapter and don’t let her quit her job. The last thing she needs is to be sucking up to Tina to try and get her to believe her and to be out of a job and not able to support her family so Tina can use that against her too. Thanks for continuing with this story. You’ve got a lot of us invested in it so please continue and tell it they way you want. We’ll either like it or not.
I agree with what you are saying, i do, but yes i am a big tibette fan and I know exactly how readers feel with the way i take these characters into my hand but im just trying to keep my story going for a little longer because i have a few ideas I would like to throw in there, i just want to keep readers and not upset them and have them forget about my story, so i am sorry to the readers that have possibly stopped reading because of my writing, and thanks BAT2012 thanks for your feedback, i hope that you continue to read till the end! :)
Thanks for the update, those two need to get on the same page. I wish Tina had done more damage. Kelly deserves all she got and more. Bette should have taken a swing too.
Hi victoria! I am a faithful reader, I am very
delays with many readings, however, is the lack of time,
my work at the airport has a lot of my
tempo.Estou gradually updating this and other stories
I have not read and did not comment.
I trust you the way you write.
You have not lost me as a reader, just have a little patience
me for taking so long to comment, and I apologize to you.
Bear hug.
All Stars.
no need for apologies, i understand! thanks so much for your comment :)