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Not The End, Chapter 31
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“Mama B’s face!” Angie laughs out loud.
“Look how funny she looked!” I laugh with Angie.
Bette’s body then pops up from the water and in front of us.
“Mama B you looked silly!”
“I looked silly!?” She says taking Angie from my arms and then dipping under the water with her.
“Mama B!” Angie shouts with laughter wiping her eyes from the water.
“That’s what you get when you say mommy looks silly!”
I watch Bette’s facial expression brighten when Angie looks into her eyes and then she looks at me and smiles more.
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Bette’s POV
I watch Angie run her little body through the huge funny shaped sprinklers laughing with the other kids as me and Tina sit at the picnic table picking at some fruit we got from the food counter.
“She’s loving this.” I say and look towards Tina.
“She really is, she loves doing family things, it makes her so happy.” Tina says looking over at Angie with a smile.
“It makes me happy to see her happy.” I smile.
“Me too. It’s all I want to give her in life, I want to make her happy and give her the best family she deserves.”
I look up from my fruit picking when Tina says this.
“We can give her that, T.”
“I know we can but we can’t give it to her if i’m not whiling to stop my mind from taking over.”
“You’ve moved back in, that has to say something.”
“I just want her to have the perfect family.” Tina says looking back at me.
“We are far from perfect T, but we can try and give her the perfect life.”
“I don’t want her growing up thinking this is what love is, us constantly ending it and then getting back together.”
“I’m not saying you’re the main cause of this Tina but i can only wait so long for your answer of trust towards me.” I say and I slowly reach out my finger tips to slightly caress her hand.
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Tina’s POV
We arrive home after two hours of enjoying our day at the water park with Angie.
When we step into the house Angie’s hair was still dripping and as she walked you could see the trail of water following behind her, I quickly take the towel from Bette’s arms and walk up to stop Angie. “Angie, let mommy do something for your wet hair!”
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tina should go and make love to bette and forget about the photos, videos and past mistakes, making love TiBette appear erase the pain and love and trust! Thanks for your chapter.
Go girl go! Thanks, enjoyed it
yes go
No brainer T !!!! What are you still doing in the spare bed ????
For real!!!!!#
Yeah Tina, go to your woman! I would love to see them reconnect, but sex is not the solution.
Tina needs to make her mind up and fast, she is so close to lose Bette. I know you said there will be a happy ending and that makes me very happy, but god, you know how to keep me captivated and i almost wish for Bette a woman who loves her without doubt and reservations.
I know that Bette made a big mistake, but that was years ago, she paid dearly for that, but Tina is not a innocent victim, she was more cruel and a spiteful woman, so she needs to get her shit together. Bette has also the right to be warious about her trust in Tina, but she does love and trust Tina with all of her heart.
Enough rambling, thanks for the update!
I’m waiting for the next chapter,real NC-17!
If Tina doesn’t get out of bed in the morning and walk up behind Bette at the kitchen sink, plant kisses all over her, she is a fool.
Tina is time for you to make a decision, you
will hear your mind or your heart? Bette already paid for
their mistakes.
10 stars.
I hope Bette doesn’t cheapen herself and allow Tina to manipulate her sexually and use her body for gratuitous sex. It’s what she did the last time she took Bette to bed; giving her false hope then walking out on her again. Tina is just about getting her needs met and that really sucks for Bette. If Tina goes into that bedroom it better be to let Bette off the hook. Admit that she was wrong in believing Jenny’s videos and Kelly’s photos and decide if she wants a f/buddy or a life partner because having sex with Bette now when she doesn’t believe in her, doesn’t trust her, and feels the need to continually punish and degrade her sounds to me like she’s not in that relationship for anything more than the fringe benefits. She either stops running away and makes an honest commitment to stay and fix things between them and stop just focusing on Tina or else leave and allow Bette to find someone that gives a damn. It’s really getting annoying to read Tina’s POV. She needs to get out of her own head, stop f***ing with Bette’s heart, and leave Bette’s body alone until she earns her way back.
Yessss you should go Tina, stop playing around with her….gosh that water park scene I loved, I love when they having fun as a family
Yes, Tina go to Bette and tell her you realize the photos are fake and you’re so very sorry that you have been a blind, stupid, selfish bitch about it all. And don’t have sex unless Bette takes the first step. Great update. Thanks for posting.