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Not The End, Chapter 42

“I love you too mommy!”
“Bye baby.” I pinch her cheek lightly and smile.
“I love you T, I’ll call you when I get in Manhattan.” I lean in and kiss her on the lips.
“I love you too Bette.”
“Ready Ma’am?”
I look at the limo driver standing on the patio.
“Let me carry that for you.”
“Thanks.”
“Service..” Tina says winking at me.
—
“So where are you now?” Kelly asks into the phone.
“I’m outside the house.”
“Have you seen anything yet?”
“I just got her a few minutes ago, I have not seen any movement outside the house yet.”
“When you see either Bette or Tina leave the house, you also leave. You follow wherever they go.”
“Yes, Ms Wentworth.”
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Bette’s POV.
“And she made it.” Peggy says holding up a glass of wine as I make my way to my seat on her private jet.
“Thanks.” I gently grab the wine glass from her hand. “I’ve been had some excellent service, Peggy. You don’t have to do all that you are doing, just being here right now on this jet with you..It has made me the happiest woman alive, just knowing that I have Ms. Peggy Peabody as my business partner, blows my mind to a million pieces.”
“Words like that show me that you deserve it, Bette Porter. I give the best service to those that appreciate every moment of themselves.”
“Now, let’s enjoy this ride before we get to business?”
“I agree. Let’s.”
We clink glasses and smile before each taking a sip.
…
Tina’s POV.
Alice
“Kit, just told us Bette is gone to Manhattan. Grab my little earth daughter and head over to the planet, I’m here w/Shane.”
1:04pm
Tina
“Alright, I’ll meet you guys there in a few.”
1:04pm
..
“Mommy I can’t get my sandal on.”
I lean down and help her slip her foot inside.
“Ready to go to the Planet now baby? Got everything you wanted to bring?”
“Yes Mama T!” Angie says nodding her head.
“Okay, let’s go.” I open the door and grab my purse from the table quickly then lock the door behind me.
—
“Tina and the kid are leaving, would you like me to follow?”
“Yes. Follow. And if she goes to the Planet sit close and listen closely.”
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(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Sorry to read you seem to get less views, but i am one happy reader. So thank you for continuing to write!
I worry a little about Kelly, she is a dangereous crazy woman. And her wanting to speak with Tina while Bette is away, it worries me.
I have no doubt that Bette and Peggy will succeed.
Thanks again for this incredible story!
Thanks so much! I don’t want to just give up because I know a few of you out there are still reading and I wouldn’t want to do that!
Thank you! I am very happy that you continue.
Just saw a few other readers who came out to comment. When i discovered this site a few years ago, i was a silent reader, didn’t comment because i was afraid i could’nt express myself in a good way, English is not my native language, but if i would write a story i would love to read comments. It would encourage me to continue and give me a proud feeling that readers enjoy what you have created.
Sadly, there are many stories unfinished, i know life can take over and there is more in life than fanfiction but still it is sad.
So, i thank you for writing a story and sharing it with us!
Your english is explained very well! :) You comment every time and it makes me feel the happiest inside! I sometimes wait for your comment! (I know i sound silly but its true!) I love comments, i love hearing peoples feedback! like you just said its great to read comments when you write a story, just the simple of comments puts a smile on my face and encourages me to continue! So thank you so much for continuing to read my story and comment! I do have a very busy life lately with school and studying and a big city and bills, but I try my very best when I get free time to write as much as I can and hope to get a chapter to post right away! Again thanks so much for all of your comments, thanks so much for everyone who comments, it always puts a smile on my face! :)
Hi silent reader here you are doing a great job and the story is really good. So don’t think about giving up, you should be thinking about writing more stories. So I can continue reading them :)
Thank you so very very much! :) So glad to have silent readers out there commenting :)
I am looking to seeing how this story unfolds. Good work!
Thanks for reading :)
I look forward to your posts, and really enjoy reading your story, I hope to see lots more posts from you .Thank you.
I will continue to read as much as I can and post as fast as i can :) Thanks for the comment!
Peggy is always a charming character and I love stories where she appears. Because of her money, she can be almost a magical character in the way her resources can pull unattainable things out of the air, and into play that most people would simply stare at the credit cards and go, “No fucking way.” That said, I’ve sent you a PM about a plotting note, that I hope will be helpful as you continue writing, which I hope you will.
Blackbird
Thanks Blackbird! I’ll try to get to that as soon as I can! :)
Great chapter. So happy that you will continue to post, I really like the story. Hopefully Tina will have everyone come home with her so she won’t be alone, even though she doesnt know that she is being followed. Hope she does it just because Bette is gone. Why cant they see that something is different about the table where they are sitting. Kit doesnt have decorations on those tables so anything that is there should be seen. Even Alice would know what a speaker looks like, after all she is a reporter. When they find it I hope someone does something really loudly so it can break Kellys damned ear drum. Take it to one of the cars and raise the hood, put it next to the horn so some one can get inside and just press the horn for at least 3 minutes. That will deafen the bitch and hopefully make her lose her mind. Lol. Keep writing and we will keep reading. Thanks for posting.
Thanks so much for this wonderful post of yours, i am so glad you enjoy reading my story! it truly means a bunch! :)
Really enjoy this story, can’t wait for Kelly to get what she deserves. Thanks
Thanks!! :)
Few things compare to the happy feeling I get when I see a new chapter from this story, specially after a long day of never ending school work. You are doing an amazing job writing this story.
I can’t wait to see Peggy in action lol
Continuing to enjoy your story.
Wow! Glad to see that some silent
readers decided to comment.
This is very good for the writer.
I’m even afraid of what Kelly will want to talk to Tina.
And good Bette and Peggy unmask this crazy
and send it in a sanatorium.
The complete constellation.