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“Was I too rough, baby? Does it hurt?”
She shook her head vehemently. “You should see yourself.” Indeed, the brunette’s back was covered with red lines from her digging fingers, and the hickeys from overly enthused lips were turning a shade of purple. “I am a little bit sore though.” She mimicked the taller woman and exercised her muscle a little, a grimace appearing on her face.
Bette knew very well the reason for that. Her lips curved up to a satisfied grin, sparkles of playfulness dancing in her chocolate orbs. She pressed her hands to the pale arms and massaged into the lean biceps. “Good kind of sore or bad kind of sore?”
“Fucking fantastic-kind.” Tina practically moaned into Bette’s semi-embrace. She rarely swore, but she couldn’t find another word to express her current state of gratification.
“Such a way with words.”
A throaty chuckle was induced from the brunette, sending firing shivers up and down her spine. Tina longingly eyed Bette’s naked form, the pulsing and aching in between her legs returned with wantonness. She blushed profusely for being so insatiable.
Bette was incredibly sensitive to the vibe the other woman’s body was transmitting, and was highly aware of the reaction from her own body. But deciding they needed nutrition to function after some very demanding physical activities, she planted a chaste kiss on Tina’s lips. “Come on, we have all day to ourselves.”
The air in the entire house was eerily calm, as if nothing happened the previous day. Any drop of blood was scrapped away, tiles shiny as ever, no sign of any deadly concoctions being cooked and snorted. But Tina could feel the presence of death, hopelessness and despair, lurking in every dark corner. People with familiar faces walked in zombie mode, from heavy drinking and using, she presumed, and their expression utterly indifferent, numb from the brutality this place had witnessed. Each and every one of them trying to hide something, to escape who they really were. She avoided further eye contact with those people and turned to observe her lover. Bette moved with determination through the scattered gather of criminals, peering at them with caution. They were either unconcerned or slightly intimidated by her appearance. Tina supposed that yesterday the brunette, once again, declared her superiority to the crowd. While no one else seemed to be able to penetrate Bette’s stoic frontier, the blonde saw a glimmer of uncertainty blended with fear in those honey brown eyes. It went away as quick as it appeared but it was definitely there. Behind that flawlessly guarded surface, the woman she saw and connected with was the gentlest, most caring and vulnerable creature.
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Ok I’m getting a hang of this new design. Come and send me friend requests, write on my wall, or leave messages in my box or something!
I think someone may have noticed that I also pulled down all The Lucky One chapters. That’s because I am doing a major revision. There are a lot of changes. It’s half way through already but I don’t know if you want me to post or wait till it’s all done.
I would love your thoughts, if not on the whole story, but on some small things you like or dislike. Any form of comment will be appreciated.
Peace,
Robyn
Yayyy!!!you’re back! I’m so happy to be reading this story again, I thought you were kidding me when you said you were going to post…ahh!!!…miss you my sister! …….ok I’m going to read the chapter now lol
So glad your back with this story. Enjoyed it, thanks
it’s been so long since you’ve post a new chapter,thanks for this long update!
Ok.. Slightly confused.. I don’t remember when they realized they knew each other from high school… Did I miss something, although I am only on page 5 so maybe it will be explained as I read further..
You might have skipped chapter 2 “Why change your name”? It’s when Bette confronted Tina about her appearance at the mansion. They are pretty sure about each other the entire time.
Welcome back! And you came back with incredible force. But i am a little confused, was Tina really having a nightmare where she shot Bette dead or did she it really and is now in some kind of shock where the reality is escaping her?
Would love to read the chapters you already have from The Lucky One.
Hey so glad your back. Awesome chapter. I can’t wait to read more.
Robyn what a comeback!..great to have you back n this sure is one of those “don’t put it down til ya finish reading it” kinda story..my kinda story!..is Bette really dead?..did Tina narc on Bette?…Staying tune for yur next chapter…intriguing!..welcome back missy!.
Roby !! girl where you were? I missed you!
Be very welcome !!
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Through Facebook. You should know that I love photography,
and I’m doing photographic art, that is, I see a picture,
share and then immediately make my art.
I took his picture and made my art photography, it was beautiful!
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you allow.
I have not read the story, I’ll read tomorrow, because I had a day job
12 hours and I’m exhausted and read in this state, your story will not
having due regard to what merece.São 18 chapters, and tomorrow
I will give all my attention to this story.
The complete constellation.
A big bear hug !! …
Really happy to see this story wasn’t forgotten, I’ll be looking forward to the next posts!
First of all, let’s take a deep breath.
Our Roby! This chapter was excellent! and you let me
with a sinking heart, that will be the Bette and Tina destination
amid all this, and when Bette says, “I am dead, but it’s not your fault.”, she made me very afraid.
Please! I precisso a happy ending.
The complete constellation.
Bear hug.
glued to every word, describes me right now….I said it once and say it again…Robyn you are amazing….Very entertaining!