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Notes From A Perfectly Indifferent Stranger — 1st note
I bid you read this story with an indifferent eye for as long as possible. It is a hard story to relate but a theme all to common in any society. I will introduce you to it slowly and take apart each section of it simply. I will start with the antagonist of the story. She betrayed another but this woman that had been betrayed knew that it would come. She knew every time she let herself agree to something that she deemed contrary to her own inner voice that she would be the one crying in the end. So this is how it will be. She will see the betrayal by virtue of her own eyes and what is worse she will not be able to tear herself away from the vision. Is there a better explanation than facination with one’s own pain? Why do some choose to watch things such as this for a extended period of time while others run from it? Difference of characters of course, but delving into the deeper reason is a study not lightly taken up. She stood on a trash can looking at ths scene that was the downfall of her world. She has made this woman her world. Someone who was once just a large piece of it is now the major player in this chapter of her life. I do not know the whole of the story or how it is to come about fully but I do know the first and up to the last of its major details. I can only comment from the outside as I was not a part of this situation but the betrayed is a friend of mine, and I wish to relate her story. I am assured that you know her. Alice is her name. She is a woman who could not hurt someone badly except if the action was performed aganist her will. I will say her sense was not about her in the choices she made, but then her choices where women are involved never were as clever as they could be. She lets herself be more ruled by emotion in this way than she would in any other kind of situation. I have love for my friend but I choose to relate this story with perfect indifferance. Well, as perfectly indifferent as a human can be. Let me rest awhile before I continue this story. I am weary from the travel I have just come back from. Yes, let me rest just awhile and I promise I will relate it in full. I hope that you do not loose interest in my absense! It is a story that might make you more mindful of your own choices. So please take a seat and rest yourself. I will tell you of my friend Alice and her charmingly misguided Dana in just a little while.
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The friend is….. Tina,who else.Now for the answer.
I’m gonna say shane
its Bette.
Woow….sounds like it is going to be good…..when are you coming out with next chapter? Cant wait
the friend is Bette?
Its sounding like Bette to me…but you are breaking my heart…yeah – and the show is going to too!!! Hey, my FF has them broken up to, so who am i to talk…great start…love seeing a little DnA…
Thank you for your comments and guesses! I am not going to reveal who the friend is until the end of the story… at least that is the plan. I am updating tomorrow. I was planning on doing it tonight but I got caught up in writing a story for the music portion of the site so I promise its not my fault. ;-):D