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    Nothing Really Compares – Chapter Six

    Story written on May 4, 2008 by Genner.
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    “I don’t understand, why did you pick me?”

    It was 10.45 PM. The policemen had arrived and told them what to do some hours ago. Bette hadn’t understood much. She only knew that she was supposed to sit at a table with a bag under her chair, which she was to show to the kidnappers. She had to ask them for Tina first before she gave the money. They ran through other details, but Bette didn’t remember any of it. Her head was gloomy and she couldn’t think straight. She was very nervous, almost unable to breathe. Tina, she was going to have Tina back! It all seemed so surreal.
    She looked at her watch. Another quarter to go. The minutes felt like days that lasted for ages. It was exactly 11 PM when she heard someone knock on the door. She immediately stood up and opened it.
    "Back on your seat," a high-pitched voice said. It was dark outside and the only light came from a single lamp. Bette saw the outline of a huge woman. The voice didn’t fit her. Bette obeyed and went back to her table. This felt really weird. The woman had brought someone with her, but Bette couldn’t see anything. Where was Tina?
    "If you give me Tina, you can get the money." She tried to sound brave, but she noticed her own voice trembling.
    "It doesn’t work that way. Give me the money and maybe you’ll get Tina."
    "That was not the deal!" Bette felt all kinds of emotions: anger, worry, sadness, furiosity…
    "I never said I would stick to the deal," the woman said. "Now, give me the back."
    "I need to see Tina first," Bette said. She didn’t think about any of the tips of the policemen.
    "No way. Give me the bag."
    "Give me Tina." Bette seriously asked herself what the hell she was doing, risking both Tina’s and her life.
    Suddenly the woman got her gun and pointed it at Bette. She snapped to whoever was beside her: "Get the bitch."
    Bette had to hold herself from yelling to the woman that nobody called her woman a bitch. The accomplice went out and was back within a second. He had someone with him. Bette immediately recognised Tina, who’s mouth was taped.
    "Baby," she whispered. She could hear Tina cry and her heart broke.
    "Shut up. No talking," the woman said. She now pointed the gun at Tina and unlocked the safety.
    "No!" Bette shouted. All of the sudden, the policemen jumped out and pointed their guns at the woman.
    "No police I said!" the woman said. She clearly panicked. Bette was scared to death, she was gonna shoot Tina! Luckily one policeman used the confusion of the woman to grab her and get rid of her gun, which wasn’t an easy job seen the size of her. Another one grabbed the accomplice, and a third one freed Tina. Tina runned to Bette and sobbed heavily. Bette held her close and touched her hair.
    "Shh, it’s okay now. It’s over," Bette hushed her. She held Tina even tighter, who was embracing her as if it were the last hug they’d ever share.

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    1. Well G, you really hit home that envy and jealousy can bring the worse out of people. Penny has obviously yearned for the life that Tina was living, and not happy with her own, but WOW WEE talk about going off the deep end eh? Penny listen up, SOMETIMES you have to work hard for get where you want to in life, and not on the coat tails of another. Okay, looks like the next chappy will wrap this one up. Good stuff! You are quite creative.

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