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Now That I Know – Chap 7
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So sorry about that Ms. Fairbanks. We can never be too careful, you know? He said handing the I.D. back to Alice. Dana just stared him down with a stern face, and once he had left with one final look to Alice, the athlete grabbed the handle and violently opened the car door. She climbed out angrily, leaving Alice to fall against the console with a grunt.
*****! Alice whispered as she fumbled to get out of the car from her awkward position. Dana! Dana wait up please! She yelled after her friend once she made it out of the car. Running up the sidewalk to the door, she noticed Dana stalking back towards her and smiled, but then frowned when she continued right past her back towards the car. Alice watched as Dana reached in for her purse and snatched her keys out of it as she made her way back to the house. Dane, whats wrong? Is this about Alice said as the brunette moved to walk past her again.
Dana stopped with her back still turned to Alice, when she finished the sentence in her head the kiss. She turned around quickly and whispered harshly, You were flirting with him, Al!
I was trying to get him to leave- Alice started softly looking everywhere but at Danas hurt face, but was interrupted.
By flirting with him?! Alice, he wouldve left anyway. Dana realized she might be overreacting, but she just couldnt stop herself. All the events of the night suddenly hit her with such force, that she was completely exhausted.
Yea, but I was trying to get him to leave more quickly than he normally would, Alice said following Dana towards the door, when she turned to go unlock it. Alice smiled when she heard Danas cat, Mr. Piddles, meow excitedly through the door.
Why? Dana said turning to watch the blondes face.
Why what? Alice asked not following.
Why did you want him to leave more quickly? She replied impatiently.
Alice ducked her head and smiled up at Dana, as she kicked her toe against the sidewalk nervously. Dana couldnt believe that Alice Pieszecki was actually embarrassed, over something having to do with her no less! Then she blushed as soon as she got the meaning behind why Alice was embarrassed. Dana quickly turned back to her door to open it and walk through, but when she turned around Alice was nowhere in site. She stuck her head out the doorway and looked in both directions, after no sign of the blonde she stepped back and closed the door. Dana stood with her forehead pressed against the wooden frame, and wondered what the ***** was going on. She turned to say hello to Mr. P when she heard him behind her, but instead came face to face with a grinning Alice. She stumbled backwards in surprise and the blonde followed her until she had the athlete trapped between her and the door, pinning her there with an arm on each side.
Alice leaned in with the grin still planted on her face, and whispered into Danas ear, You know, we really should stop meeting like this
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Yes!, great girl, please don’t take too long to post again :)
Evil tease, evil…evil….evil. It so good and you just have to stop there! Btw,I’m so happy my curse worked on ya!
so sorry i accidently hit th2 2nd star instead of 5th.
I loved it you big tease.
I have to say right now you’re one of my favorite writers when it comes to reading great moments of sexual tension and intimacy. You have that shit down pat and I love reading it from you. Plus jealous Dana over the police man flirting was dead on. I’m really loving this story just because the characterizations are perfect and it’s pretty much the example of good Danish. You know, with the love, the humor, the confusion… etc etc. Can’t wait to see what comes next.
That was a GREAT chapter! Don’t leave us hanging too long!
nix. yowza. you do the sexual tension as good as good as it gets. i’ve said before you have a great ear for their (danish’s) interaction. this is fun- i’m still all aglow. thanks!
Ah you posted I got so happy when i saw your name – i just love this story – it makes me so happy…and i love you’re dana…
What did this woman do, bathe in pheromones to render women powerless in close contact?! lmao – now this isn’t still considered a bad night, right –
layla_gray is right, you are an evil, evil tease. what a great chapter. alice is quite the seductress. my favorite line was “Dana… you smell really good.” ahhh the scent of a woman…. so intoxicating. i love what your doing nix, go on with your bad self… just don’t keep us waiting too long. ;)
so funny when they got caught by the cop.
can’t wait for the next chapter
Wow I loved it!! The part with the cop was so great but then again I do think it would be really hot to be caught like this, there’s just something about unexpected PDA that gets me :D Cant wait for the next post…dont worry I wont wait by the computer this time…althought i’d like to…lol
pretty much agreeing with everyone else here – awesome story, update soon!!!!
What a great chapter. You’ve written both of them so well, I could totally see this. And too much with the sexual tension! Please post again soon.
OMG!!!! That was crazy!!! I’m totally diggin’ this story. Nix, you’ve got great comic timing with these two lovebirds…awesome
i could never prize you enough for your excellent writing, danish is so danish in your story,and i am one danish addict so cant wait for read more; just one plead, please keep hellena out of it,dont want her neither looking alice`s way, spoilers or not spoilers…chuicky
I can not wait to read the next part I am a bit behind with the storys this week post soon