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Numb: Chapter 2
She gagged at the copper smell that invaded her nostrils as she nodded at the name; Dana knew who he was talking about. Raun Sparks was one of the richest and most powerful men on the west coast. He owned a large tower in the center of
Coughing the man continued to weave his tale. His new buildingtheir in the foundationhis family He grimaced and tightened his grip on Danas arm. I was the foremanI taped ithis brotherhe killed His eyes widened in fear and pain. A shallow breath escaped his mouth, and Dana realized what his eyes open and dull were staring at.
She comprehending that she had inadvertently taped the conversation with her cell, having accidentally pushed the video recorder on when pulling it out to call 911. All she had to do was give it to the cops, but it was too late the killer had returned. Without even looking she knew her life was over and all she could think of was
Later at the hospital the F.B.I. took the telephone as evidence and took away Danas former life as well. The bullet that had passed through her chest cavity had missed all major organs, and except muscle tears that limited her right shoulder she was completely fine. She would never be able to play tennis again, not that she could anymore anyhownot as Kadie Rogersshe couldnt risk someone putting two and two together. Still her athleticism was something she longed for and she would find herself occasionally at a batting cage swinging at high speed fastballs. She would swing at the balls until her shoulder ached too much to even lift the bat.
Dana slumped into the couch, tears falling freely down her face. She was alone in this world, her family thought she was dead and no one in
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(45 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
amazing i love the story. please continue
This is great! So different and intense. Please post soon!
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This story is so……god, this is amzÃng. I don´t know what else to say.
WOW,THIS IS A VERY TENSE AND EMOTIONAL STORY..I LOVE IT…..GREAT JOB..PLEASE POST REAL SOON……..THANK YOU…
this story is intense, really great. I cant wait to see what happens next.
You’re keeping me at the edge of my seat! Soon pls.
i just read both chapters.. WOW! i’m out of words! please, don’t make us wait long! i hate to see all of them so hurt.. i’m weeping here :'(
this is awesome – post soon.
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Great twists & turns. I can’t wait to see what happens. Great Job.
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i wait… i pine… but still…no update. : O
Please update soon! This is a great fic I hope they find a way to reunite safely!
Splendid! Absolutely captivating! I am anxiously awaiting every chapter! More, please!
OMG! This sotry is fantastic! I just read both your chapters. . .this is so interesting. Please continue and post again soon!
WOW! I just read both of your chapters…very good story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
This is a great update ilovekc. This story is so good, I don’t know how you came up with it but keep it goiong
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This story is so intense!!!I love your writing!Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Wow this story is really intense – and excellent!
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It’s great to read something different! Gripping story!
Man your killing me here!!!!!!!! When is dana going to see everybody nothing can happen to bette and tina understand!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fantastic story, wheres the next chapter im waiting patiently. post soon please