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Numb: Chapter 5
Dana paced the tennis court of the city park. She had expected
Glancing at her watch she saw how late it was, if Al was coming she would have already been here. Her body began to tremble and she felt cold. Something wasn’t rightshe had to get to
Quickening her pace, Dana was almost moving at a dead run. Her muscles were straining and aching from lack of use for the last year. Her breath was hitching in her throat and if it wasn’t for adrenaline she would have passed out. Still Dana continued to push her body down the familiar sidewalks, her cheap tennis shoes pinching and rubbing against her feet. Looking up she spotted the familiar buildingshe was so close to home…to Al. With renewed strength she pushed her legs to move faster.
Rounding the corner, her body collided with another person sending her flailing to the ground. Her head hit the sidewalk with a sickening thud and she struggled to open her eyes and look at the person she had ran into. “You” No matter how much she resisted she couldn’t remain conscious enough to stand. The last thing she remembered was being picked up and carried awayaway from Al.
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Rolling over, Tina felt the cold sheet beside her. Shaking herself out of her sleep, she lazily set up and glanced around the room searching for that familiar scene of her wife peering over her computer. She was shocked to see that the brunette was not there. “Bette?” Fully awake now, she rolled out of bed and walked toward the bathroom. Noting the light was off, she started to feel anxious. “Angelica!”
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(32 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
So who dies next? *rubs hands in glee* Totally enjoying this fic, love how unpredictable it is keeps me coming back for more lol. Great update!
oh man…this is getting good.i suspected that the killer was the agent watching the house *points finger* i knew it! …man this anticipation is building fast :P btw, im loving this fic, great update!
OMG!!! The is f-ing brilliant! A fabulous thriller. I just read from the beginning! WOW! Please post again soon – You so rock!!!!
WOW… as if people havent already said that… dang, your story is as good as a movie! Its intensely well written… It is nice that all the friends have so much empathy for and are looking out for each other… keep the thrills coming.
Gripping! Suspensful! Thrilling! Keep it coming… :)
you can’t kill bette!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMF..R U gunna kill everybody?!:(..plz dun!..I am enamored wit this btw:)..POST SOON..
This is a really good story.
you’re doing this on purpose aren’t you? All I did was beg you in a not so subtle way to keep writting nonstop for the rest of your life with no concideration for your personal life….was that so much to ask?
I hope that they are all o.k i love this story please post soon
this story rocks!!!, I’m loving the building to the main event, its like walking in the dark trying to find your way back lolthere are so many peeps you could kill, and so many ways you could take this story. really glad to have you back writing for us again