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Off limits to me…chpt. 4
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The next morning…
Shane and Bette were outside by the pool…
Shane: "So, you let her go?" She was finding the news hard to believe.
Bette: "I had to." She stood from the chair and begins to pace the brick patio. "I didn’t want to. It was eating me alive Shane. Did I fuck up by letting her go?"
Shane: "I don’t think so. I mean…you’re right…she has to make up her mind, but, you could of still chilled with her every now and then. You didn’t have to drop her, like a bad habit." Bette collaspses in the chair next to her.
Bette: "I feel horrible…" She runs her hands though her hair. "I should call her."
Shane: "Do you want to?"
Bette: "Yes and no. I’m just freaking out Shane. I’ve been thinking about her since last night. It was worse when I dropped her off. It was hard seeing her leave my side and enter that house to a man who doesn’t care for her like I do."
Shane: "Damn…" She shakes her head. "You have it bad for her."
Bette: "I realized that the night my head was in between her legs." Shane’s eyes widened.
Shane: "Oh my god! You’re so wicked."
Bette: "I know. I’m going to hell for this." Shane rubs her back.
Shane: "Calm down." She rubs her back again. "I’m sure this will all work out for the best."
Bette: "I sure hope so." She looks away and falls into a daze. A mighty deep one.
Tina’s house…
Eric awakes to the blond lying next to him in bed. He smiles when he sees her. Eric inches over, and wraps his arm around her. Tina stirs in bed.
Tina: "Bette…" She moans her name. Eric’s eyes widen and his face turns red. The blond changes positions and extends her hand to touch the person’s face in front of her. After coming to the conclusion that this face wasn’t what a woman’s face would feel like…she opens her eyes and covers her mouth.
Eric: "Bette huh?" He gets out of bed and walks over to the dresser. Eric was furious. He felt like smacking the taste out of her mouth.
Tina: "I’m sorry…" She sits up in bed. "I must of had her on my mind. Baby, it’s not what you think."
Eric: "Were you with her last night?" Tina’s eyes widened. She didn’t want to lie, and she didn’t want to tell him the truth either. Either way it went…she was caught up in the game. "ANSWER ME!" This scared Tina more. She was afraid to answer the question.
Tina: "I should leave…" She gets out of bed and walks over to the closet. Eric follows her and blocks her.
Eric: "NO!" He pushes her backwards. Tina loses her balance and falls down onto the floor. "ANSWER ME GOT DAMNIT!" He demands the blond.
Tina: "GET OUT!" She stands from the floor. "GET THE FUCK OUT! I WANT YOU GONE, NOW!" She begins to cry. "We’re though. This is over between us. I don’t wanna be with you anymore." She opens the closet and begins tossing his things into the air. It looked like it was raining clothing.
Eric: "I’m sorry…" He feels bad and walks over to her. He tries to comfort her, but, she pushes him away.
Tina: "Get out…" She tosses his things into a bag and throws it outside onto the lawn.
Eric: "Baby, please…" He got down on his knees. "Don’t do this. I beg of you. I didn’t mean to yell at you, or put my hands on you. I was just upset and I didn’t know how to control myself." Tina rolls her eyes in the air.
Tina: "After your done feeling sorry for yourself…"She looks at the door. "Close the door when you leave." She walks away leaving him alone in the livingroom. She went into her bedroom and collasped on her bed. She cries releasing the love she once held for her ex in her heart. Minutes later…she heard the front door slam shut. This killed her more. She balls up in the form of the letter c…and cries herself to sleep.
To be continued…
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Well now that that little problem has been taken care of, it’s time to let Bette in.
lmao’ I love how the fans have no symphaty what so ever for past lovers of bette and tina, Lamentamini cracked me up Now if only we could have this come s4, but with Henry, you know, GET OUT! but that would to be easy, he could come back, I like the author who has written a Kill Henry vol 1, Ilene should take note!
incredible! two amazing chapters! i hope Eric gone definitly! now is time to Bette to get Tina! i am waiting the next!
or keishes he cud die in an unfortunate accident whose driver would be sum crazed out l word fan who hates henry a lot….i do happen to have ideas on tht lol…pls post soon this was a nice post sort of like if you love sumone let them go …… kind of a thing
well thats one way of telling eric about bette… but its over… i just hope eric doesn’t go and pay a visit to bette… tina should,call her and maybe warn her… love this story… please continue
my heart sank a little there…glad Eric just left and didn’t hurt her. I am ready for the next chapter. thanks!
Hope Eric doesn’t do anything stupid. I believe that Bette can take care of herself. That was a bad wake up call for Eric. thanks
tina should’ve call bette right away, it’s not good to be alone now
Sorry got behind on your chapters. Finally got caught up and, wow. Bette is now in the same car and not at the curp. Hopefully, Tina will call Bette and talk to her. Then maybe they could hook up for lunch or dinner.
This is great and hope Eric not do anything bad to hurt Bette or Tina. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Terrific post! please continue :)
Tina needs to chill and make sure she really wants to be w/ Bette. Nothing hurts more than feeling someone only to realize it was all one-sided. Awesome chapter now bring on some happiness for B&T.
WOW!!!!! That was great. I can’t wait to read more. Thank you
You’re welcome lady. Look forwards to another post tomorrow…for sure. Thanks for reading my story. :)
Well, now I suppose that Eric is going to call Tina’s mother crying like a baby….But Tina will not give a S*it and will still hang out with Bette, right? right? riiight?:). Post soon, thx.
Just caught up with this. Your doing a great job, looking forward to the next update. Tah,tah, Eric, hello Bette.
Hey chocolatemama…..I love this story! I’m amazed that Bette actually asked Tina to leave that night. If Tina doesn’t know by now that Bette’s playa days are behind her then she’s just dense. I’m sure the old playa Bette would have Tina screaming her name over and over that night and wouldn’t care in the least that Tina was having doubts. So kudos to Bette! And kudos to Tina for finally being honest w/ eric. To bad it came out the way it did but that still doesn’t excuse him putting hands on her. I have a deeling that the drama isn’t anywhere close to being over for Bette, Tina and Eric. Please post soon.