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The minute Tina walked in she knew everyone’s eyes would be on her, Angelica and Henry. She couldn’t help it. Henry always made it a point to make an appearance when there was any chance Tina would be seeing her “confused” friends. Henry calling her friends confused led to many arguments. Most arguments ended with Henry “stating the facts” and Tina giving in. Tina stopped going out with them all together so she wouldn’t have to hear it from Henry.
She hated the way he thought of them and knew it was because Henry was jealous and insecure which was kind of a cute trait for him. This time Henry didn’t have to push much to get Tina to let him come along. Tina kinda wanted him there so she could have support. Tina let out a huge sigh and walked into the waiting room.
She had never seen such cold stares in her life from her once beloved friends. Even Helena was looking at her crazy. Henry put his arm around her and with the other still held firmly onto Angelica. Tina walked cautiously to where Shane and Helena were sitting and sat down. Simultaneously, they got up and walked across where Dana and Alice sat. Tina tried to say something but Shane couldn’t take it and got up.
“This is bullshit”, Shane said.
“Shane wait!!!” Tina called after her. Shane turns around.
“No, Tina, not this time, you fucked up too bad this time. I can’t even believe I let Helena convince me to call you. One would think you’d have changed by now but I guess not. You know what, I gotta get the hell out of here because I can’t stand to look at your face!”
Shane stormed out of the waiting room and Helena follows her. She catches up to her and touches her arm.
“Shane wait you can’t go, we are here for Bette remember?”
“Helena no I tried ok… I really did, but look at her. Not only did she walk in here with HIM, he is holding Bette’s baby? That is total bull. Does she really hate Bette that much?”
Shane could not stand still; she paced back and forth while talking to Helena. She was so pissed her skin was hot. She would never go this far. Such disrespect, such spite, such just plain hate!
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Why are there ??? marks after TBC You better continue because I need to know who’s calling Kit and Tina. But anyway this chapter was great……Shane had everyright to be mad……. WTF was Tina thinking? Why would she bring Henry? But I’m glad now that she did…….She knows now what a brick he is…..Now get to typing Woman.
Wow this is good story and like it. What the hell is Tina thinking bring hendick to the hopital and hope not to see him again. Hope that is Bette calling them. OK post soon please, thanks!
yes to be continue! thank god tina saw the true side to hendick now kick him to the curve and be with your women…p.p.s.
Why did Tina bring her Boy Toy to the hospital. So glad that Tina heard him. He is such a male Pig. He is now in for a big surprise. Tina will never go back to him. the ass. thanks
I really wish people would stop using Shane to express their fangirly outrage and Tina and/or Bette’s behavior. Shane never chooses sides like that. From the very beginning, she’s always been written as a very neutral and sympathetic character. Quit trying to use her to take your spiteful shippery crap out on Tina – I really don’t give a crap about Tina but it bugs me whenever I see a Tibette use Shane as a mouthpiece for their discontent with the way the story is being told on the show. Bleh. 0 stars.
Mysti don’t let that previous comment get to you. You know you are doing a good job here so continue doing it. You are the author of the story so you are the one who decides which way the story goes and which way you take your characters ! And the people who dn’t like it pleaqse stop reading and go read other stories but don’t come here putting your negative comments just because you don’t like what you read.PPS.
as a comment to previous comment I must say I disagree. Writing fanfiction is the freedom of choosing wether you want a story to follow the original time and stroyline or you can mold the characters and happenings into your own liking and whatever suits the writer. And I must say I have read lots of stories where Shane is neutral and many stories were Shane is a support to either of Tina or Bette.. Both types of Shane’s are great as long as it is great written, that’s what really matter. Like your story, PPS love from a Helena and Bette fan
BeLena:”And the people who dn’t like it pleaqse stop reading and go read other stories but don’t come here putting your negative comments just because you don’t like what you read.PPS. ” Thanks for that, Belena! And let me say that here there are lot of nice stories, a lot of diversity, a lot of criativity, a lot of love, drama, romance, pain, a lot of life here… our girls, our sweet writers are greater to read than to see any sunday TLW show, people! The reason? The writers in this corner write with their heart and desire and soul and … They dialogue with us… They could change a story to pleases us, to respect us, to provoque us… The real one, the real and sadly TV show couldnt, wouldn´t, did´nt do it after all this years. Thanks…This a great story!
TBC… what??????? you can´t stop right here, honey… You´re killing us, man… :)
Bringing up the rear, it seems! Hey, Mysti–you now hold the record for taking nearly four months to post an update! I don’t think I’ve even been that long! lol But it was truly worth the wait! Please don’t let that unnecessary comment keep you from writing this story your way, kid! I love how you’ve crafted this dialogue and allowed Tina to see Bacne’s true colors! Why does it take tragedy to snap folks out of themselves? Don’t wait so long–of course this is TBC!
Mysti, great follow-up story. It is your story. You tell it how you want to tell it. You can’t please all the people all the time so F*CK IT. Conintue on. Write your story girl. The emotions are very real and very intense. The friends and (ex)lovers are on heightened emotions over Bette’s distress and pain. You write the emotions well. Henry being the dickhead you write him to be would warrant a very caring Shane to try to bitch slap Tina back into reality. Again it is your story do not be bothered by those who are small minded and only want to to see the story told as written by the show’s writers. BTW PPS