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    Once Upon a Time – Chapter 30

    Story written on April 4, 2005 by Chasemenow.
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    Zoe tells Madison the truth and Bette shares her feelings with Tina

    I dont remember. Madison answered like a petulant child.

    Stop being so stubborn and think for a minute.

    I promised that I would remember that you loved me with all your heart. I guess that was just one more piece to your plan.lull me into a false sense of security and then bam! Take me down.

    Zoe was still holding onto Madison and now she pulled her closer and kissed the nape of her neck. Madison started to struggle again but Zoe held on Shhh baby. That wasnt part of the plan. That was the Gods honest truth and thats why telling you this just ripped a big hole in my heart. Almost from the instant we met I fell in love with you and my fate was sealed when you held me the night I told you about my abusive relationship. After hearing you tell me tonight about your parents and how much you hate when people lie to you I couldnt go on without making this right. I want our love to be real. I want it to be based on truth. The truth is simple; I love you with everything I am.

    Madison stood there listening to Zoe and wanted to believe her. She needed time to sort things through.

    I hear what youre saying Zoe but I need time. I need to think through all of this. Can you understand?

    Yes I do. Ill leave now but please remember that you have my heart Madison. You always will.

    Zoe released her hold on Madison, got dressed and quietly walked out of the room. The whole time Madison stayed rooted in her position, not moving from the window, not even thinking. She just stared out into the star ridden sky. When she heard the door closed she collapsed onto the ground and cried herself back to sleep.

    Across town Bette turned when she heard the door to the pool open. She saw Tina walking towards her and quickly wiped away her tears.

    Hi T. What are you doing up?

    I could ask you the same thing Bette. Why arent you in bed sleeping with me?

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    5. And yet again you manage to astound me. Fantastic new chapter. The drama of Maddie and Zoe counterbalance by Bette’s remorse and Tina’s ever faithful luving.
      Can’t wait your your next post. Just make it soon, real soon.

    6. This is just a superbly written story chasemenow…..Every chapter leaves me wanting more….I am ‘rooting’ for Maddie and Zoe just as much as if they were B & T…..That is how much effect your writing has…..Thankyou…Can’t wait for the next one:)

    15. I am truly addicted to fanfic!!! Between you, Shades, Chicki, Amanda, Seahurst…I can’t ever turn my computer off!!!! Keep this story coming. You’re doing a wonderful job!!!

    16. Oh, I so wish that Zoe hadn’t left just yet. Ooh, maybe she’s just parked outside the door, and will wait for Madison to emerge, showing her where she stands. As for the moms, so lovely to see the balance in the relationship. And the intimacy. The romantic in me feels right at home in your story! Your writing is so readable and so enjoyable. It’s a happy time when I see that you’ve posted a chapter. Thank you!

    18. Chase this was wonderful both the old and new.
      Bette saying when am I going to learn to follow your lead and live from my heart and not my head does speak volumes to both Madison and Bette thanks for the post

    21. I just love Bette and Tina, after all these years one can still feel their love for one another. I hope Madison and Zoe can get there as well. Great story Chase.

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