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one consenting adult part 11
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“Hi Shane.”
“Hey Serena.”
“Going to see Bette and Tina?”
“Actually, I was coming to see you.”
“Oh, okay… well come on in.”
She followed behind me up the steps and into the house.
“Beer?” I asked closing the door.
“Sure.”
I threw my keys on the table and my jacket across the couch. Shane lazily walked into the kitchen behind me. I shucked the top of a bottle and handed it to her.
“Thanks,” she said taking a swig.
I did the same.
“So what brings you to my place?” I asked walking past her and into the front room.
I sat on the couch and waited.
“Evan.”
She took another drag of beer.
“Evan,” I repeated.
“I know about you two.”
“Us two.”
“Yeah.”
She sat back against the couch next to me.
“Yeah.”
“Are you going to repeat everything I say?” she smiled.
“Sorry,” I laughed.
“So?”
“Evan and me? There really isn’t an Evan and me.”
“That’s not what she thinks.”
“I know.”
“Are you playing games with her?”
“No, no. I like Evan. I really do. It’s just that…,” I sighed gathering my thoughts, “Evan wants what I’m not prepared to give.”
“Have you told her that?”
“I try to but every time I see her, I can’t get control of my feelings. My heartbeats triple and my mind goes blank. And all I think about is how beautiful she is, how innocent she is. I don’t want to destroy that.”
“Don’t you think you’re destroying her still by not telling her this.”
“Maybe I am, but I can’t… I know I’m being selfish. But I couldn’t handle being the reason for her broken heart.”
“So you rather drag this out. Torture her.”
“She’s torturing me!” I yelled jumping up.
Shane just looks at me.
“You’re looking at me waiting for me to realize that this isn’t about me and my ego. That this is about a girl, a young girl who has never felt this way before. I know that! Believe me, I know that.”
“Well if you know that, either tell her nothing can ever happen between you or get over yourself and open your heart to maybe something extraordinary.”
She drank the last drag of beer and set the bottle on the table.
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now who would give this a low rating… they needed to talk.. i do think even should have also been in on the talk.. but its a start… please continue
The reaction of Tina, Bette and the attitude of Serena is perfect with their characters. Good chapter.
wow..Serena did right that prove how much she care about Evan cuz face Bette like this is really have no fear to death..lol..now is time for Evan do soemthing and fight for what she think is right for them…and it seems Tina is more open to listen and help them..ok cant wait for more thanks :o)
Love rating gets to me ,at least tell them why. Bette is thinking of a 18 yr old and a 27 yr old Not love thanks Serene at least tryed to talk to them. Evan is really pushing Serena. thanks
This story has taken an interesting turn… will Evan throw a tantrum… or decide to sneak around Bette to see S?
No, this is a 5 without a doubt…obviously we still have some leftover resentment…Just don’t read it then!!!!!!! Anyway, great chapter, I thought that you dealt very well with the age/attraction thing!!! Bette, typical…tina, typical…..now let’s see where it ends up…There is so much attraction behind these 2 that something is going to give….great story, LOVE IT….*****
i’m so anticipating the next chapter!
I think Evan should of backed her up, I would give you 10 STARS if I could..In my opinion AGE DOESN’T MATTER IF YOU LOVE THEM…FABULOUS THANKS….
Well, at least there weren’t sharp objects around.
Serena was smart to anticipate that this wouldn’t go well. And even smarter to talk to Bette and Tina without Evan present, it would have been too easy to draw Evan in as a shield for Serena and a weapon for Bette.
I’m curious though…Tina was more calm that I suspected she would be – has she perhaps picked up on Evan’s attraction and just never brought it up hoping that it would eventually just fizzle out?
Tough topic and so well told.
Can’t wait to see how Evan reacts to her mothers. Bette has every right to be upset, she is only looking out for her daughter. I was suprised Tina was not as upset with this. Please post soon. Excellent story.
“what are you? Some kind of pedophile?” Loved it, and I was so anxious for this to start, now you gotta post more often, it’d be just plain cruel if you leave me hanging like this for days. POST SOON…AND IF POSSIBLE LONGER CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love this chapter. its great Serena confronted B&T and i think everything will be ok once Evan explains her feelings.