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one consenting adult part 5 (sequel to parenting)
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“Mom, Im almost taller than you.”
“Shes got a point there, Bette.”
“Tina, youre suppose to be helping me.”
“Why dont you look around so more, Evan? And Ill try to work on your mother,” mom said winking at me.
I huffed walking away. I really wanted that car. I cruised the lot looking here and there but not really absorbing the choices. A bunch of red cars… some more gold ones… nothing really fit my style. Then I saw her… the car that I had to have….
I ooohhed and awwwed over the orange glow paint. The silver detailing sparkled in my eyes.
“Aint she beautiful,”a voice came from under the car.
I jumped.
“Sorry, didnt mean to scare you,” voice said again rolling out.
I watched as a lean torso slowly showed itself followed by a face. A man… more like a boy sat up on a dolly. He wiped sweat off his face with a grease covered hand.
“You like?” he asked.
No, I thought.
“The car… you like the car?”
I guess my disdain showed.
“The car… yeah. Shes okay.”
“She? Already decided that its a girl?”
“Arent all cars?” I asked.
“I suppose. Im fixing her up.”
“I can see that,” I scoffed.
He smiled.
“Yeah, well after that… Im selling her. Interested?”
***** yeah.
“How much?”
“Havent decided. What you got?”
“I havent got anything.”
“Then why am I talking to you?” he said walking away.
“Wait! Wait! My mother… I can get it.”
“Have to ask MommyDearest, huh?”
“If you can wait a minute, Ill go find her.”
I quickly ran off to find my mothers.
“Dont take to long! I have other people interested,” he shouted after me.
*****
“Youve got… to be kidding me.”
“Mom, please,” I begged.
“Look at it.”
“Great isnt it?”
“Its big. It has rust all over. It dont even looks like it can make it down the block.”
“Its not that bad, Bette.”
“Shes not that bad, Bette,” the boy repeated.
That earned him a raised eyebrow.
“Are you sure this is what you want, Evan?”
“Yes, Mom. Yes.”
“What kind of car is this?”
“Well, Maam….this is a classic 1963 Ford Galaxie500 XL.”
“Okay.”
“How much are you looking for…um…?”
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excellent update!! i hope there’s more evan/serena interaction in the next one!!
damm she gots a old school bucket.
haha, shane always notices everything… will the next chapter have more interaction between evan and serena? 16 and 23, in two years, it’s what, 18 and 25, lol
Woo… is this the car?
http://tinyurl.com/8daef
*Meanwhile Evan’s playing with fire…
ok so wait….law school is three years so that has to make serena at least 25 right? Plus she worked after school so more like 26? bette is gonna freak something big! Then again great story so I will just go along with it:)
she’s a lawyer and she knows that 16 will get you 20… Serena watch your self… bette will have no problem kicking your ass… and i did shane notice something… i’m surprised she didn’t say anything to serena…
another great chapter… please continue
Evan enjoy your car cuz when Bette find out you will be punished for more 16 years..lol..i really like Evan and Serena involviment..i hope they could be together..great chapter please post soon thanks :o)
I love this story. If Bette finds out she’s gonna fuck homie up!!!. I cant wait.
DAMN GOOOD..I LOVE IT….WONDERFUL JOB…PLEASE POST REAL SOON……THANKS
Runaway let me preface this with the statement that REALLY enjoy all your stories. And here comes the but, 7yrs difference would make Serena like 22/23yrs old, right? And she was an ADA in New York City? The story is intriging but the math doesn’t add up for me. Maybe if there was big jump forward in time and were dealing with a typical May /December relationship. But a little creepy for me.