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One Moment More
“God, Dane….” She finally managed to get out. “I-I….” she stammered as Dana pulled away slightly, just enough to look into her eyes, and she put a finger on the blonde’s soaked lips.
”I only have a few minutes, so let me do the speaking, alright?” Alice could do nothing but nod, the lump on her throat wasn’t allowing her to form a coherent word. Dana could feel the warm prickle of her lover’s tears as Alice buried her head into her chest. A small smile appeared on her face as she realized; she was once again in the arms of the woman she loved.
“I’m here because you need to know some things. Things that I should have told you when I was, ermm, alive…” Alice winced, shutting her eyes tightly, she squeezed Dana even more. The brunette led their way to a bench nearby. Their bodies entwined, hanging on to each other like they’d never let go. They sat there silently as they became one. Dana caressed the blonde’s cheek with her thumb as she whispered…
“I meant it…” Confused, Alice blinked.
“W-w…hat?” she asked with a vulnerable voice.
”My last words Al… I meant what I said.” Dana searched for a reaction on Alice’s face before continuing, she didn’t want to overload Alice with too much sentiment. She already had enough overwhelming emotions. But some things had to be declared, and it was Dana’s last chance to do so. Dana held her hand lightly as she fixed her eyes deep into Alice’s chocolate brown ones. The ones that have been yearning to meet the eternity like blue eyes… Dana took a minute to absorb the gorgeous being in her arms.
“I’ve never stopped loving you Alice.” she whispered into her ear, sincerely. “Not even for a second since the instant we’ve met.” they both closed their eyes with heavy sighs, enjoying the feelings they were giving each other. “And that night, at 4am, when you kissed me, you opened my Pandora’s Box. I couldn’t take a breathing space, not because of you, but because of my own feelings. I had the urge to touch you, to be with you, to see you, to hear you and to feel you every single second I was awake. Even in my sleep, you consumed my dreams. It terrified me Al, and then I did what I do the best. I ran away… and I’m sorry, for the way I hurt you.” she kept her eyes down, ashamed. Alice lifted up her chin to give her a reassuring look “No one has ever made me feel the way you did with only a slight graze. God, Al you have to know, you have to understand, you were the only one for me. You still are, but I can’t do anything about it anymore.” She cupped Alice’s right cheek with one hand as she pressed her own cheek on Alice’s left. Tears streaming both their eyes, they nuzzled into each other.
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Okay, I’m crying. This is gorgeous and sad and wonderful and amazing and a whole bunch of other adjective synonymous with great, okay? Go you. Hell of a start to your fanfic career.
I meant to put an s on adjective. Duh me.
Ok I’m crying too, great story
Great story.Beautifully portrayed and captivating:) Thanks for sharing it.
wow that was sad. good job.
*sniff, sniff* Awesome and touching. You so got me…erm, what I’m saying is that the story really twinges with my heartstrings not you “got me” got me, I mean erm, uhh, argh yeah okay I’ll stop *grins*
Well done, and now I am all teared up along with everyone else. Much better than the writers ending. I think had they actually shot that scene I would have cried twice as much, but for different reasons. Keep writing, you have a definate knack for it, and I’m already a fan!
crying too!!that was excelent – damn i miss Dana
Wow! For your first fanfic that was amazing! Nice one! Cant wait to hear from you again
As sad as it was, this was also uplifting and so much more satisfying than they way things were left. And, yes I know you rarely get closure in real life, but one can dream right? Looking forward to seeing more!
Wow, you would never tell that was your first attempt, you write beautifully already and with such emotion. I’m very much looking forward to where you take this. PPS :)
That was beautiful! Much better ending than in thehospital! Bless you!