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Only the Heart Knows
Tina smiled. “I’m Tina.”
The brunette stared at Tina for a minute. “Is there something on my face, Id absolutely die!” Tina thought.
The brunette finally smiled, and Tina almost fainted. The brunette has the most gorgeous smile. It was one of those smiles that can make a whole room light up.
“Hi Tina I’m Bette.” Bette blushed slightly, which Tina thought was the most adorable thing on Earth.
(Nobody’s POV Present)
They were silently on their way to the house. Bette didn’t know whether to strike up conversation, or to just be quiet. She never felt so nervous around a person before.
Tina noticed how tense Bette was. “Why so tense Bette?”
Bette looked over at Tina, and smiled. “Just a lot of things on my mind.”
Tina smiled, and nodded. “I guess so with the wedding and all. I’ve heard a lot about you ya know. Jess is a lucky girl.”
Bette glanced at Tina, and smiled. “What have you heard?”
Tina smiled, and blushed. “Just stuff me and Jess talk about.”
Bette laughed. “Oh. So you two sit around and talk about me huh?”
Tina laughed and shook her head, “No I just listen, and she just talks and talks and talks. She’s so in love with you Bette.”
Bette frowned, and kept her eyes on the road. She didn’t want to think about love or anything to do with it right now.
Bette got off the interstate and straightened up. “So What does she say about me?”
Tina smiled at Bette. “Well she says how beautiful you are, and how great you are at you know.”
Bette blushed. “Wow you guys get to every little detail huh?”
Tina shrugged, and looked ahead again. “I guess.”
The conversation died, and Bette desperately searched her mind to find another topic.
“So Tina, who’s the lucky man in your life?” Bette mentally slapped herself.
Tina shifted in her seat uncomfortablely. “His name is Eric Sholtz.”
Bette slowed the car down at one of the many lights in town. She turned to Tina, and saw her looking out the window with the saddest look on her face.
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(60 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
Nice!!! Please, keep writing. This is getting interesting.
yay i like please continue!
very nice start. please continue..I would like to see what happens
ooOOOooo great idea! Keep it coming!
great start keep going
this is a wonderful start. please keep the chapters coming!
ohmigod I love it, great story idea. Please keep writing and soon…:-)Crazy…you’ve got skills!
Hmm…interesting… I can’t wait to see where you take this…AND to read the explanation of the arranged marriage.
Please continue…
OOh! I like the new B&T beginning…very intresting, I am looking forward to see how this plays out. Please post soon.
Oh my! What a dilemma! My my my my my!That was a really good start! I am excited about the possibilites here! Please, continue and post again soon. I am SO dieing to know what happens next!
very interesting start – i am looking forward to future chapters. Thanx
OOOhhh Yee I like this please continue
I’m hooked already and like your different point of view. More please.
Oh good I love B&T beginnings and this one looks very interesting. So MORE! MORE! MORE!
Damn this is good and very interesting and please post soon, thanks!
This should be interesting…please continue.
Excellent start! *Buckles in for the ride* Can’t wait to see where your crazyness is taking us with this. Jess better get out of the way! ;) Hehe
Interesting concept: Melvin Porter not only approves of Bette’s lifestyle, he even selected her partner for her! Please continue! Thanks!
oh this is going to just be so good. i love the twists you’ve added.
Interesting, I like it. please post soon.
sWeEt ….. :-)please continue soon!!!
Great start looking forward to your next chapter.
AAAAAHHHHH SHIT!!!!!!! THERE IS GOIN SOME HEAVY ASS DRAMA IN THIS STORY I CAN TELL. please continue i’m so intrigued. please post soon. PEACE.
i like it… i love this new twist… and melvin is actually happy that bette is marring a woman… can’t wait to see where you go with this… please check the rating… this is not an NC-17… at PG13 maybe… they are listed on the top of the page…if you need help in figuring out what is what…please continue… as soon as you can
I was hooked from the start! I think you’ve got a great story to tell. Please bring on the next chapter soon! thanks
i liked..and Jessica your out of the game..lol..Bette will say NO..great atart post soon thanks :o)
sounds interesting.post soon
Very much likey, pls post soon.
i’d like to see where this goes..please continue
interesting, please continue
Yes this is great another Beautiful start I Love it Please continue Thanks!!!
MORE PLEASE..THANKS
You got me! I’m hooked so you have to continue, please don’t leave me hanging! Great start, just don’t end.
now this is going to be fucking fantastic I can tell…I never read a bridesmaid one before oohhh Im liking this one right here