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Only Time Can Tell, Ch. 2
“Where the ***** is she?” Shane asked, ending the call. She grasped her cell phone tightly in one hand and began pacing around the hospital waiting room.
“Calm down, Shane. Dana said she had somewhere to be, remember? Did you leave her a voice mail?” Carmen asked, grabbing Shane’s shoulders to stop her pacing.
“Yeah,” Shane said with a sigh.
Carmen wrapped her arms around Shane’s waist and tucked her head under Shane’s chin. “Dana will be here soon. And Alice is going to be just fine.”
Shane’s trembling hands came up to stroke Carmen’s back. “I hope so,” she replied, her voice shaky.
Jenny sat in a chair nearby, looking dazed. “I hope Alice is okay. Dana is gonna be so upset. Oh God, and they just had a fight,” she was murmuring.
Hurried footsteps rang out on the linoleum behind them, and all three turned to look. Bette and Tina were rushing into the waiting room, Angelica strapped into a baby carrier held by Tina. Shane’s face fell when she realized it wasn’t Dana.
“Where is she? Is she okay?” Bette demanded immediately, her face pale.
“And where’s Dana? Was she with Alice?” Tina added, eyes wide.
Shane opened her mouth to speak, but found she just couldn’t seem to get any words out. Embarrassingly enough, she could feel tears welling in her eyes. She flashed Carmen a helpless look.
Carmen smoothly took over. “We don’t know how Alice is yet. We’re still waiting for news on her condition. And we don’t know where Dana is, but they weren’t together.”
“They were fighting,” Jenny said softly, wringing her hands together. “They had an argument and Alice stormed out and left. Then the accident happened, and Shane got the call, so we all came here.”
“How’d someone know to call? Did she tell them to? Was she conscious?” Bette inquired, shooting off questions at a rapid-fire pace.
Shane cleared her throat, finally managing to find her voice once again. “When they put her in the ambulance, she was saying Dana’s name. They found Alice’s cell phone and tried calling her, but she didn’t answer. The paramedics asked if they could call someone else for her, and she told them me. Then she apparently lost consciousness.”
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(53 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Brilliant!
whoa!!! didn’t see that one coming..lol!! great spin though…can’t wait to see where you take this one now….post soon
what’s it called….selective amnesia right!!! sorry just had to put that in cause that’s what I think it is…lol…anyways great job….again!!
ahhhh oh man didn’t see that comming really, this is getting real interesting hope you post soon!!
Oh no, there i was all pleased Alice was ok then you go and make her forget Dana. I love this and cant wait for next post.
OMG.OMG.OMG..I LUV U!!..that was jus SO damn good..fuk plz u mst post soon!!.NOW I say :)
That’s what I love about your fics, all kinds of things can happen. I love this! Good luck with the new job and have a good trip!
Wow totally unexpected. Really interesting. Thanks.
well. that was unexpected. :D cool twist tho. great chappy. post agen soon!
wow – that is one crazy spin to the story – post soon. great job!
oh no please don’t say that she has lost some of her menory so not fare to dana this will put dana into a fit of depression but I hope that she will stay stong for alice please post soon I love it
Your cliffhangers are always awesome!!!Great job!!
nice! love the twist of alice having amnesia. well at least dana and her can start over.