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    Out of Control chapter 9

    Story written on November 7, 2005 by Ja Ik.
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    If you have been keeping up this is what you’ve been waiting for.

    OUT OF CONTROL chapter 9

    Several hours had gone by when Tina emerged from her slumber. She awoke to a dark room and was momentarily unaware of her surrounds. “Alice!”

    Alice came rushing out of her bedroom, “Hey, Tina. Are you hungry?”

    “Why did you let me sleep so long?”

    “T, you were exhausted. By the time I was out of the shower you were out cold. You needed the rest. Beside if anything happened to you while in my care Bette would kill me.”

    “Have you heard anything?”

    “Actually I just got off the phone with Kit. She spoke to Ms. Ilene aka Cute *****. They’re getting ready to move Bette into a permanent room and took her off the respirator. As soon as she’s moved we’ll all be able to go in with her. So, are you hungry? You eat then we can head over back to the hospital.”

    They ate in silence then headed back to the hospital. When they arrived they found Kit waiting for them. “She’s been moved”, Kit told them. They followed Kit to the room Bette is now residing. To Tina’s utter relief Bette was looking better then a few hours before. She wasn’t so pale and the respirator was gone. The only sound to be heard was the heart monitor. There was an IV in Bette’s left arm. Someone had actually took care to cover the patch of missing hair.

    “She looks better then she did”, Tina said after taking in everything in the room.

    “Yes, she does. She really had me scared there for awhile”, Kit said to Tina.

    “Me, too”, chimed in Alice.

    “This is a good sign right? This means she’s going be waking up any moment”, Tina was sounding excited by the prospect and turned to face the bed. Kit and Alice followed suit. They stood there for a moment expecting to see Brown eye staring back at them. Nothing happened.

    It was Kit who broke the moment of silent waiting, “I hope this means she’ll be opened those eyes of hers and give us one of her trade marked smart ***** come backs. We just have to give her the time she needs. She’ll wake up when she’s ready. She’s been through a lot and she needs her rest.”

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    4. be still my heart. ah. the angst. cant wait to hear what she has to say to hellno. did bette hear what tina had to say about the baby? thanks for all the posts today. it was great.

    5. i hope bette won’t be mad after learning about baby and they can move pass the affair and get back together, tina clearly loves her and they can work it out

    8. Glad that Bette is waking up. /////////we are a blood thirty bunch, where Helene is concern. Hope Bette remember Tina saying something about the baby. She has to much to live for now. thanks

    10. i love this… so glad she is waking up… and good let alice take care of the BRAT/BRIT… can’t wait for your next post… great job…please continue…. soon

    11. wow I’m first…ok..love this story,and I have a feeling that bette will have alittle memory lost should be interesting,tina has to take alice number…lol…please post soon

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