Fan Fiction
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P1 – Another Cruise
View : On Board The Cruise. ….fiesta and activities going on everywhere , visualise different women having a great time b4 taking the camera to the girls giggling away and playing water polo in the pool on the sundeck.
Fade out to Carmen , Shane n Jenny heading back into their cabin to shower and getting ready for the bbq by the poolside tonight.
CARMEN : Id go first half giggling and pushing Jenny to the side.
JENNY : No no no me me , i got to shave !!
SHANE : Why ??? I think its ***** for a gal to have a bush.
The girls laugh hysterically as Shane rush into the bathroom giving the two other ladies a funny face.
CARMEN : Shave ?? laffffs
JENNY : Yea yea its lame :P
CARMEN : So , did we have a blast or what?
JENNY : Absofuckalutely.
CARMEN : How is your new story coming?
JENNY : Smiling her ever sweet smile b4 she answer ….Its coming along great….Wanna listen to a poetry i wrote for it?
CARMEN : Sure
JENNY NARRATE :
The other day when i look up in the skies i saw blue skies and white clouds.
The other day when i look up the sun was shinning bright.
The other day i looked around , you smiled and ur eyes twinkle.
The other day i looked around , i saw u sleeping like an angel on my bed.
But,
Today when i looked up in the skies all i see was darkness and heavy clouds.
Today when i looked up all i see was lightning.
Today i looked around , i could no longer see you.
Today i looked around , all i could see is an empty bed….
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hmmmm….you should try again
Can we have the whole body, not just the skeleton? Thanks ;-)
Well, this is a lot better than the skeleton you wrote. This fic is promising, you should focus more on the story.Good luck!:)
thnks Ragazzi ! i will try ^_^
i will write it out but that came on to me like 2am in the morning so the skeleton was written so i wont forget the feelings that i had at that moment…and its my first time writing so do let me know what you guys think ! thnks !