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    Pain

    Story written on October 24, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=78438
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    Single post – one-off

    Once impeccably manicured laws were scarred by the trampling feet of the panic stricken villagers, prize winning rose bushes lay in tatters, petals soaked in the blood their thorns had drawn as they lacerated the fragile skins when bodies were dragged through them.
    Patches of ripped clothing littered the street and ripped body parts hung down from tree branches. Gnarled headless torsos lay grotesquely thrown under cars, remnants of  innocent men, women, young and old massacred in their beds.
    Her leather booted feet continued on their path. Carefully negotiating the litter strewn street. Pumpkin lanterns, their carved semi-scary smiles still trying to spook the unsuspecting even as they lay half smashed into the pavement. Paper Halloween decorations blew in the draft of the broken windows, twirling hinged skeletons and plastic bats snickering at no one anymore.
    She was now so close to her task, her duty that would seal the fate of her family for another hundred years. It was her turn to feed.
    For she was special. She was no woman, she was a beast. Not born of the imagination of lore, as it was told a long time ago. She was real and she was dangerous.
    As she reached the top of the streets. They all came out to greet her. Her children lined the streets, everyone made by her. She was so proud of them, seeing them covered in the blood of their victims, strong and every bit as determined to let their kind live on.
    Tonight she would make them stronger again for another hundred years. 
    She was the key to a reign of terror that had raged on for centuries and all that needed was for one life to be taken by her hands every hundred years on Halloween night. She was a vampire, cruel and unforgiving.
    Her family spared no life, all humans would be killed.
    One of her children brought her the woman. When their eyes met a knowing smile crept on their pales faces. He held her up by the back of the neck like a meaningless weightless object.
    She was on show, inspected like a worthless piece of human flesh.
    The poor helpless woman begged and screamed, her tear soaked face distorted by a grimace of unbearable fright.
    She was released from the strong hand which had restricted her. As soon as her body hit the ground, she scrambled and tried to get away but a heavy foot landed on her back, flattening her against the Tarmac.
    She was made to stand up again and face the vampire.
    "Don’t be afraid," she whispered in her ear, "Your pain will be over soon and all will be forgotten." Careful and tender hands cupped the sobbing woman’s head and delicate thumbs wiped away her tears.
    The vampire’s head cocked to the side as her eyes flashed black. The woman screamed and her head was sharply ripped to the side; severing her spinal cord and breaking her neck in one seamless motion. She fell limply into strong arms. Cold pale hands brushed blonde strands away to uncover the faint blue line of strong vein just below the skin surface.
    Canines slowly entered her soft flesh and blood began to flow feeding the immortal soul. She moaned as a new life force entered her body, nourishing her with another century worth of life.  
    She dropped the lifeless body away and walked on, blood dripping from her chin and down her neck.
    She waited for it as she knew the pain would be immediate. She gasped as the acid sensation of vitriolic strength shot through her stomach.
    The picture on the large flat screen TV changed and now showed a pink and cheerful bottle of Pepto Bismol. A simple but yet effective jingle rang in the background chanting the soothing quality of the perfect remedy for the relief of upset stomach.
    "So what do you think, baby?" an excited Tina asked her girlfriend sitting next to her.
    "Sweetie," Bette started, weighing her words carefully, "Isn’t it a bit too much for an antacid commercial?"
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    4. “Sweetie,” Kword started, weighing her words carefully, “Isn’t it a bit too much for a Halloween fanfic challenge?”… Just kidding of course!!! That was so fantascary!!!… Though it’s very late as I’m reading this, and I’m a bit scared to go to sleep now… Thank you so much!!! :$ You gave me the creeps, so that’s definitely a compliment! Well done as usual, and so skilfully written! Bravo! xxx

    10. I was advised by BatnAA_2009 that you have a new story out. I have to say you got me at the beginning but I was the one who needed toilet at the end of the story for laughing too much.champ said it, you are incredible on story telling. Thank you.

    12. LMFAO! Kins you are so…. WICKED! I am so glad I waited until today to enjoy this. Wonderful pacing and perhaps the funniest dénouement I’ve ever read. At first I was thinking hmmm, okay Celtic folklore B&T style … until I was mid way through the first page. Then I was like “Vampires huh?”, then total confusion where I wasn’t sure who was who with all that “eyes met with a knowing smile… eyes flashing black… hands brushing blonde strands away” – and then WHAM… your fabulous ending! Well done kiddo. I’d raise my glass of Guinness to you but it’s a bit early to be drinking where I am ;) xxx iHH

    15. ROTFL!!!Damn if that is the only …commercial for some brand?.. I WOULDN’T BUY ONE!..lol!!! omg… this is hilarious!!! I never thought you had it in one?…Man now I’m torn? ..Well this is 10 too, in suspense and Comedy!..I.D.L….[I died laughing] …:))

    19. LOL… oh Kins!! :-D .. and what an ending!! Lmao! I was expecting the worse though in the back of my mind I was thinking it’s only one off and it’s only 2 pages? I must keep on reading and mentally prepared of something gory or bloody or disgusting .. But never in my wildest imagination to prepare my self not to laugh and giggling hahaha.. :o)x

    21. its past midnight where i am right now and the place was all too quiet until my laughter filled the entire room after reading this.. In short its your fault why people who may have heard me think that im some kind of a looney! LOL!

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