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    Paradise Found-Chapter 14

    Chapter 14

     

    (Saturday evening)

     

    “Shane, let’s just knock on the door and make her talk to us.  What are you waiting for?”

     

    “It’s not that easy, Alice.  We don’t know if she’s alone.  And what if we can’t get her to talk to us?  Sam will kill us if we mess up her investigation.”

     

    “We’re not going to mess anything up.  I can make her talk to us.  Besides that, we’ve been out here for 45 minutes and nobody has come in or out.  Who can stand 45 minutes of uninterrupted time with that freaky skank?  She’s in there alone…I know it.”

     

    Shane watches as Alice gets out of the car, “Fine, alright we’ll go see her…but we go together.”

     

    Alice walks up and knocks on the door.  They wait a few minutes, but hear nothing.  Out of the corner of her eye, Shane sees the window blinds move. 

     

    “I see you, Jodie….open the door.  We’re not leaving until you speak with us.”

     

    Alice bangs on the door again, “Open the door!!  It’s about Bette!  We have to talk to you!”

     

    Slowly the door opens and they get their first look at Jodie.  Her left eye is swollen and bruised.  Her lip is cut and she’s standing with her right arm tightly across her stomach.

     

    “My god, Jodie!  What happened?”  Alice pushes in through the door quickly.  Shane follows closely behind.

     

    Jodie limps slowly to her sofa and sits down.  “How is Bette…you said you’re here because of her.  I wanted to go see her at the hospital.  But things came up.”

     

    Shane is watching Jodie carefully….the smug, arrogance is gone. In its place is a nervous, jittery and very anxious woman.  Somebody has beaten the shit out of this woman. She decides that gentle is the way to go and asks her softly, “Why are you hanging out with a drug dealer and why was she serving drinks at the CAC exhibition?”

     

    Jodie sits silently…looking at the floor.  She doesn’t know what to do.  Those 3 guys busted her up pretty bad….and the threats they made about keeping her mouth shut made it clear who sent them. She knew Amy had some ‘questionable’ associates…but never in her wildest dreams did she think this would ever happen to her. 

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    Comments

    1. Thank you so much for this story. I’m enjoying every part of this story and the most enjoyable is the fact that their parents are accepting of their relationship which is just awesome. I hope they catch that Denbo bitch.

    2. Enjoying this story and it is interesting to read a story where there are both set of parents there for both B&T. I am glad that M&M got there before Tina left to take her shower. PPS :o).

    3. I know nothing will happen to our girls. So I am enjoyijng the story and how assess will be kicked lol. Denbo is crazy. I am glad that Jodi told Alice and Shane what she knows. Great chapy, please give us some more.

    4. God, the bitch is really crazier than I thought. Lord, please let him catch her before she gets away. Good that Tina recognized the voice and thank goodness for older and wiser nurses that don’t take bs from anyone. They’re like drill sargents that won’t back down. Great chapter. Thanks for posting.

    5. I’ve really been enjoying this story. Please post soon. I can’t wait for them to catch her and now she’ll really be in trouble for violating her parole.

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