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Pause The Tragic Ending – Chapter Two
“I thought her name was Natalie?” asked Bette, now completely confused.
“Natasha, Natalie, who knows? Who cares? I’m pretty sure you didn’t last night.”
“Am I really that bad?” asked Bette, suddenly concerned that her behaviour was completely inappropriate.
“You’re not that bad Bette. You’re a single woman, you can do whatever you want. Just try not to hurt anyone.”
“I never meant to hurt you, you know that don’t you?” replied Bette, now feeling truly awful.
“Bette, we hurt each other. We’re not supposed to be together. I realise that now and I think that you do to. We were just fooling ourselves before.” said Alice, eager not to have this conversation with Bette again.
“Do you not think that we could have tried harder?”
“Sometimes it doesn’t matter how are you try, there’s just no pausing the tragic ending.”
“That’s true, but…”
“So tell me about Natalie.” said Alice, interrupting Bette, wanting to move on.
“There isn’t really much to say. We left together, we came back here, we got laid. The weird thing is though, I don’t know where she is now.” replied Bette, feeling more and more puzzled the more she thought about it.
“You mean she’s not in your bed, waiting for a little morning activity?” asked Alice, completely shocked that anyone would leave Bette’s bed voluntarily.
“No. I’m guessing she left while I was asleep. You know what Alice? I’m too old for this.”
“You just need to clear your head, you’ll be OK. “
“I don’t know Alice. It just doesn’t feel that great right now. Yeah, it felt amazing last night. There was a beautiful woman in my bed. I didn’t have to think about anything. Just completely lose myself in everything that was her. This morning it doesn’t seem so clear.”
“Do you want to come over later? I’m not doing anything, apart from doing my research for my interview on Monday.”
“Maybe we could go to The Planet later. I’ll probably need some fresh air later and I should talk to Kit. It seemed busy last night so I’m presuming takings were good. They need to be. I love Kit and I believe in her but we both took a big risk with The Planet. The good thing is, it seems to be paying off.”
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I like the way you’re setting this up.Nice touch with Alice & Bette’s relationship too.
This is surely different how B&T will meet. I cannot wait. Bring it on..
is this a new beginning? can’t wait for B&T to meet
I so like the way this story is going. Thanks
I wonder if Natalie/Natasha was actually Tina and the Planet was just so damn loud and everyone was so damn drunk that nothing was heard correctly.
The setup so far is very interesting. Bette’s still sounding wistful over her breakup with Alice, and now seems to looking for something better… maybe she’ll find it at the Planet. Thanks for the chapter, cg. Post when you can. Cheers
I’m glad that you’re showing that Bette has a human side, rather than being WeHo’s version of ‘The Hunger’, an ageless, fleckless beauty who knows all women and knows no shame. Bette reflecting painfully on her single life is priceless. Thanks!
Hmm, maybe there will be another blond at the Planet when gets there… Thanks for the update.
What a pleasure to find you posting this story! Bring on the moment when B&T meet! YAY!
This is good and can’t wait to see B&T meet!
What a great update. Can’t wait to see how you make B&T meet. Thank you for this story. :)
So, was Natalie/Natasha really Tina and Bette just didn’t catch her name? I’m intrigued by this beginning. PPS
A new story from an excellent writer – I can’t wait to see how this unfolds. Always love the Shane/Tina friendship, too. Thank you, Citygirl.
is the mysterious woman Tina by any chance? For her night out with Shane she changed her name lol. uuummmm may behey. anyway can’t wait for their meeting hehehe PPVS
enjoying this beginning. thx