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    Story written on September 23, 2006 by chels1126.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62522
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    The taquitos are hot, and Shane is full of tricks. A Sharmen meeting.

    Smiling nervously, Shane asked, “Is this that really awkward part where we decide if we’re going to kiss or not?”

    “It doesn’t have to be awkward,” Carmen replied smoothly.

    Then, as if it was the most natural thing in the world, her eyes fluttered shut and she leaned in, catching Shane’s lips in a light, velvety kiss. They paused for a moment, enjoying the contact. Then, pulling her in closer by the waist, Shane massaged Carmen’s lower lip with her own with slow, sensuous circles. Carmen made a small, but desperate noise at this, sending a shockwave of chills through Shane’s body.

    Carmen’s tongue flicked lightly at Shane’s lips, and she opened her mouth, deepening the kiss. Hearing Shane’s deeper growl of approval, Carmen grinned internally and ran her hands up Shane’s neck into her hair, pulling those lips down hard against hers.

    Resisting the urge to press Carmen against the grill of the jeep and take her right there, Shane slowly ended the kiss, giving her one last peck before pulling away fully. Carmen pulled her face back down, nuzzling the side of her cheek. “I wanted to do that all day,” she admitted.

    With a chuckle, Shane agreed. “Yeah, me too.”

    “So you’ll call me?”

    “Yeah, I’ll call you.” Carmen finally let go, then grasped both of Shane’s hands, each of them wishing they could stay for a few more minutes.

    “I really need to go,” Carmen said, trying to convince herself to get home to take care of her nieces.

    “Me too,” Shane replied. She was supposed to meet Alice at eleven to smoke out and play X Box. As appealing as that sounded, all she wanted to do was stay.

    “Okay,” Carmen sighed, finally taking a step towards her Focus.

    “I’ll call you!” Shane promised, and Carmen laughed.

    “You’d better! I can’t read your handwriting on this post it!” she replied.

    “Good night,” Shane murmured through her grin.

    “Good night to you too,” the other woman replied.

    Again, they stood, looking at each other, wondering if the other wanted one more kiss as badly as they did. Oh what the hell, Shane thought, as she took a long stride towards the beautiful woman and pressed another heated kiss onto her lips.

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    2. Yay for Sharmen!!!! They really are perfect for each other…IC is just torturing us. Anyway, love the story and if this is just them kissing I can’t wait til they actually have sex…WOW!!

    3. Oh my GOD, that was great! Great! Great! Great! [I’ll probably leave another more detailed comment once I’m done geeking out and I get off this little high you got me on. :) ]

    5. Alright, so I read this again (for the third or fourth time, maybe), and I’m still incredibly impressed by it. Seriously. It’s awesome. The story has great details without being wordy; throughout, the quality of the writing is out of sight. On top of that, the actual content of the story is interesting and fresh. Shane and Carmen’s relationship is definitely going differently than how it rolled on the show, but you’ve still kept the integrity of their characters (It makes me think “So WHY didn’t it happen like this on the show?”). Also, the setting you’ve chosen (in this chapter and in the first) is very conducive to the mood, so it gives a really perfect atmosphere for the chapters. The entire story is a friggen gem! A gem, I say.

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