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Phoenix Rising (9)
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“C’mon Tina, I happen to know that a lot of women find skinny, ya know kind of sexy…Don’t be so hard on yourself. You really are looking better every day. Besides, you can’t not be hot…even when you try really, really hard.”
Tina gave Shane a sweet smile.
“Thanks Shane, even if you’re bending the truth, it still feels good. So what do you guys say, wanna call Dana? …and maybe even Kit?”
Alice jumped up and down.
“Yes, Yes, Yes, Finally!!!”
The girls spent a wonderful evening talking, laughing and crying on the phone with their friends and finally fell asleep together in the bed.
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The girls woke early and started quickly getting ready to go to the hospital. Shane dropped them and then went to do some errands. After hours of waiting and much poking and prodding Tina was given a clean bill of health. She had a session with the Social Worker that was a bit of an ordeal but after that they were all set to leave. Shane was waiting for them in the parking lot and said she had a surprise for them for lunch. They were going on a picnic.
“You know Tina, we have to leave this place with a happy memory. I found a really nice place in this park you’ll see.”
“That sounds nice Shane, Thanks.”
When they got to the park, Shane pulled out a cooler and a blanket and a radio.
“Shane this is so sweet…Thank you.”
They sat on the grass and ate, sang, and talked. Just as they were starting to pack up someone walked up behind Tina and asked.
“Ahem, would you mind if an old friend joined you?”
Tina turned around at the sound of the voice and unleashed a beautiful smile.
“Charlie…Katie…It’s so good to see you.”
They each leaned down and gave Tina a gentle hug.
“Chrissie, If I didn’t see you I wouldn’t believe it…you look wonderful.”
“Thanks Charlie, I still have a ways to go but…I’m feeling much better. Thank you so much…for …for everything…I really appreciate all you’ve done…”
“Stop that nonsense…it wasn’t anything you wouldn’t have done it the tables were turned and you know it.”
Tina smiled at the gentle giant as she felt the tears in her eyes.
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Kit hugging Tina got me crying. BRAVO, for doing that to me.
yeah brwnsuga, I got a bit misty when Alice gave Tina the clothes. I really like this story. thanks, DnA. :)
Wow what good friends to have Shane & Alice have really stepped up. I wish friends like that for all o us. Nice story
I’m loving this story more and more! Thank you so much for posting so frequently!
Everyone should have a Kit in their lives. Great story. Let’s get cracking and on to Bette! PPS!
I am dazed and amused by this story . . . thanks for the awesome post DnA.
Nice to see that your Kit and Tina still have fond feelings for one another – makes sense.
Having Kit meet them at the airport was wonderful. I thought when Kit showed up that Bette might be around. Wish she had been in the airport to at least see Tina for herself. They will get together at some point I’m sure and hope it isn’t too far away. Alice and Shane did a lovely thing for Tina and they are right she did the same for them and more in their long friendship. It was a lovely gesture for a lovsely lady. This is a wonderful story for two very warm, loving and resilient young ladies that deserve to love each other again. Thanks for bringing this wonderful story to us. Thanks for the shoutout. PPS
I am so hooked on this story…PPS so emotional
Wow, that’s real friendship for you. Loving this story.
Everyone needs friends in their lives like these ladies! PPS
such a tender moment..love it
Tina is home with her family. Let the healing begin.
this’s getting better and better. Many thanks for your posting :)
Hey there! I am on pins and needles now that everyone is being introduced back into Tina’s life…I’m strapped in, let the big one come!
Where have I been?? I just had the pleasure of reading your story from the beginning- and am thrilled to read you have much more already written! I agree wholeheartedly with the gist of everyone’s comments– this is such a heartwarming story, beautifully conveyed. I’m so happy to be along for the ride!
just read all 9 chapters and WOW… i almost cried in the first chapter… i love tina… i also love bette… so glad that mike guy didn’t bug her suitcase… and kit showing up at the airport… well the tears came… love this story… lets hope there is hope for bette and tina to get back together… great story… pps
Hey D&A, Just caught up with the last three chapters.And oh so much has happened.It was sweet that Tina had such good friends in Charlie and Katie. Tina does have closure now with her time in Phoenix.The call to Bette was so emotional and tender. It showed that Bette is still pining for Tina and she has grown up a lot in their time apart. Bette now wants to do what is best for Tina. It was so sad when they hung up and Tina was overwraught with emotions. This has been one helluva journey.Then returing to LA and Kit, How touching was it for Kit to be there with oepn arms and welcoming her sister in law home.I do hope that the gang can help heal Tina and get her and Bette back on track.I just cant’ wait to read more.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
You know I love this story right? And I love how often you post…I just can’t seem to wait for the next chapter LOL. I keep telling myself it’s only a matter of time…next chapter…it’s almost here..the moment…till then I’ll try to survive the next day or so till you post again. LOL Thanks so much! Wonderful, wonderful update.
I love this story. Thank you. I just can’t wait for Bette to see Tina. Thank you again. Loving this story.
What you do and how you treat people comes home,so glad that Kit was at the airport to greet Tina. Dana paying for first class and Shane and Alice true friends are hard to find and even harder to keep. Tina got her come around Love from her friends. thanks