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Pink Elephant
“Just thought I’d ask,” Shane closed the door after Carmen had successfully managed to get her bag out from the back seat.
They entered the dark log cabin and stumbled around trying to get their shoes off.
“Oh god… Ten feet and my shoes have already filled with sand,” Carmen said kicking them off and wiggling her toes to rid them of sand.
Shane gave her a strange look, “Are you high? You’re wearing sandals.”
Carmen ignored her as she went deeper into the cabin to explore. While Carmen wondered aimlessly around the small cabin Shane got busy making a small fire in the wood burning stove in the cozy living room. It all felt really surreal to her. To be back. The cabin even had the same old musky smell.
“Wow, only one bedroom? Where did you sleep when you were here?” Carmen said as she plopped down on the paisley printed loveseat.
Shane chuckled, “I’ll show you.” Shane stood after shutting the iron door with a loud creek and continued into the short hallway with Carmen right behind her. “In here,” Shane pointed to a closet door.
Carmen’s eyes bugged out, “You slept in the closet?!”
Shane chuckled, “No.” She opened the closet door but instead of a closet it lead into a bigger room with two small twin sized beds in it and a wooden ladder nailed to the wall beside the door.
Carmen smiled as she walked into the room. “Wow, talk about retro! Shane that bed is a racing car!”
Shane smiled. The place hadn’t changed at all. Even the blanket on the bed next to the window was still the same, made to look like a racing car. “Was that your bed?” Carmen laughed as she wrapped her arm around Shane’s and leaned into her.
“No, mine was up there,” Shane pointed up the vertical ladder to a whole cut into the ceiling about two feet by two, “Go up,” Shane nudged Carmen to the ladder. The Latina made her way up the ladder and into the loft above. She bent over when she got to the top and hit her head. She looked around and grinned. There was a small window at the far end of the loft and a large mattress laying on the floor beside it with old pillows with corduroy pillow cases.
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hi sweetie :)) i know i commented over at the other forum but i can’t help coming over to add more! :pjust loved the whole idea of shane’s and carmen’s getaway. wish you’d write more but if you don’t, i’d be contented with your amazing photoshop skills