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Planet Terror: Hell Breaks Loose
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“There are fucking hundreds of them! Fucksake! FUCKSAKE!” a young man screamed a highpitched wail as two of the infected broke through the wire fence and bit hard on his neck. His neck exploded in a shower of blood and his head came off all at once. His body lurched around, spraying people around him.
Bette came running out, maching gun in hand, and she, Alice and Lara cut down the twenty before them. One had managed to untangle itself enough to get through the fencing, and Bette shot it’s head off just before it lurched toward them.
“Helena, in the tent, now baby.” Helena shook her head, terrified to be away from Bette.
“AHHHHHHHH!” Helena’s former boss ran toward them, clutching his left arm, which spurted blood. “It bit me, it fucking bit…” Bette shot him in the middle of the head.
Alice and Lara rushed Helena back inside the house, pushing heavy items in front of the door, before kneeling behind them and aiming their guns to protect Helena. Helena could easily lift the trap door leading to her last hiding place, but she refused. She sobbed and screamed Bette’s name, but no one paid any heed. Alice, seeing that she had not opened the door, left Lara to cover them, and opened the door for her, gently nudging the crying woman inside and closing the door above her. Down in the darkness, Helena waited for the nightmare to end.
The sound of gunfire and screams could be heard for at least a half hour. Helena lit a candle and poured herself a cup of water, hands shaking so badly she had to pour it twice before any of it hit her mouth. Cramps began again in her belly, but she spoke to her child and tried to reassure them both.
She willed herself to be strong. Finally, the sound of guns ceased and all that could be heard were shouted instructions, and loud crying. When the trap door opened again, it was Alice, her face stained with tears, who reached a shaking hand to lift Helena up.
“Is it Bette?” Helena asked quietly. Alice nodded. “Is she dead?”
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Nice try, Alice, but you’re just not the leader type. Psycho Jenny terminating her creator was a neat bit of poetic justice. Planet Terror is shaping up to be a classic page-turner, and at the heart of it are two deeply sympathetic characters. Helena’s nightmare had better be displaced anxiety and not a hint of things to come!
The more you write and the more I read the more I like this cant wait for another update. thanks
This story had a little bit of everything and that’s what make it so good. Great update! And just like the infected I keep coming back for more.
Damn! That was at turns hilarious (Goddess & She, IC, Jenny), sad, and completely terrifying. This story is just bloody fantastic… you’ve always got me on the edge of my seat, you make me crow with laughter, and you’ve made me really like and care about Bette and Helena together. I don’t have enough thumbs to put up to relay how great I think this story and your writing is. Anyway, post the next soon, helebette. Thanks!
Did you see Omega Man? I frickin love this story
thanx for the fantastic update. u r doing a great job with this story. please update soon
I am officially scared – I need to go read something romantic – Ligea’s Poet springs to mind. Great update.
That Jenny is one tough critic. I wonder if she can take it as well as she can dish it out? But there must still be beauty left in this nightmarish world if she find the one for her, another label-lover.
I love it and can’t what to see what will happen next please post soon