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Chapter 12
Hit Dance Floor
The two women were momentarily lost in each other’s stare. They were the only two bodies who stood motionless amongst a sea of thrashing women.
Bette was the first to gather her bearings. She smiled at the beautiful blonde standing in front of her. Tina returned the smile shyly. She was the first to break eye contact, looking down for a split second just to center her breathing before looking back up at Bette with a more confident smile.
“Hi,” Bette was the first to speak, but breathed out her greeting making it impossible to be heard over the loud music and club.
Oh my God, she speaks, Tina thought. Even though she couldn’t hear her, she read her lips. Her full, plump, kissable lips.
“Hi,” her own greeting barely above a whisper on her smiling lips.
It was just then that it hit Bette that this woman may have just been trying to get through the dancing crowd and more than likely had a jealous girlfriend nearby.
Bette took a step forward and to the side stretching her neck closer to the side of Tina’s head so she could hear what she was about to say. Tina instinctively cocked her head to the side leaning her ear towards Bette.
“I’m sorry, were you trying to get by? Am I in your way?” she asked, her volume level higher to drown out the sounds of the rest of the club.
At the sound of Bette’s spoken voice, Tina slowly closed her eyes and let the angelic sound resonate throughout her entire being. The actual words processed a second later and she realized that she hadn’t answered yet.
Tina re-opened her eyes and stuttered, “Oh, um…” she turned to face Bette again and any knowledge of the English language escaped her as she was mere inches from those dreamy lips. Breathing a chuckle at her own bashfulness, she swallowed and could only softly shake her head with the same shy smile as before.
Is she staring at my lips? Bette wondered. She devilishly wet them with the tip of her tongue before leaning in close again and asking, “Would you like to dance with me?”
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Wow. what a song to dance to as well talk about perfect timing. Ty:)
I hate cliffhangers! Love this story, love the way you tell this story but I hate being left hanging. Great update.
Too frickin cute. Great job writing such a lovely moment between our girls and describing their thoughts and emotions. :)
Great update. That is a perfect song for them and I love the way you are writing the story. They are both goners already. But who was coming out with the four-letter word and at whom was it aimed? Gee. lol Thanks for posting.
Story is intriguing and hot!
huh? We’re in phase II? Dang it!”as in bet you’re glad it’s one syllable” really Bette? Okay if that’s what gets you the digits. Thanks meloveslu foreva
Trouble ahead.Love your story.Thank you for the update.
Amazing update. I’ll use my “brilliant” sparingly now cause I can’t have you being immune now can I :) Can just picture the whole scene. Thank you again for a wonderful story.
Thanks meloveslu! …. :-) although you left me hang in here …. :-/ …. I must hang on as melovesthis story! :-) it’s so cute that Tina is the one who seems like an idiot :-p but actually is the one who has the power of the earring! :-) LOL … I think most Tibetter loves the earring story ;-) PPVS?! Thanks! :-)
Oh damn bad timing Dana lol, Bette and Tina are so cute and sweet and hope they will get to know each other more, love about the erring. Now who the hell is say “Fuck You” there, im gonna slap that bitch ahahha. Please post more, thanks!
Hi meloveslu, thank you another wonderfully written and pacd chapter. Suddenly there were only two people on the dance floor. Their eyes held each other, followed by their arms. It was adorable to have Tina so entranced by Bette all the while Bette was just managing to hold on to her heart. I can just see theym swaying gently to music and begining this dance of love. Then the humor kick in when Dana arrived, Bette backed off and then Tina found her voice and explained everything. And then the cliffie. you are so cruel. Awaiting your post impatiently. Many thanks for continuing this awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.