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Powerful Feelings – part one
‘I know, I know, I deserve it’, Bette though but she didn’t want to hear it, especially from Shane, especially not tonight.
‘Anyway what’s happening with you, how come you’re not out with some hot date, it is Saturday night? ‘Bette quickly tried to avoid a confrontation about Tina.
‘Oh well I didn’t feel like going out tonight I didn’t want to do the usual one nighter I’ve had enough’ Shane mumbled.
Bette stared at Shane, was she hearing right. ‘Shane has something happened? Is everything ok? Are you ok?’
Shane shifted her feet and started to look very uncomfortable.
‘I’ve er, well I’ve kinda got feelings for someone and, er, it’s not easy for me to be with people right now’ Shane confessed.
Bette was surprised with the answer Shane had given her, was this Shane telling her that she had fallen for someone?
Something was defiantly not right with Shane, maybe Shane had come round to tell her about her own problems, no, Shane didn’t do heart to hearts about herself, she didn’t talk about her feelings, she was always ‘there; for the others, for her friends, or her family as she liked to call us, but she never talked about relationships other than the sexual side.
Shane was onto her second bottle of beer already.
Well Bette thought we’ve all got our problems, Shane will tell me if she wants to but I’m intrigued who this woman is. I know she was into a
‘Have you seen Tina, Shane?’ Bette needed to know.
Nope. She’s at
Well, Shane can’t be the messenger or the judge here then.
‘Shane is everything ok? Its just you seem kinda weird?
Shane’s heart was racing she couldn’t believe Bette was asking if she was ok. No one ever asked Shane if she was ok. Shane had walked round Bette’s road for half an hour before she had gotten the courage to knock on the door, tonight she was gonna tell someone and that someone was gonna be Bette, Shane had to tell Bette she had to tell someone otherwise she was gonna leave LA she was gonna leave for good and not come back.
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(43 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Oh Wow, this is cool. You definetly have to post the next chapter REAL SOON. I like your version better than Sho-times. Please continue!!!!!!!
I love it…Post soon!!
Interesting start. Does the mystery woman’s name begin with a B by any chance?
Is Shane talking about Bette?Great start and post soon.
OK, a while ago there was a story that never was continued that had Shane crushing on Bette. I waited and waited for it to continue because I wanted to see where it went and alas, it never did. Now you start this one and I am so loving it! Continue please…interested to hear Bette’s reaction!
this is a completely new spin on things….u must continue…i havent read a shane/bette story b4
Excellent start, I am looking forward to seeing this story progress.
yeah this is good. I would love to see how the 2 cassanova’s will be together. pls continue.
What an intriguing beginning. I like your style and need another chapter quickly.
Great writing But Bette & Shane Hell no
I like you writing very much, but I’m not crazy about the storyline. In my head/heart only B&T can be together….but that’s just my opinion.
def gotta continue!
Right on Fay! So glad you posted your story. Can’t wait to see what happens next.