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    Frozen – Chapter 1 – Prelude to a storm

    Story written on April 4, 2014 by Bette0Porter.
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      • • • It was raining, that night, but the weather conditions were nothing compared to my inner turmoil. Bette just brought Angelica back to me. I spent three excruciating days without seeing her; without knowing anything about their whereabouts. I had been this close to lose it and kill myself, for the panic was too

     

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    It was raining, that night, but the weather conditions were nothing compared to my inner turmoil. Bette just brought Angelica back to me. I spent three excruciating days without seeing her; without knowing anything about their whereabouts. I had been this close to lose it and kill myself, for the panic was too unbearable. I needed my baby. I kept telling myself: she took my baby! And I didn’t realize, that day, I was doing just the same thing to Bette.

    As soon as Angelica and I were reunited, I wouldn’t let anyone touch her. Bette, as far as I was concerned, was the last of all people that could come close to her.  I would cling onto my daughter each time she came closer. I made sure she couldn’t touch her, or even look at her. Her sad eyes, her pleading voice: they did nothing. She kept asking me to forgive her. She said she did it out of fear, for she didn’t want to lose her daughter. And there I snapped and I said something I regretted from then on: ”She’s not your daughter! I’m the only one who got that privilege. I gave birth to her. You’re nothing to her; she’s nothing to you!” O, how I wish I didn’t utter those words.

    I knew I had hurt her. For a few seconds I enjoyed it, but the look on her face… it was something I’ve never seen before. The look of pure, deep and bitter anguish. I could feel the agony clutching her soul. Her eyes, clouded by tears, fixed on my daughter and me, were asking for one more chance. Something that my too-much-beaten heart failed to give her, at that time. I couldn’t bring myself to forgive her. She deprived me of my daughter for the longest three days of my life… something that brought me to doing, exactly, the same thing to her.

    In the days that followed, Bette came to me, at Henry’s (the man – may I be damned – that I was dating at the time) apartment, banging on the door, begging me to let her see Angelica. She’d been doing that for the next three months. Each time, I asked her not to show her face ever again. The last straw was when I told her I finally decided to let the man adopt her.

    I’ve never seen Bette since then.

     

     

     

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    1. Great story! Hope you’re not gonna keep us too long in suspence. Love to know in what way our dear Bette has changed and how the two of them are gonna react after seeing each other after all this time.

    4. Wow, Dear!
      What a start (with a little drama, right?) :-)
      I really liked, and I look forward to the sequel.
      I wonder how Bette changed?
      but I hope in the end, you stay Tibetter : P
      I can not help it, you know: I love the “happy ending” :)

    7. Great start! I hope this story isn’t like some many other. By that I mean “the author starts and never finish it”. I know we all have lives but don’t start something you can’t finish! Looking forward to the next chapter I hope. PPS

    16. Sorry I’m a late to this story. I went back and tried to find your first ever posting. Was it Finding Our Own Path? I seem to remember that one, but anyway, I decided to start back with this. It was really hard for me to read, a bit anxiety provoking from imagination what Bette went through not being the birth mother. It is something that has always been a worry for me. Men, whether biological fathers or not, have more legal power than women in these cases, particularly since same-sex parent adoptions are usually not legal. But I’m glad it looks like Tina has rethought this. I’ll get to the rest of the story, slowly but surely…promise! :)

    17. I’m reading this story for the first time
      I will confess I am feeling all the drama
      that will seguir.Bette and Tina separated by 6
      years and a reunion of freezing the heart
      Tina.
      5 stars.

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