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Pretty Women, episode 10
* * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * *
Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:
* * * * * * * * * * * * TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *
**************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************
We see a reshot Tina in the bathtub singing Prince, and Bette asking her whether she has someone at home waiting for her… As the answer is ‘No’ the brunette asks the beautifull blonde to spend the week with her.
# the scene fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before
the camera turns and we see Tina, laying in the foamy bath, looking up at Bette, ashtonished #
The song: ‘Stay with me’ by Josh Gracin starts playing.
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Pretty Women, Episode 10
A day… Thats what Tina Kennard had expected when Bette had told her about her bussiness-proposition, and the prospect of another day and maybe even night of spending time with the brunette who had captured her hea…
The blonde frowned at the thought, at the word that entered her head to finish that thought, and she quickly replaced it for ‘attention’.
But now, Bette had asked her to stay a week, and Tina felt how the quiver of her heart followed the shivers that went though her body.
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Weeeeeeeee! brb xD
This story is wonderful and I do hope you will continue it soon. Thanks for posting!
Gotta love Josh Gracin. I remember when he was just the Singing Marine on American Idol a few years ago. I have a feeling it’ll be 2008 before they kiss. xD PPS!
Yay, you’re back! :) I’ve missed you and this story (one of my faves)! Please post as soon as you can! BTW, Happy New Year!
Welcome back and Happy New Year! BTW, you 1st post of 2007 was great!
Love it!
Awsome chapter…. Wishing u a happy new year and looking forward to more of this sotry.
LOL@lament…great update, i totally can see B&T talking about money in that flirting sort of way, and i can picture them better than julia and richard
THANK U! THANK YOU! THANK U!!!!! This was such a WONDERFUL treat for me to be able to read one of my FAV and MISSED fics while sitting here in the jury assembly room waiting to do my civic duty. Thank u again. fantastic as always. However, it is TORTURE waiting for the kiss! PPS!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
Oh my goodness…this is some good stuff. This is as vivid as watching it on tv. I am so going over the movie in my head but with Bette & Tina’s faces. How do you do that? Keep on doing that. I am loving this.
What a perfect way to start the New Year!!! pls more chapters!! of everything
way to go pretty women!it took you long enough for the update….congrats on the girlfreind part.p.p.s.
Wow, usually we wait for the sex scenes but it is reversed here because now we are waiting for the sensual kiss. This was worth the wait and I am sure that the kiss will be worth the wait also.
Okay my young friend, let get 07 going a post as regularly as you can. at least one a week. love this story as well as the movie. hope 07 is good to you and your. GRAAAA..thanks so much for posting PPS
Damn this is so good and Im with honda90 what a perfect way to start the New Year and can’t wait to see the kiss, they first kiss gonna be hot. Ok post soon please, thanks!!!!!
so happy to see you post. I think we are going to need this story…don’t see in Tibette love coming in S4
Another beautiful chapter :) Can’t wait for more!!
Hey!!!!!!!!when u said short u meant it come on 2 pages!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! longer, you know it b&t r sooooooooooo cute together.. get back to BOF like now lol
wonderful post! i missed this story but posting you give us a great gift of New Year! thanks so much for all my friend and thanks so much for continue writing such a lovely stories! take care and a super big hug!
And where’s the kiss? Hahaha… oh wow… have I told you how much I love this version of “Pretty Woman” more? And I’m sooooo craving to watch it… for the upteenth time now ;) May this new year bring more joy to you too :D
OMG…what am I saying, I don’t even believe in god. I have goosebumps all over my body. This story is so deep, so beautiful, I even forgot that you let us wait so long for this chapter. Falling in love before they even kissed, girl I want that kiss so desperate…could you please post very soon huh. Dit is toch wel echt één van de beste dingen die ik tot nu toe gelezen heb hoor, ik zeg dit niet om te slijmen zo ben ik helemaal niet. Maar Pretty Woman had een award moeten verdienen en ik denk dat ik niet de enige ben die er zo over denkt. Een geweldig 2007 voor jou en je liefste gewenst en veel succes met je stage.
Thanks for the beautiful chapter Mom =)I’m sorry I took so long to comment.BIG HUGXoX
Wow…another wonderful post mate, you know I love this story :o)) Buuuuut how long are we going to wait for that KISS???? LOL. Post soon, you can’t study all the time :o))
YES – an update on this wonderful story :O) and do continue because we love it and we want more. This is so good and you know it :O))) Post soon
First of all, I wanted to say that I always think it’s rather grand of you to respond to comments individually, and I hope that you continue to bless us with your fine creativity into the new year! That said, YOU’RE DRIVING ME MAD!!! Oh, but the torture is sweet!
(Singing on the Eurythmics melody)… Here comes the tease again… Yeah, as if I’m gonna buy that they’re about to share that kiss… Yeah, right! Hey, I know your style ya know! LOL… But that’s also why I love it! Okay, so, you know what I love about this story as well (amongst thousands other things)? It’s that in a way we get to know what could have gone through Edward and Vivian’s heads during those first moments together. I mean, of course their feelings wouldn’t even come close to what’s happening between our B&T (that goes without saying… Duh!), but still, it’s kind of nice to have an introspective version of this movie… See what I mean? Anyway, still love this, and everytime I read a new chapter, i feel that you’re giving a whole new and magical dimension to this story, and in a way, it’s a wonderful present that you’re giving to B&T… and to us! Thanks! ;)