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Pretty Women, PILOT
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PRETTY WOMEN
Pilot
Bette Porter looked around her gallery…
Tired as she was she did not want one thing to go wrong this evening.
Some artists were chatting with investers, a magician was entertaining the guests…
Bette observed him for a while, absentmindedly stroking the fabric of her D&G powersuit…
Some dark curls escaped from her perfect hairdo, and accentuated the classicly beautifull features of her face.
Left pocket
She mumbled seeing the magician make a lot of hand gestures, and indeed the illusionist pulled a silk handkerchief out of the beautifull blondes left pocket. Bette sighed while reaching into her own pocket, from which a buzzing resounded. Taking out her cellphone she flipped it open on the way to her ear
Alice?Where are you?
The answer seemed to upset Bette because she turned around and faced the window… Her big chocolatebrowneyes showed hurt and she closed them temporarily while wincing
I see… I don’t agree Alice… You don’t talk to my secretary more than you do to me?!
She swallowed and the look in her eyes changed from hurt into anger, but she knew herself too well to not know that she was just acting angry in order to hide her true feelings
No, I don’t expect you to be at my beck-and-call. Are you coming or not?
An answer the beautifull brunette clearly did not recieve for she hung up less than a second after uttering the last word, leaning agaist the wall to hold her balance
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Downtown Tina Kennard was in her somewhat shabby apartment, getting ready for the evening… She shook her head on order to fix her shoulderlength red hair and her eyes fell upon a postcard that was stuck in the frame of the mirror… She sat down, taking the card, flipping it over to read it for what seems the millionth time considering the creases in the piece of paper
Hey mum…
I am having a good time with grandma…
I wish you were here though…
I miss you a lot!
Grandma says you will come and visit me soon…
I hope you will…
Your loving son, Jamey
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… My, my, could I be the first, for once ??? I’ll come back to comment in a while !!
I like, but fomatting was messed up. Post soon.
Yeah, the formatting is REALLY off. lol Anyway this looks pretty interesting. Mmmmmmmm red-headed Tina. Ahhhhhh *drools*
Yeeesss indeed, I was first ! (*big grin & childish joy*)Ah, so delighted to discover a third story by my dearest author ! You’re pretty amazing, you know that ? ^_^ — Now, believe me or not but I was also thinking from a while about possible “lworded” movies and the irresistible Pretty Woman was one of my first thoughts !! God, could we share a bit of telepathy here ? (*wink & smile*) — Two thumbs up for your pilot, my talented writer, and I mean it ! Not only the idea of my own favorite character playing Gere’s part delights me, but discovering a redheaded Tina is really something and I simply cannot wait for their encounter now. And Alice still being Bette’s girlfriend is a very good idea, as well as Eric being the lawyer of our gorgeous gallery owner : no doubt complications will quickly follow ! — Few words more : it’s almost 1am here and I’m currently huming Orbison’s song in front of my computer, looking up to the sweet moonlight above the trees… Now how could I go to sleep ?? O la la ! — Many thanks for this new story of yours, JLBT, I’m more than ever your faithful reader ! ^_^ *A*
Wow! Pretty women, walking down the street.. LOL. So Tina has a son then… and Eric will be the jackass lawyer? LOL…Interesting start! More please
I like it. Continue. Good Job.
Wellllll Done!!!!!! This story has a great future… redheaded Tina it’s too much!!!! please post soon ;)PS: See you in the fan fiction social thread :D
Great story. Keep writing. My formatting was messed up too. But still love the story.
That’s interesting. I’m wondering whom the father of Tina’s son would be. Is it Eric? Lawyers are always described heartless. So he could be the perfect candidate to abandon Tina and their son.
i know formattin was fucked up but i jus incresed the font sized and was readable ..i really like this story..your stories make me smile your fan
Whoa format! But an excellent start nonetheless. As someone who has never seen “Pretty Woman” I’m pretty much in the dark about where this is going. I know the plot, sorta, but other than that, I know nothing. So it’s going to be really fun reading this…especially with the format! Haha. Excellent start, please post more soon!
i’ve seen this movie like 100 times (and some of them were in russia, in russian LOL), so i’m ready for the journey
Whoa, you did it girl!!! Is the red hair that Tina is sporting a wig like in the movie. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next post. Can’t wait to see if you do the tub seen with Tina as the main attraction. This is going to be so GOOD. See ya later gator.
Format is off but I like the story nontheless. “Pretty Woman” happens to be my all time favorite movie, everytime it comes on I watch it. You know what I think LH is a natural redhead, but don’t quote me. I have seen a couple of movies where she is a redhead. I think I like it better than the blond! To Manda L- OMG youv’e never seen Pretty Woman, oh th shame!!!, you must rent this movie right away, it’s a classic!!!lol
Format fixed.. Didn’t read it yet.. But I’m sure I will later..
TBC???? Absolutly, you’re onto something good, pretty interesting first chapter.
waooo! another one! how do you do? this pylot seem has a lot of funny behind it! you can bet i definitly will read it! of course TBC! you show us the title now let us watch all the movie! just let me go for some popcorns! this will be so good!
JLBT you amaze me, another fantasy :) bless your B&T heart. A promising start for another JLBT sweet romance.
Ahh always love B&T beginning and this is good start and like it. Tina in the red head, Bette don’t know how to try around LA and this is will be fun. OK post soon please, thanks!
hey just love the beginning of this please carry on i think it will be good
I like it! A lot!….eh..make tina blond again!…
I like it! Pretty Tina walking down the street…Pretty Tina the girl I’d like to meet :-)
Pretty Woman is my favorite movie of all time :D Although I didn’t understand it at all when I first watched it in the cinema when I was only about 7 or 8 years old? Haha… But I definitely found that Julia Robert was sizzling hot in that movie when she was preparing for her ‘shift’. You definitely should continue.. btw, I donno why I can’t leave a comment in your other story… so here I’m gonna leave comments for your other stories as well… love your stories… hope B&T will see each other again soon in your fairytale… oh gosh, it’ll definitely be very touching when they see each other and… erm… let me dig in my memory first… oh ya, life is not always as easy and goes smoothly as B&T in TBOF… but just try to enjoy the smooth sail even if it’s just for a short term ;) but of course I’m hoping for a long term smooth sail… who wouldn’t want that right?
Loved it B+T. U have got something here I can’t wait to read the next chapter
I love the movie and I love your writing, so how can this go wrong….it can’t LOL!!!! So I’m looking forward to this, but I don’t like that our sweet innocent Tina is a tart…Bette to the rescue!!!! Please don’t forget “The beginning of a friendship” I totally love that story :o))
TBC(?)…..JLBT this is one of the dumbest questions i’ve ever heard. Of course you have to continue. Wat is dat nu voor een vraag, ik echt gek op jouw stories al begin je nu met 20 ineens, ik lees ze toch allemaal. Schat (sorry als jouw g/f meeleest) jij doet hier een enorm werk op het forum, en dat meen ik. Can’t wait for the next chapter.