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”Peggy suggested the beach house.I think that’s a great idea. There will probably be about 20 of us so I couldn’t accommodate it at my house and I don’t want to have it in a public place.”
Dana placed her murky protein shake on the table and got her PDA out of her bag. She wanted to check her tournament schedule. “What’s the date?”
”Francesca and I think we should do it about a month before the due date so we’re looking at July 17th which is a Saturday.”
They all take out their Blackberry’s and PDA’s and plug in the date. There were no conflicts so they agreed on July 17th at 2 pm at Peggy’s Malibu mansion. Bette would send out invitations.
Francesca: OK who wants to help with decorations?
Valerie: I’ll help.
Leigh: Me too.
Alice: I want to be in charge of the party games.
Bette: Only if Dana helps to keep you from going overboard.
Dana: I’ll keep her in check don’t worry.
Tina: I can ask my friend Sam to do still photos and videos if you like?”
Bette: That would be great Tina. I was thinking of asking Lisa but if Sam will do it then Lisa can join the party.
Tina: I’m sure she’ll be happy to do it. I’ll see her at work tomorrow.
Jenny: What about music? My friend Shane’s girlfriend Carmen is a DJ. She’s always looking for private gigs.
Bette: Sure. Have her call me.
Peggy: Well it sounds like we’ve got a plan. Bette if you and Francesca will get with Douglas on the menu we’ll get the food taken care of.
Marina: What about gifts? Are you registered anywhere?
Bette: No Francesca, Peggy and I were planning to do that this afternoon if anyone is interested in joining us. We’ve got most of the furniture on order but of course we’ll need all the accessories.
Tina: I think I’d like to come along if it’s OK?
Bette: Of course it’s OK Tina. Hey Val do you think you could start on the mural this week?
Tina: You’re painting a mural?
Tina couldn’t help but think how distant she and Val had become lately. For two women who lived in the same house there was so much that she didn’t know about Val’s comings and goings.
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Glad Valerie called Tina out on things….Tina is stubborn but she is slowly figuring out what she wants but she can’t expect Bette to wait around while she gets her shit together ..But she’s trying to make time for Bette and her friends now and she still needs to kick Eric to the curb as she continues to make excuses for him and why she is with him…
I agree Tina needs to sort out her life…..does she want Eric or Bette?
Hey BAT, so enjoying your story. I love the way you’ve developed your characters. Tina has an edge to her that is rough and insecure and shows off a tendency to be aggressive and unsure of herself. A new tilt in a story about her and Bette is someone we’d all love to have in our corner as a friend, lover or partner. She kind, generous, brilliant, so gorgeous and SO patient with Tina.
Now Tina is finally waking up to parts of her self that really aren’t too pretty. I wouldn’t care to know her in this story with the personality that she has. I loved that Valerie called her on her shit, as someone had to. This ‘open relationship’ stuff really isn’t what its all about as she uses it to hide behind.
She must have been really hurt in some past relationship as she doesn’t seem to trust allowing others in too deep. Well, as they say, all good things must pass and if she isn’t careful, Bette will be gone sooner than she thinks and her chance at a relationship of amazing quality will be blowing in the wind!
Excellent piece of writing my friend! Thank you!
IMO, this was one of the top chapters in this story. Tina is kind of floating around , not anchored to anyone. Tina has to decide if she wants a committed relationship and with whom. If she wants a “just friends w/benefits” type of life so be it but when she is older she will regret losing “the one that got away”. She is very insecure when it comes to her “relationship” w/Eric. It is a soulless relationship only sexual. She may care for him b/c he is relatively nice to her but Bette is all good things plus she is exciting. She would lavish all kinds of attention upon Tina or any partner. It’s just her nature.
I appreciate the frequent and longer postings.
Val summed the whole truth in this conversation with Tina.
Now she has to take a foot in the ass of Erik.
Great chapter.
10 stars.!
Nice Chapter I enjoyed it. You have given Bette such a lovely character here which makes you just want to go and be part of her life. Glad Val has knocked some sense into Tina and I hope she will now kick Eric into touch asap!