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Prodigal Chapter 10
Do you think Tina and Bette are having ***** right now? Danny asked. He was sitting on the floor, leaning back against the couch in the suites living room. The suite had a goddamned living room. Apparently, most high end suites did, not that Danny would have reason to know this. He and Caroline were watching Primal Fear. It was supposed to be a bad movie night, but they couldnt agree on any bad movies that they both found amusing, except Buffy the Vampire Slayer.
Caroline had just put the baby down in a crib in her bedroom. Danny asked his question as she flopped back down on the couch. I hope so.
Danny squirmed a little.
Stop it, Caroline chided.
I dont think its the fact that shes having ***** with a woman. I think its that shes having ***** at all. I mean ew. The look of brotherly disgust on his face was absolutely adorable.
Jesus, Danny, youre thirty-six years old. She smiled wickedly, as she decided to gross her brother out even further. You know. Im not a virgin either.
Danny covered his ears. Shut up!
Bette ran her fingers through Tinas hair. That was She kissed Tinas lips.
So good, Tina finished for her, running the back of her hand up Bettes stomach, causing the muscles there to twitch. Bette took Tinas hand, entwining their fingers between their bodies.
Where did we go, T? How did this happen? Bette asked. They had talked about it, kind of, but by and large the baby had been born and Tina was just home. Almost as if
Tina shook her head, not tonight, baby. I just want to be with you tonight. Ok? Bette nodded. I cant tell you where we went, Bette, but I can tell you where were going.
Where? Bette asked, clearly expecting a serious answer.
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(21 votes, average: 4.48 out of 5)
K
Wow, this was just perfect. Love it.
loved this post-awaiting the next one
I was just thinking about this story.Glad to see a new chapter.Wow you listened to the advice to keep them in bed.
Way too short, can wait for the next chapter
WOW…that was simply great. It was great how Tina just wanted to be with Bette and leave everything else out for now. That was perfect. Please continue.
great update…post soon!
Very nice glad to see a update from you
Oh, wait a minute…come back and finish this scene! That was soooo good! It was really sweet how Bette thanked Tina for having their baby as she traced the scar with her finger…I hope you post soon ’cause I’m missing this story already!
Oh no! It’s over? Already?
I was just settling in, getting comfortable! Me and Bette…
Damn!
Your characters’ voices are so natural, their words flow so easily.
Thank you for posting another chapter.
Ya did just fine!
What? Ok is good to know what Bette asking for permission and now let see how she gonna show it. Please post soon, thanks!
Way to leave a girl hangin’
“…so it doesn’t s*ck” Don’t worry, it doesn’t!
Show her, show her, Bette.
Great story, hoping the next chapter will be up soon.
WHAT!!!! You cant leave as hanging like that, that is sooooo cruel. Now you just have to post ASAP….please
Great chapter. don’t make us wait too long to see how much Bette loves Tina…
“I’m coming Elizabeth, I’m coming. I think this is the big one.” –Sanford and son
I think I just had a mild heart attack when I finished reading this post and there wasn’t another awaiting. Oh Please post soon, I don’t think I can survive the weekend without knowing how Bette showed her love to Tina.
yes, please..lol…great chapter i cant wait for more bring it on nc-17 thanks
Hell yes…show away!! LOL
beautiful chapter… and danny has to grow up and lighten up