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    Prodigal Chapter 22

    Story written on September 28, 2005 by jenny8675309.
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    Why don’t I just show you?

                Tina moaned involuntarily as Bette sucked gently on the pulse point of her neck.  She groaned in frustration.  “There’s something else.”

                Bette stopped.  She pulled away just enough to look at her wife.  Whatever it is, it had to be serious.  “Oh, God, what?”

                Tina closed her eyes tightly.  “I can’t talk to you like this, not about this.  Get up, babe.”

                Now, Bette just looked terrified.  “What’s wrong?”

                “Nothing’s wrong, baby, really,” Tina assured.  “I just”  She sighed shakily, trying to regain control.  “I want to tell you this before anyone else and I don’t know what’s going to happen with it, maybe nothing  But as much as I want you right now, I didn’t want to make love to you before I told you.  It would have looked like I was hiding it.”

                “Ok, now I’m petrified.”

                Tina decided to just dive in.  “Helena offered Caroline a lot of money for her book.  She also offered Carrie complete control over the project.  Caroline is considering it, seriously.  She hasn’t accepted anything yet.  But if and when she does, she wants me to work on it with her.  I told her that I would if she needed me.”

                Bette sat silently for a moment, gathering her thoughts.  “Ok,” she said slowly.  “Um, hmm, I have to say that I’m not exactly surprised nor am I thrilled.  I saw it coming, but I can’t make decisions for Caroline or for you for that matter.  I think Helena has shown herself to be manipulative, duplicitous, and  just plain mean.  I think she definitely has ulterior motives here, but, at the end of the day, I trust you, Tina.  And whatever you decide, I support you.”

                “Wow,” Tina said simply.

                “Wow what?” Bette asked.

                “Wow that was a perfect answer,” Tina laughed.

                “How perfect?”

                “Perfect enough for me to tell Caroline that it’s up to her whether or not she makes a deal with Helena, but if she does I can’t work on her project,” Tina said smiling.

                “Huh?”

                “Everything you just said about Helena is absolutely right.  Why would I invite that into our lives again?  Yes, you trust me.  And I’m so in love with you.”  They smiled at each other.  “And there would be no risk in taking the job, but it would be annoying and something that we constantly had to deal with.  It’s not worth it, no matter how much money she throws at us.”

                Bette nodded.  “If that’s what you want.”

                “It’s one of the things I want,” Tina drawled.

                “What are the others?” Bette asked, smiling slowly.

                Tina swung her leg over Bette’s lap, straddling her.  “Why don’t I just show you?”

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    4. LOL! Yeah, I took my dog for that long delayed run yesterday…he was like a kid in a candy store!
      Bette handled Tina’s situation beautifully. To ask Tina to not work with Carrie on the project would highlight her insecurity with her and Tina’s relationship. But saying how she felt, and then stating that she trusts and supports her, well that’s just the biggest vote of confidence.
      And I so loved how Alice got he rpoint across to Carrie whilst talking to Angie…I could actually hear her making the cooing sounds. Well written!

    5. Yes that was the perfect answer from Bette and the perfect response from Tina. I am glad that Tina realizes the trust and love that Bette has for her, and her answer shows how much she respects and honor Bette. I hope that Carrie is smart enough to realize that she just got her complete family back and cementing and reconnecting her bonds with her sister as well as getting to know Bette and Angie is MUCH MORE important that money. She has the rest of her life to make money. She has already lost time and years with her sister that she will never be able to recover. Great chapter, please continue.

    6. yes i agree it was the perfect answer form bette…..
      BUT… ALICE is the life saver here… her advise was the best to carrie… love this story.. please update soon

    10. Carrie received a perfectly reasoned answer from Alice. She’ll get the same from Tina.

      Sometimes young people insist upon learning from their own experiences. This may still be the case.

    11. That was wonderful and Tina could not have given Bette a better answer. I pray she sticks to it. Caroline has to tell her fellow to stop butting into her business because HelNo is a devil in a red dress.

    14. i hope Carrie do not accept Helenas offer but maybe she is not just smart as Tina and the money can make her change her mind..but the good thing is B&T are sure about want the have now and Helena cant make nothing to disturb them..ok i think she cant..lol..great chappy post soon :o)

    15. That was the perfect answer. And I’m glad Tina isn’t going to work on the project. I just hope Carrie doesn’t take the deal…she really needs to hear and listen to what Al told her. If she does decide to deal with the devil..I hope she doesn’t try to guilt Tina into helping her. Thanks for the chapter.

    16. I know it’s been awhile but could you continue the story? You are a great writer and the story was well delivered.

      I want to see Bette, Tina & Angelica meet everybody!

      I want to know how Carrie & Tina create the movie version of the book!

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