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Prodigal – Chapter 4
Angelica? Is that my nieces name? he asked, beaming with pride.
Yes, Tina smiled. Come on. Im sure Bette took her out back. She led her brother by his hand out into her back yard. Their sister was playing the airplane baby game with Angelica while Bette dangled her feet in the pool, watching them.
Careful, Tina, shes already started and before long shell buy her a pony, Danny warned, seeing his sister.
Carrie sat up, bringing Angelica to her shoulder. Shut up. I did not buy Jessica a pony. I took her to the stables and she got a pony ride, not a whole pony.
Yeah, and then you told her you would buy her a horse next year, Danny accused. How do I know this? Because it is all my daughter will talk about.
Carrie smiled sheepishly. So Im a little overeager.
They laughed at her. I dont know where the ***** we would keep a pony. So lets try to refrain from making those promises to Angelica, Bette said, pulling her feet out of the pool.
I would pay to stable it for you. I cant just give you a horse and expect you to keep it up. That would just be tacky, Carrie explained.
How considerate, Tina answered, shaking her head. Come on. Dinner, you two.
Carrie stood and turned to her brother. Dan, this is your niece, Angelica. She offered the baby to him and he took her gently into his arms.
Hi, little girl, he said. Youre gorgeous. His brow furrowed and he chuckled to himself. And somehow you look just like both of your mommies.
Ah, about that, Tina began, because Bette is biracial we decided to use an African American donor. Tina waited for their reaction.
Caroline and Danny looked at each other and then back at Tina. Uh, that seems to make sense, Danny said. You wanted her to reflect you and Bette. She is your baby.
Tina looked dumbfounded at Bette, who just shrugged with a smile. Danny, were going to put that on the long list of things youve said in the past fifteen minutes that I never in a million years thought you would say, Tina said.
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(13 votes, average: 4.38 out of 5)
Excellent, nicely written, beautiful job. Anxiously waiting your next post. Hopefully it’ll be soon.
I like your story, but I feel it’s slightly unrealistic that Tina and her brother started joking almost immediately… I wouldve expected some awkwardness. Unleeeeeeees.. you’ve got some plot twist coming up where their secretly evil intentions are revealed? :o
mercury – next chapter will flesh it out more – all is not yet necessarily forgiven. thank you :)
That went easy. Will the angst and drama arrive soon? Maybe with their parents.
Yep, another nice chapter. All seems to be going well..a little too well! Are you gonna give us an angst free story?
Good update.The joking seemed too soon. I think Bette and Tina need to reconnect in evey way.
niceee… hope the next chapter is comin soon!
I usually avoid spoiler-fic, but I’m quite enjoying this. Well done.
(And I was wondering if the idea of who was the birth mother would ever come up.)
Good chapter. This is nice and happy but this way will be forever. Post soon, thanks!
love this story… and now they are back together… so let aunt carol babysit and give bette and tine some alone time…
This was a wonderful chapter. Well done.