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Provocations Linger- Chapter 10
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Previously on “Provocations Linger”…
As they drew closer to Peggy’s home the neighborhood became progressively more impressive.
Commerce Street was lined with knotted old trees and lovely brownstones and offered a quiet respite from the bars, cafés and jazz clubs surrounding it.
“Here we are.” Sam stopped at an address as beautiful as they expected it to be.
“Do you have a key?” Tina asked, looking back at Bette.
“Tina, it’s Peggy Peabody.” Bette raised her eyes expectantly.
“And?”
“And it’s staffed. She keeps a cook and a housekeeper available at all times.” Bette smiled, rolling her eyes and shrugging.
“Of course.” Tina rolled her eyes in return.
Stepping from the Jeep Bette pulled out her hanging bag and laptop and glanced a bit nervously back at the women watching her.
“So, I really appreciate the lift,” she said awkwardly. She wasn’t sure what was appropriate here.
Tessa climbed over and got out of the truck, surprising Bette with a hug. “I hope we’re going to see you later. These guys are working half the time, so call me if you want some company.” She handed Bette a card.
Bette looked at her surprised but recovered with a charming smile. “Thanks. I’m not sure I’ll have time, but that sounds lovely.”
Tina got out of the Jeep as well.
“Good luck with your meeting,” she said softly.
“Thanks, T-“ Bette mumbled, moving closer to Tina without actually touching her. Making eye contact the blonde and brunette quickly kissed before Bette picked up her bag and briefcase. “You have my cell?” she asked Tina.
“Yeah. I have it,” Tina nodded, her stomach in knots.
Bette glanced towards Sam who was watching all of this with a bemused look on her face.
“Thanks, Sam. It was nice to meet you,” Bette gave a small wave. She was grateful that Sam didn’t hop out and hug her too.
“I’m betting that’s not how you’ll describe it to Alice,” Sam joked.
Bette smiled with her. “Maybe not ‘nice,’” she admitted. “How about ‘surreal?’ Anyway, thank you,” she smiled again.
“Bye ladies.” Bette gave Tessa and then Tina one final look before heading up the walkway to Peggy’s.
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The short drive to Sam’s condo was quiet. Sam could tell that Tina had been thrown by running into her ex and then flying across country with her. She was trying to give Tina some space to collect her thoughts. Tessa meanwhile was watching Tina’s expressions through the rearview mirror and drawing her own conclusions.
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Woo hoo, you’re back!!! I was actually just rereading this story the other day & thinking about sending you a PM to bug you about an update….since that is no longer necessary, I will say loved the interaction between B and Hels…I grew to like Helena on the show & after meeting RS at L5, love her even more, so it’s nice when she’s likable in FF….glad to see that B picked up on the “..finally back together” comment as well….can’t wait to see if this quick business meeting weekend turns into something more…..Thx SO much for the great update and PPVS!!!!
Yes, Yes, Yes!!! I knew if I kept bugging you long enough you’d eventually break down and continue the story. Huzzah! So, I guess that means I must offer a quid pro quo — good thing I have been diligently writing. So…what can I say? This chapter was such a wonderful continuation of your earlier work. I loved the tension between Sam and Bette; it was palpable. You could feel the knots forming in poor Sam’s stomach. Tess was a riot for coming onto Bette with Tina in the car. The whole scene with Helena will lead to endless obsessions for Bette — I hope she’s able to concentrate on her lunch meeting. As I posted in my last comment – Bette is so NOT leaving NY within 24 hours — at least I hope she doesn’t. Please keep writing — it’s just too good!
I am stunned. Gobsmacked. I was so shocked that I had to check that I hadn’t somehow wound up on an old page. It’s so thrilling that you’ve brought your story back. I am really looking forward to how you will weave future “coincidences.” I can’t wait. Please sit down and type right now. No bathroom breaks until the next chapter is posted. (Or, if being demanding is backfiring, how about [imagine my meek voice] please, when you maybe could spare a little time, if you maybe write another chapter, but as long as it takes will be okay). Thanks for returning.
Wow! Welcome back. I’d hoped that this story would continue. Looking forward to the continuation.
great to see this story back…i hope your computer won’t give you any problems so we can get more soon
Wow! Welcome back! Can’t wait for you to continue this! PPS
OMFG!I don’t know what’s more intriguing – Helena and Bette or the endless possibility of Helena’s backstory with Tina. I really liked Helena and the way Rachel S. developed her.Delighted you’re doing this!
OMG! i can’t believe there is an update on this story. I’m really looking forward to know what is going to happen.
I’m really happy to see this story continue!
I’m reading this story for the first time and it’s excellent. I’m addicted already!Please don’t wait too long before posting the next chapter….
Well Zuzu, I had all but given up on getting any more updates to this story, when all of a sudden what should appear in front of my wondering eyes….but an update from Zuzu. Well as soon as I picked myself up off the floor, I devoured the chapter. It was excellent! I loved this story and the way you explored their reaction to that night so…Please…do you think we can we get another update before next year
welcome back…i missed you. cant wait to read more.
yes a serious double take when I saw this ..glad you are back.
I remember this story. Tina’s Bette, now I like the sound that those two names make together.
I remember this story! Excellent update! The techie in me reminds you all, “Backup, backup, backup your data early and often!”
Oh man! Welcome back. I have missed this story. Thank you so much for posting and I can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you again :)
OMFG – how good is this story?????!!! Just laid in bed on a saturday morn and read it all, soooo glad you’ve picked it back up! this has gone straight to the top of my “stories to look out for” pps zuzu it’s brilliant!
You’re back! I’ll be waiting on the backstory with Helena and Tina, and certainly on more interaction with Bette and Tina. Thanks for continuing. Cheers
What a treat to see you back! Can’t wait to see where you’re taking us. Loved Helena’s comment about “Tina’s Bette”.
whats going here? helena being nice to Bette?