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Provocations Linger- Chapter 12
“What are you up to Helena? You think if I go as your date Tina will be jealous?” Bette shook her head.
Helena laughed. “I hardly think so Bette. Tina would never be jealous of you and I. She’d know better.”
Bette raised her eyebrows at the telephone.
“Darling, not to insult you, but Tina knows well and certain that we’d both dump the other for her in a New York minute.”
Bette smiled, she had to agree.
“No. It has to be someone else,” the Brit concluded.
It was Bette’s turn to laugh. For the life of her she couldn’t figure out why Tina’s ex girlfriend was trying to help her reconcile with Tina, but she wasn’t going to object to a little help.
“Any suggestions?” she grinned.
“How about the friend? The one who asked you out?”
“She didn’t ask me out, Helena. She invited me for drinks because Tina and Sam were working. You and I already had plans for dinner so I suggested tonight instead. It’s not a date.”
Helena smiled.
“Uh huh.”
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Westin Hotel at Time Square
Only hours after talking with Helena Bette was chagrined to find herself clad in a borrowed Chanel suit, sunglasses and rather large hat. She was lurking outside the Westin watching what was obviously the entrance to the event. A stream of outrageously attired men and women were making their way inside.
The curator was so preoccupied with not being seen that she almost missed Tina. It was the familiar laugh that caught her attention.
“Sweet Jesus,” she gasped, once she actually focused on Tina. Her ex wife was stopping traffic in an extremely low backed, black sheath. Bette observed that her neckline plunged almost as low when she turned toward a man trying to gain her attention.
Bette gaped, unable to take her eyes off the producer. Tina looked as beautiful as any model. Her hair was swept up showing off her long neck and smooth shoulders. The dress showcased Tina’s toned arms, back and posterior. A simple necklace rested at the top of her cleavage. Bette both wanted to molest her and take her a robe.
Preoccupied with Tina, Bette missed Sam who was following behind the Producer. Sam however, did not miss Bette, or her expression. It would be hard to dismiss a look like that as mere ‘appreciation’.
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This is such a good story. I always look for the updates. Thanks for posting as you can – I am always pleased to see a new post when you have time to write.
How to answer that? And is Tina ready for that kind of exclusivity with Sam? I don’t think she is… The party at Fire Island is going to be interesting, isn’t it? Post soon, Zuzu. Thanks
missed this story and im loving the pace of it too, please don’t take as long to post the next chapter!!
You have too much talent not to post more frequently but I know life gets in the way. What an awesome chapter w/spot on dialogue.
Tina under pressure that’s not something I would want to see if I were Sam. I think she will explode and Sam will be the one in small pieces. PPS
Glad you’re writing here again since I also read until 3 a. m. and love this story.
Wow, great chapter. I love this story. I wonder how Tina will answer Sam’s question. Please update soon!
Great chapter! I love your Helena, she’s such fun and a good friend. Nudging Bette to see Tina in her work element and in a different light was perfect. I like Sam, here and in the series. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Zuzu where have you bee? So happy to see an update to this story. Please don’t stay away too long again.
Thanks for continuing with your story, I had to re-read the previous chapters just now to remind me how wonderful your story is. I hope you continue….
Oh Sam I don’t think Tina can make that promise to you..
WOW!Complex, intense, poignant, funny, sad, etcetc. Beautifully paced. As a diehard TiBetter u know where I stand. I will be looking 4ward to the next chapter. I understand about 3 a.mers!!! Mine is a Youtube music addiction. Thank u. This is good.
I’d lost track of this story so I had to catch up with it. Your writing is awesome. I hope you please us with a new chapter soon!
first of all, good to see you bacl…second: why is Sam so annoying? and i’m also wondering, why everyone else sees what B&T don’t? time for them to talk maybe LOL
thats it sam… you better be worried… bette is back and tine will be going with her… nice try sam… your only worried now because bette is in town, if she wasn’t this never would of came up and please tina is not stupid.. she knows this as well.. love this… pps
Ahhhh Zuzu…I’ve been waiting for an update to this story. This is sooo good. Don’t be too long posting the next one…I’m dying to know what happens next!
It seems everyone is playing matchmaker and Sam is beginning to feel the uncertain ground. Hopefully Fire Island will bring some clarity to the “blind” women and get them talking.
Ohhhhh, I love, love, love this story. I read the whole thing thru this morning. Please post soon!!!
Oh boy, Sam just stepped backwards into her own stuff. Tina will never agree to that and I think Sam knows it. Let’s see what happens next.
I love this story and I love your superb writing
Glad that you are back. Maybe this is a good time for Tina to move onto another person like Bette. I have a feeling that some feathers are going to be ruffled by the end of the night.
This was good. I will have to go back and read the other 11 chapters.
Thank you for updating. I have so missed this story. Great update – don’t take to long please to post again :) Can’t wait to read what happens next!
wow trouble on the way lol!