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Provocations Linger- Chapter 15
Previously on “Provocations Linger….”
“Tina, darling! A little birdie told me you’d be here tonight.” The Brit smiled back just as warmly as she reached for a hug.
Tina laughed into Helena’s ear. “A little birdie, eh? Don’t you get too cozy with that birdie, Helena,” she warned. Helena knew the blonde was kidding but also a little worried.
“Dear heart, you know you have my undying loyalty. I have only your best interests at heart. You have nothing to worry about.” Helena flashed Tina her most spectacular smile.
Tina smirked at her, knowing Helena knew very well she had a killer smile. Tina’s heart skipped accordingly on autopilot.
“Why is it when you tell me I have nothing to worry about, I start to worry?” the blonde teased.
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Helena’s Penthouse Suite
Sunday 12:30pm
Helena was hanging up her gown for the evening when she heard a light knock at the door. A glance at her watch told her it was probably Bette arriving.
“Who is it?” she called in a sing-songy voice opening the door.
Sure enough, there stood Bette Porter, along with a bellhop carrying her hanging bag and a small overnight piece as well. Bette was looking mildly amused.
The still slightly hung over brunette drifted past Helena into the Penthouse suite. She walked over to the windows, and took in the expansive view offered by a towering glass wall.
“Jesus,” she muttered. Turning to her hostess, she shook her head.
“If anyone had tried to tell me on Thursday that I’d be on Fire Island on Sunday staying in a Penthouse Suite with Tina’s ex lover, who is Peggy Peabody’s daughter, mind you…. I would have assured them they were out of their fucking mind.’
“If they’d then tried to add to that tidbit that Tina, Tina Kennard, would be going to the same party with her current lover I’d have… pfffttt… I can’t even imagine what I’d have said.”
Helena handed the porter a tip, excusing him after he’d hung Bette’s overnight bag in the bedroom indicated by the Brit. Smiling at Bette’s hello, she joined her on the balcony.
“While you’re speculating add to that list that Tina and Sam are staying here as well,” Helena smiled sweetly. “May I offer you a drink?”
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(59 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
How naughty of you to keep us hanging here…I am thinking Sam and tina are done and also Now tina is going to be very jealous thinking Bette and helena are a duo having fun…….PPS
Speechless. PPS
i bet helena called tina to the room… loving this… oh and sam… take care… you will be alone soon… bette is in the house… bring it on…
Loving the story. Your dialogue is pot on and so are the transitions in between. The dialogue is so nuanced w/their individual style and speech patterns. Please keep up this pace of frequent posts.
Oh…love it! And Helena’s comment – I’ms sure she planned this too. Can’t wait for more.
Whoops! Well maybe seeing Bette with Helena might do the trick! *wicked cool!* Thanks for the story loving it so far. I like Helena in this story too ;)
This just keeps getting better and better! Hmm..I wonder what Sam will have to say about Bette being there. Tina is going to be flanked by her exes. Sam should be glad that Tina stays friends with her exes..after all, it’s highly likely that she’s going to be one (ex) and sooner rather than later. LOL! Love your story Zuzu!
hahaha, Helena’s last line was hilarious. I look forward to this tory every time I check the site.
such a tease…is there going to be more misunderstanding, more drama or with B&T talk and find another way to get romantic? post soon
doing an awesome job with the updating..I absolutely adore Helena in this story..
Perfect last line. I love your Helena! Three posts and I’m still craving more… maybe your excited state will translate into additional posts… Can’t wait for the dinner!
Well, they could just cut to the chase and skip the formalities, the formal dress and the formal dinner. Poor Sam, I don’t think she has a chance.
Sooo good! What a treat to have three posts on this so very good story. I look forward to the unfolding of the evening on Fire Island. Thanks for writing.
Love Helena, love Sam, but really really love Bette and Tina!
hahahaha Tina will think that Bette and Helena had a good time just beforeher arrival lol. Very funny. PPVS
Oh, this doesn’t bode well for Bette earning Tina’s trust, does it? Or… does it? Truth is stranger than fiction, as it’s been said. Tina couldn’t believe that Bette’s taken up with her host (and Tina’s ex) so gauchely, could she? I love the ins and outs this story takes. Thanks, Zuzu. :)
Uh oh, Bette has some explaining to do…..I don’t think Tina is going to stick around long enough to hear it though.
Briliant update. Oh dear! Is Tina going to think that Helena and Bette have something going on? This is getting absolutely interesting :). Thank you!
I take it Helena’s plan went a little haywire. Now what is going to happen? All I would like to see is Bette and Tina making progress and just not in the friendship sense.
AW SHUCKS…bETTE ALL NAKED UNDER THE ROBE AND IN HELENA’S ROOM; SO MUCH FOR NOT MAKING T JEALOUS. LOL. MIND U THE WAY SHE IS TREATING SAM-she needs a wake up call! PLZ CONTINUE…
Hahahaha….I love this Helena…in cahoots with Bette to get Tina back. I can’t guess which way that you’ll go with this…there are more than a couple of possible outcomes. I can’t wait for your next installment to see which one you chose.
loved the update. i hope the past frequent updates will not stop you from updating again very soon. love your story!!!
OK!God, or rather, Zuzu, this is delicious!
That was awesome. Great update as usual. Tina’s gonna freak out thinking there’s something going on with Bette & Helena. Btw, I adore Helena in this story, i want her for myself :)
First, an apology: I’ve been meaning to comment on this story and have no excuse as to why I haven’t. I’ve been enjoying it all along and was happy to see that you came back to it. I also want to say thank you for your note the other day mentioning me in such esteemed company! I am trying to find time to write and will try not to disappoint! I look forward to reading more of this story–thanks! Lin
:) loving the story.
This is so funny and love it!