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Pull the Trigger-4
The man put his hand on my shoulder but I shrugged it off and walked out of the old church, kicking the door open and then slamming it shut.
This time round the anger wasn’t going away and I could still feel it heat up my body as I stormed into Heat once again, eyes scanning for a girl.
Any girl.
I didn’t like what I saw and it took me a while to realize it was because none of them were the person I wanted them to be.
None of them were Carmen.
“This is fucken insane” I told myself.
I went over to the bar and waved Daniel over,
“Have you heard of or know anything about Carmen” I said, straight to the point.
“That Latina can really shake her ass” he grinned in return,
“Where can I find her?”
“She’s a regular but I don’t know much about her, though she always comes with a friend. In fact, her friend’s still here” he pointed to a curvy redhead sitting near the corner with a blonde in her arms.
“I owe you one” I nodded my head at him before walking away.
I stood in front of Carmen’s friend whilst she had her fun with the blonde before she finally noticed me.
“What can I do for you?” she asked, her eyes never left the girl in her lap.
“I want to see Carmen, do you know where she is” I stated.
She finally looked at me at the mention of her friend’s name.
“What do you need her for?”
She was playing with me I could tell.
“You don’t need to know, I just want to see her” I repeated firmly.
“Then gimme your name” she commanded.
“…Shane”
“You’re Shane?” she asked, slightly surprised.
I stared at her, waiting for her reply when she shook her head and turned her attention back to the girl. I tapped my foot impatiently and after waiting for 15 minutes I was about to walk away when she gave me the address.
I realized that her apartment wasn’t even 10 minutes away and rushed out of the club, eyeing Carmen’s friend once more before stepping out. I pulled out onto the road and narrowed my eyes.
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(12 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
Well I thought previous chapters had been full of action but clearly I was wrong. THAT was action. ;)
in love with this story. best chapter so far!
i just read all 4 chapters today!! it’s fucken awesome!!
ooooo ssshhiittt this was really hottttt… but i dont want carmen to be like little miss innocent i want bad carmen.. but later turning good lol
ooooo ssshhiittt this was really hottttt… but i dont want carmen to be like little miss innocent i want bad carmen.. but later turning good lol
aah where’s the update?? really wanna see what’s gonna happen next
It’s really awesome!!!!I can’t wait for when Shane realizes Carmen is blood of revenge.Thanks and PPS~
i was so happy to see both chapters 3&4…i love the way that you write cant wait to read more