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Purple Coach – Chapter 5
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Neither woman could believe how right it felt. For her part, it was like a dam had been released within Alice. She started crying softly and held tight to Dana.
Dana knew she had a protective streak in her. It was strongest with her son, but, it also came out with her family and friends. She was amazed that this woman so quickly triggered it. Alice didn’t know it at the time, but, at that moment Dana made a vow to always be there for her.
Dana held and rocked Alice until the crying subsided. On some level, Alice thought she should be embarrassed over her outburst, but, she didn’t. Dana made her feel safe. They broke apart as the timer sounded that the cupcakes were ready.
“You OK?” Dana asked quietly. She knew Alice wasn’t, but, it seemed like the right thing to ask.
“Yeah. Sorry about that. It hits me sometimes.”
“No problem.” Dana said with a soft smile as she handed Alice a tissue to brush away the remaining tears. “Let’s check on those cupcakes.”
Alice was grateful for the change of subject. She hadn’t broken down like that in a while. She wondered again what it was about Dana that made her so comfortable.
There was a moment of alarm when Alice saw Dana open the oven and start to reach in with her bare hands. Alice crossed quickly to her and pulled Dana back. They both felt a shock that had little to do with the situation at hand. Their eyes met and held for several heartbeats.
“The pan is going to be very hot.” Alice said huskily. It took Dana a moment for her mind to engage. When it did, she blushed and said “Duh” as she got an over mitt out of the drawer and extracted the cupcakes.
The cupcakes turned out perfectly and Alice, Dana and the boys had fun frosting and decorating them. Although at times it seemed that more frosting got in the boys than on the cupcakes. There was lots of laughter and Dana was happy to bring a smile to the blonde’s face.
Alex was thrilled with how the cupcakes turned out and gave both his mom and Alice big hugs before running off to the play room once again with Daniel.
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BAHAHAHA!!! Great stuff…dont touch its hot, duh. The whole closeness thing…so many great parts. Awesome as always and you know it. Mucho Grande ThankO =] And i got my passport taken away and got evicted…boo
Children makes the world go arounf like a grease axel. Love the goofy Dana and the Alice that is so settle it seems, thanks Love stories with children in them. Love little boys
Great update MG, this story is cute and glad the boys play well together, can’t wait for Al and Dana to PLAY well together too hehehehe Thanks MG for the smiles! PPS
Cleavage checking at the oven, nice work Dana! Maybe Alice and Dana can go swimming together and if they forget bathing suits then so be it… lol my not so subtle innuendos are tried I know, I heart this cute story, please continue so I can make more lame remarks :)
Great update! Sad about Alice and her husband but glad Dana was there when she needed someone. Love them checking each other out in the kitchen. That attraction is always there no matter what. I loved the little glimpse of jealous Dana. Hope I get to see more of that. Can’t wait for your next post.
Weeeeeeeeeeeeee. Loved the update. Goose you rock my socks. And Yes the writing is going and It’s going to be HOT. anyway. I loved the little bit of jealous Dana.
Nice work MaGoose!Loving the story – keep it coming.
Wow now they are both single! But I am sorry that Alice’s husband had passed away though. Great update, can’t wait how Dana reacts when she meet Shane at the practice. Maybe a little bit of jealousy again? I like Dana being jealous,lol….Thanks and PPS! And nice to talk to you.