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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 14
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“Why don’t you come up here and let me tell you…” Helena repeated huskily, running her eyes downwards over Bette’s naked body…
“Hmmm…so you’re not sure?” Bette asked in mock confusion, bending her head to kiss Helena’s clit again with an even deeper lick of her tongue…stroking up and down twice this time…then letting her tongue tremble against it before lifting away and looking up again…
“Alright…you weren’t bad…” Helena gasped…conscious of her desire rapidly and powerfully reawakening…
“I wasn’t bad?!” Bette interrupted seriously and she hungrily bent her head to kiss Helena’s clit even more deeply…kissing and sucking it ardently at the same time with her tongue…teasing it…flicking lovingly against it again and again, up and down, up and down…flicking…then slower…slowing down…lifting her head to look up at Helena once more…
Helena moaned in protest when she felt Bette’s hot tongue move away and looked down achingly into Bette’s captivating eyes…
“You weren’t bad…you were fucking amazing darling…” Helena gasped, her eyes pleading with Bette to resume…
Bette’s dark eyes were so intense, they were so fucking beautiful when she was determined…
Why was it that she had never noticed them before?
She couldn’t believe that of all the beautiful women in the world that she’d been attracted to in the past that Bette was the one person she least expected would be lying here like this between her legs…
Again, it felt surreal…excitingly surreal…God, she was so beautiful…she wanted her so badly…
“Wow…hmmm…I wonder if you’re sure though…” Bette smiled and kissed the warmth between her legs again…covering it’s entirety with her mouth and tapping up and down against it tenderly with her hot tongue…licking and kissing it…from bottom to top to bottom to top, gently pushing inwards on the way down to the bottom…long strokes…up and down…then sweetly building momentum with short teasing flicks…up and down…then tantalizingly slowing down to a stop again…
“Yessss! I’m sure…” Helena gasped breathlessly, arching in protest against Bette’s unmoving fingers still inside of her… “Please…please don’t stop!”
Bette could feel Helena’s hot walls sucking hungrily on her fingers and her free hand brushed upwards over Helena’s stomach to her breast and nipple…
“But you weren’t so sure just now…” Bette reprimanded light-heartedly, moving her fingers further into Helena and fucking them gently up and down…
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WOW Neshsa, If you struggled writing this chapter, then I can’t wait to read a chapter that you don’t struggle with! I loved the last line of the chapter, “WHat the hell is this Helena ? ” Can’t wait to see what Bette’s talking about. Post soon.
Well done Nesha. Struggle on with your crappy writing skills. Please post soon
What, what’s on the paper? Nesha – i can’t wait long to find out so you need to post sooner rather than later. And right now i don’t know who i’d rather be more Bette or Helena–they are both getting f***ed by a hottie so i guess i’ll just flip a coin.
Just catching up….These last two chapter were HOT, HOT, and HOT……I can barely type….(sigh) Awaiting next chapter.
Good God woman, you cant leave it there!!!!!!!!!!! Just had a major catch up sesh with the story and I have to say the writing and story are great. Got a bit worried when you didnt post for a while but it was so worth the wait. Cant wait for the next chapter to the only non-Danish story I read (feel honoured :-) haha)
Great chapter Nesha =)
yes, what the hell is this helena !!? great chapter, can’t wait for the next one !
hmmm…one thing i don’t get..what was it you said about having crappy writing skills? hehehheh Nesha! this IS great and hot and i think you write B and H lovin’ very well indeed! can’t wait to find out what’s in that letter! post soon ok? thanks!
And there she has us hanging again. Damn girl I’m cursing you right now. Pandsy is the queen of NC-17 but you sure are the queen of cliffhangers LOL.Good writing Nesh don’t you ever worry about those skils girl because you are good, damn good OK
Good god Nesha, what was that, I took a break after reading this chapter for about 15 minutes and my body is still trembling. You struggled with this chapter babe, well I know excactly what you mean, I’m struggling too. Once again we have a huge cliffhanger. One word this chapter was awesome, thanks for giving me this feeling.
I don’t understand what you mean by crappy writing skills. I thought this was awesome. Oh my god…I was sweating reading it. Please post and let us know what Bette saw. You can’t just leave us hanging like that….that’s the part that’s crappy…lol
Wow, if this was struggling, you can struggle everyday!! That was incredible. Thank you.OK, so whats with the note???? God, I hate (and love) cliffhangers.
if that was choppy, please bring on smooth because this was very, very, very hot, hot, hot!!! looking forward to the next post.
Great Chapter Nesha. Thank you PPS
Great chapter, What has Helena done now and whats in the note. Is Tina and Bette room mate thanks
yeah helena what the hell is that?!?!?!?! Nesha you gotta post soon now. this cliff hanger is unbearable : )i love the way the story is going though
*falls out of chair**retracts jaw*need…more….!! I knew I shouldn’t have read so fast =
Nesha if this is what happens when you struggle to write a chapter then spank my ass and call me charlie hellooo good work girl. u said it would b bad but its very very good. good suspense and cliffhanger. keep up the powerful writing.
what….something no good happened? come on…they just a step forward…don’t make them step back…please……and u really good at wrote these NC-17 stuff…i feel i am on fire….and in this summer season….water seems doesn’t cold enough :(
Just read the last few chapters and all i can say is amazing!! You know if you did struggle with this chapyter, it really didn’t show, do bloody hot and you write our girls so well! Can not wait for more!!